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Have just finished Chapter 10 (11?) and though I am not sure whether this story is meant by pinkwhirlwind to end here, it felt like a good place to end it to me, with a lot unspoken and yet to do. I have loved this story from the beginning, and have had the feeling I was reading some religious allegory, like 'Narnia'. There is a lot of emotion in this story, poetic and well developed. I love the way you see and write this pairing. There is a lot of spiritual reference in the way these two have come together, their backgrounds, and their potential. You have mined, though not mined out, this angle/take on the relationship between a black angel and a white demon. The writing flows, rising, surging, babbling and peaceful as the waters of life. The whole story has a mythic, poetic feel to it. I was engaged from the start, and feel priviledged to have read it. Beautiful!

Hey, this is really cool! ^_^ Good writing, very very cool and amazingly original. Go you!

Wow, that was really fabulous! At first i was wanting them to leave Hell somehow together, but hey, as long as they\'re together, who cares? Oh yeah, there is the ma of of that impending war, isn\'t there? Hmm, very good so far, and I really like the image of Aya with fiery ear tails...(yes, I know, he\'s Ran now, but whatever)...

I really am enjoying this fic. Your summary doesn\'t do it justice though. I am constantly awaiting your updates to see what will happen next. I really love how you got the fantasy aspects in there and keeping it all modern day. Anyways great fic.