rate_review Reviews

That was not a lemon you FOOL!!! damn you for making me anticipate certain *cough* things...

I heart Kenshin and I heart Sano (kind of) and the image of Kenshin in tight leather pants will be forever imprinted upon my mind. Nice descriptions, though you left out the key part of a yaoi (and that\'s the sex!) But oh well. I liked it anyway. Happy Flower Seal of Approval for you! *slaps sticker on story* ^-^x

As much as I thank you for the lovely image of Kenshin in leather pants. I must be honest here, I mean no malice towards you personally, it\'s just that it really is irritating to read a story written in English, to cin sin several different phrases in Japanese. for those of us who don\'t automatically know the meaning of those phrases and neededing to skip them, breaks the flow of the story. Your story here was short so it wasn\'t as much of an issue to go from the phrases to the translations you provided at the end. As with larger stories, it becomes a large chore and one I don\'t want to do, so I just stop reading all together. I completely realize these is your story and you can write what you want, I am just offering what this reader thinks.
Mistletoe

Well I am a huge Kenshin fan and never had I dreamed of seeing Kenshin in LEATHER pants. Thank you for a very DELIGHTFUL image!
~bows~ You are to kind...
Until next time>>>Hell Bound
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re-re-review? He-he-he .. ... I\'m too busy laughing.

Cute. I loved it!

Tee hee, that was just plain cute. Pointless but funny none the less, I liked it. ::Sighs:: Unfortuatly I\'m now left with a wonderful mental image of Kenshin in Tight leather pants.....:: le purrr:: ^^

Good job!

Mystic

O comeone I was hoping for some real S&M, not a sano and kenshin hentai!