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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Very very good!^_^
To think i used to read fanfiction.net, after readingt.. t..
I so found my new reading place. Heh heh
I liked it, the way you made darshuu act, so sly and confident, very much like his real character, which is good since its a bit odd when chars act OCC.
AS for kall-su, can\'t say i don\'t know much about him but whoo...
Darshuu taking him like that and er..the other way around...
Very nice. I like it, by all means keep it up.
Maybe a treesome in there later on? hee hee..
No but really, this was very intertaining. ^^
Very very good!^_^
To think i used to read fanfiction.net, after readingt.. t..
I so found my new reading place. Heh heh
I liked it, the way you made darshuu act, so sly and confident, very much like his real character, which is good since its a bit odd when chars act OCC.
AS for kall-su, can\'t say i don\'t know much about him but whoo...
Darshuu taking him like that and er..the other way around...
Very nice. I like it, by all means keep it up.
Maybe a treesome in there later on? hee hee..
No but really, this was very intertaining. ^^
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea, Dark Schneider! I liked this story a lot. You don\'t get many Bastard!! fanfics, especially not with Kall-Su with Darsh. Anyway, yes, your grammer is not the best, but it doesn\'t pull the reader too far from the story itself. Where should be were (as in \'I thought we were going?\'), and week should be weak, but other than thatm it\'s nothing major. I wish I could be your editor, as well as anyone else\'s, but my work and school keeps me busy. Gomen on that.
I think Arshes Nei should come back, should you decide to continue this. I hope you do, by the way. Her character would thicken the plot. ^_^ Who knows, maybe you could have it so that Arshes comes back annoucing her crush on Kall-Su! Dun-dun-dun!! Good luck on your writing and whatever else you do in life.
--Just some comments from one author to another. Tana-san.
I think Arshes Nei should come back, should you decide to continue this. I hope you do, by the way. Her character would thicken the plot. ^_^ Who knows, maybe you could have it so that Arshes comes back annoucing her crush on Kall-Su! Dun-dun-dun!! Good luck on your writing and whatever else you do in life.
--Just some comments from one author to another. Tana-san.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
._. I never thought Id see the day....a halfway decent kal su/ darsch fic!
you may wantto work on punctuation though.....
you may wantto work on punctuation though.....
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...MORE MORE MORE!!! There should
be more Bastard fics....Darsh is like a flowing
rivf sef sexual magnatism, and I long to
take a drink...Write more
be more Bastard fics....Darsh is like a flowing
rivf sef sexual magnatism, and I long to
take a drink...Write more
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good! I\'m glad to see Bastard finaly make it to Adult fanfiction.net. Keep up the good work and may I request a Gara/Arshes fic? Just to give you an idea.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just one word.... WOW. That was... Ahem... Yeah. Breathing, breathing\'s good. Hehe that was good. DS an Kall... Sigh.
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! *droooolllllssss* **grabs yohji and dashes into bathroom** Ahem, sorry. Anyways, can we say uhm damn sexy! You go girl, I love everything you write!
- WG
- WG