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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first line was a very good lead in, it did its job on me! Thank you for sharing this. ^_^
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For your first yaoi fic it was pretty good. One day I would like to write one of my own. Keep up the good work and do your best! HARUXYUKI forever!!!!!!!!!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shaking head* Shigure, you take perversion to new levels! Since if you get caught, Black Haru WILL KILL you! And you know it! *muses* How come Aya thoguht it was Shigure that took Yuki's viriginity? Since we all know that Yuki wouldn't go near Shigure within 10 mile!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! That\'s was HOT...
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, you did good. I love love love Haru x Yuki, too. The ending was funny<3 I could totally see Shigure giggling w/ that phone, rofl.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU GO GURE-SAN!!! hmm...nice..
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was like.. the best Haru/Yuki PWP ever!! ^______^
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* whoot! Great smut ^^ *bows* Good job! Wrtie more! Ah, please ^^;;;
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo!!!! i wanna see a story fer when ayame comes over ta be proven too! >XoD behold me prevertion!!! lol ^.^; no really, its really good and the endings funny. if that were ever to happen in the actual anime (man t fuc fucking rock! lol) then ya can so see shigure and ayame acting liek that, lol!!!
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September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
X3 Definately a PWP, but QUITE a sexy lemon there! Very very nice . . . Ironically, I\'ve never read a yaoi fic where the seme inserted four fingers. ^^\' Makes it seem like Haru was VERY well-endowed!