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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it! XD one thing though, maybe see if you can fix the lines, it's bothering me... its like, a line, then 1/2 then a line, then 1/2 and that makes it hard to read for me... >.<
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It could use more detail.. but it was ok.. it could be better
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good indeed, has it all, mabey right another chapter to this or even a sequil lol, very nice indeed
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The end was a little unexpected, but still, a good story.
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha awwww just a little lol, this was very good poor Tomoyo-Chan ^_^ Oh well i guess its best to stary friends than not have her at all.