rate_review Reviews

Such a cool piece, I like the way you work off the manga
the characters do feel like they would act the way they do in your story
I mean I can visualize the interaction happening just as you describe it.

Please update soon!

I\'m liking this fic so far and I do look forward to more. You really kept them both in character.
My only gripe is that some weird clusters of letters pop up, like \"amoillaillagers\" in the sentence, \"Recounts of the witnessed battle...\" and \"hcouncounted\" in the sentence, \"One of the pirates...\" in the first chapter. There are quite a few more, and while the fic is still understandable, it disrupts the flow of the story a bit and the sort of lull a reader goes into when reading. Don\'t worry, they\'re easy to spot and they\'re not _that_ numerous.

aaarrrgh!!!whats up with the cliff hanger!?!pls update really soon!!!can\'t wait to know whats next!!!^_^ see ya soon!!!

Great job! I hope you update soon! I can\'t wait to see more of this story.

No, I think Luffy (pronounced Loofee according to Shonen Jump) stayed perfectly in character. Of course, you\'re talking to someone who\'s only sup tup to issue #18 in Shonen Jump\'s sections of One Piece. In other words, I\'m only halfway through the Usopp saga...-_-\' I\'ve never even SEEN the anime...at all...ever. Anyways, I really like this fanfic. Could you please e-mail me once you update...please?

Nice one! cant wait for the next chapter so pls try to get it up ASAP.

This fic is so sweet! I think it fits these two nicely, and I\'m lookingard ard to more. ^^

I don\'t know if I reviewed this before or not, bu~ut! This is an excellent fic. Luffy is so well-characterized that I\'m actually looking forward to the lemon--whereas, most Luffy-sex scares me (mostly because people can\'t resist the dark lure of thmuGomuGomu powers...and that\'s just icky, yo). You do a superb job of depicting a y why who is gamine and oblivious, and Nami\'s uncertainty as to his ability to even *comprehend* sexual undertones or sex itself is *perfect*. This is the sort of fic that pleases the hell out of me. And, incidentally, you have two ardent fans (my roommate and I) waiting with baited breath for the next chapters. We\'d appreciate an update, because your fic is going places we want to be.

Thanks!

~miraphora

WEEEE! Please, please, please write some more. You\'re doing this just write. Normally i can\'t stand luffy smut cause i just can\'t imagine him...well ya know...wanting to be involed in smut that doesn\'t invole becoming the pirate king in some manner or another. So please, please i\'m beggin ya, write more. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Edd

OMG, same to you!!! You need need need need to finishe this story!!! Please, Luffy/Nami is the best paring in the WHOLE WORLD and you\'ve graced the small amount of people who love it with what we havn\'t had. Please update soon!!