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Hey that was really cool. Ive only seen a little bit of One Piece and i love to read tha fanfiction for it. I thought the characters worked great and your Luffy seemed just chil eno enough to be real. I eagerly await more!

This is probably one of the best One Piece lemons out there...even if it doesn\'t have any actual lemon content yet. I hope you update soon! I think Luffy is perfectly in character. You definitly have his innocence and free spirit down pat. I\'ve already sent you comment on the One Piece fanfic list, but I thought I\'d send you some encouragement here too. Keep writing. :)

I like your fic very much. Go on please! Don\'t make me wait too long I Want to know how the story continues!

please tell me this will be updated again.... I cant beleive I found a NXL lemon. I was terrified that Luffy was going to go out of character... or the story was going to be too seriouse... but it was done perfectly. I hope to see more.
Im also glad Im not the only one that thinks this couple is adorable. >.<

Wow! That is a very promising story! So far; it\'s so well thought that I really could see it happen. I never thought it would be possible to write a lemon with that pairing without getting them at least a little OC, but it look like you\'ll manage that feat.
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
Just a little side precision, though maybe I shouldn\'t bother since your interpretation was more poetic: \"belle mère\" may literally mean \"beautiful mother\", but that would be a choice of word we would most certainly avoid to convey that particular meaning, since \"belle mère\" is the only term to refer to a \"mother in law\" or a \"step mother\".

Please keep up that great work!

This was soo cute! Say, can ya do yaoi? Try LuffyxZoro ^_____^

up date soon. love this fic

Continu I love the paring