rate_review Reviews

This whole story was very poetic, and yet bared raw emotions and healing, redeeming love. I love this pairing, but there is just so much bullshit out there about their supposed love/hate relationship. If Shuichi finds something to love in Eiri, then Eiri is lovable, not refuse, not wasted space, end of discussion. Being raped is an act of violence from which many never recover. But few have the love of a Shuichi in their life to start the healing and see it through. Well written, sensitive piece. I applaud your courage to break the cycle of the typical Shuichi/Eiri story, where self destructive behaviour breeds like flies and taints the relationship as well as the characters. Your writing is awesome but your insight is even better. Well done!

First, I just wanted to say, that I love this story. I really like your characterization, it is just so sweet.

I also have two questions. One, would you be willing to let me archive this story on my website? It's small, and as of yet not any stories actually up yet (I'm in the middle of site construction, but I'm hoping over the holidays to finish it). My second question is kind of along different lines. I was wondering if you would be willing to speak with me about your experience as a fanfiction writer (specifically Gravitation fic). I'm doing my thesis on characters and narrative in fanfiction, and would love to have your input. In fact, I should let you know that part of my website is about my research and goals, as well as being an archive for fanworks :) Whether or not you are interested, however, I would still love to archive your work.

-Dawn
a.k.a. Ashe Crow

Awsome writing. This fic turned out really well, i hope there is a lot more fics in the making.

this story is awesome. update it more pls. the plot and the characterization are also great. wow

This is by far the best written, most moving and inspired fanfiction I have ever read. Good work.

Please continue!!!!! Your story is the best I've read!!!!!!!!!!! Please have them married soon...if you want.

Yay, I found it! Strange last chapter, but it completes the story perfectly!
Ahh, what a very odd sign of trust, changing positions.

Ok, I thought Ihad read all the good fics on this site, how did I miss this?!? I was going to read the whole thing and then review (something helf intelligent hopefully), but I have to make a pause at the end of chapter two and do a huge fangirl squeal (as embarrasing as this may be for a grown up like me...) Nyiiiiiiiiiaaa! You had one of hte nicest Tohma/Eiri scenes I\'ve seen. With the two understanding and still parting ways; so emotional though. I LOVED it. *calms down* Ok, I shall keep reading and review later... Tohma kun is my baby; I\'m glad to see another writer who likes him.

P.S. Read Inertia!!!!! (by littlenin)

That was a really nicelt written lemon at the end. Very realistic, extremely in fact. I\'m really glad I got to read a well written, hot and still \'not flowery\' lemon. The fact that Eiri didn\'t even get hard was a bonus, and the speed at whcih Shuichi came and the comment about him being a teenager: all very good. Lovely ideas in that last chapter, honestly. Very nice altogether. Definately five stars.

Ah! Kawii! I love it! I\'m such a big fan of Gravitation and you portray Eiri and Shuichi so perfectly! Keep it up, ne?