rate_review Reviews

I read this a while back and enjoyed it very much. I especially like the Farfarello/daughter interaction. Deirdre is well written (as is the rest of the story). Thank you for sharing this little Jewel.

Wow...what a good story :D. I like it, the part at thestadium follows what happened exactly. Nice job.

I really want to know where this fic is going!
In chapter one i was a bit skeptical about the FarfarelloXSally bit and then you killed him but you brought him back!
And yove hve him a daughter!I want to see more of daddy Farfarello!
Oooh!Oooh,and in chapter five you had this Lone Wolf and Cub thing going with Deirdre tagging along on the mission which got me wondering if her dada's been dragging her along since infancy,heck he is lone wolf and cub since Sally split.
There are some misspellings and mixings of past and present tense in the text and that can get a bit annoying since you find yourself constantly correcting as you read.
No obvious plotholes,but i'd like to know more about what Crawford and Nhavehave been doing between "then" and "now".
I would adore a chapter written from the little panda's viewpoint and i wonder if Schwarz and Weiß will ever cross pats.
All in all,this is a fanfiction i will be returning to read again.
Kagano


P.S are you going with original or Gluhen designs?

I really hope that you will continue on with this story. it\'s one of the best I\'ve read in a long time. I like the way you have developed the charectors to suite the story. Good job. Please continue on soon.

YOU! REVIEW! *shakes you until you bleed* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. *bows down at your feet* Please! *big googly eyes*