rate_review Reviews

A very sexy read!

Nicely done. I have two gripes, however: "taunt peek" and "losing his patients." Taunt means to tease, and this spelling of peek means a glance; you meant to say 'taut peak'. And he was losing his patience. Sorry to nitpick, but there's nothing that can interrupt the flow of a decent story like yours worse than a couple of minor but glaring slipups.

I certainly wouldn\'t mind Alucard putting me to bed that way. Very well done.
silverrose

That was fun! I liked how you showed Alucard as somewhat caring without making him too OOC. I also like the way they teased each other. Good job!

lol, yeah, I know. I\'ll have to fix that. ^^

OMFG LOL U MADE A MISTAKE. \"She tilted her hand back\" LOL it is supposed to be HEAD NOT HAND!

OMFG I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE ALOT LIKE WHEN ALUCARD HAD TO GET UP AND OFF HIS LAZY BUTT THEN HE WALKED OVER TO INTEGRAL BEHIND HER, ALSO THE PART WILL HE BRUSHED HER HAIR OFF HER NECK, THEN PRESSED HIS LIPS TO IT, ALSO HE PUT HIS ARMS UNDER HER ARMS O YEAH I LOVE IT!! WRITE MORE U IDIOT!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MCUH!

Very well written ^_^, love it!

I read this fic on Media Miner and absolutely loved it. I hope you wrinothnother AxI fic soon...this one was sooooo good. It\'s officially on my guilty pleasure list and must read list.

Allo! This definitely needed at least one bloody review! So here I am. Now where to start . . . well first off I\'d like to state that I actually find het a squick. *reads too much yaoi* But I decided to take a chance. Needless to say, I was not disappointed. I enjoyed the fic a great deal. *smirks* I adore how Integra became so playful in the end. That was just too cute. I can also picture Arucard\'s curiousity to get the better of him. If you think about it, the guy was tied up in the basement for 20 years. How can he not go for some nice fresh flesh? *cough* Okay, that sounds rather crude of me, ne? Well I definitely require sleep, so toodles and good job.