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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting C/O ..... can't wait to see what happens next!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigod, please please please PLEASE update soon!!! I\'m a huge Gravitation fan and an even bigger Gundam Wing fan. You absolutely MUST continue this soon!!
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeha! A GundamWing Gravitation cross over^_^ If only it would update *sies*. Anyway on to the review.
Good setup for future but your seen setting could be better. Descriptions are just a little lacking, leaves a lot of decisions up to your readers. I have a wonderful picture of Heero and Yuki’s apartment (well done) but is Duo’s and Shu’s messy or slightly clean?
Grammar is excellent (at least for me)! You keep your tenses straight and your dialog is consistent with punctuation. Everything is clearly written and easy to read.
My only complaint is that you haven’t updated.
So, update, and I won’t have any complaints. The characters are not out of character at all and the story has set up a great space for havoc. I eagerly await your next update^_^
Good setup for future but your seen setting could be better. Descriptions are just a little lacking, leaves a lot of decisions up to your readers. I have a wonderful picture of Heero and Yuki’s apartment (well done) but is Duo’s and Shu’s messy or slightly clean?
Grammar is excellent (at least for me)! You keep your tenses straight and your dialog is consistent with punctuation. Everything is clearly written and easy to read.
My only complaint is that you haven’t updated.
So, update, and I won’t have any complaints. The characters are not out of character at all and the story has set up a great space for havoc. I eagerly await your next update^_^
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: This isn\'t bad
Yumi: It\'s interesting
Yuji: So hurry up...
Yumi: And fucking update already!!
Yumi: It\'s interesting
Yuji: So hurry up...
Yumi: And fucking update already!!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Spiffy! The crossover works nicely, the characters are so similar. Can\'t wait to see what happens...I wan\'t to read more! Update soon!
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!! any wish to continue??? People are waiting in here!!!
Best wishes. :(
Best wishes. :(
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, where are you?????? Did you forget about your story???? It\'s a month already...
Please come back!!!! & Continue!!!!
Best wishes!! XD
Please come back!!!! & Continue!!!!
Best wishes!! XD
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hellooooo!!! Well, the start of your story is very very very very good. It\'s interesting and has something really atractive. So keep up to the same way and, please, don\'t tease - write a sequel soon!!! 8D Best wishes!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I really like it, and that\'s rare considering I don\'t like corssover much. But this one has this special something ...
I\'m soooooooooooooo looking foward to your next chapter!
I\'m soooooooooooooo looking foward to your next chapter!