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  • Control

    By : ryutsuki
    Category: Gensomaden Saiyuki > General
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    Disclaimer: I do not own Gensomaden Saiyuki, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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  • Title: Control

    Author: Elf Asato

    Summary: 383. Sanzo attempts to teach Hakkai how to give up control. BDSM-ish.

    Disclaimer: Saiyuki obviously doesn't belong to me.

    Notes: I wrote this because I complained too much about the lack of 383 BDSM fics. Anyway, I attempted a different style to convey only the necessary - to convey...something. So I opted for the Hemingway approach. Sort of. Attack of the random, floating, and disjointed body parts. If you are keen enough to spy any inconsistencies with this...argh, just deal with it. It's not the point, anyway. I could use the excuse that I was trying to convey something to cover up the fact that I'm a bad writer...






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    Control
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    "A bit tighter...Sanzo houshi-sama...please."



    "Who's giving the orders here?" Sanzo growled softly into Hakkai's ear. His hands slowly trailed up to the bedpost where Hakkai's wrists were lightly bound by a single piece of cloth, his fingertips lingering on the fabric as he plunged his tongue into the other's ear.



    For a second, Hakkai panicked at the thought that perhaps Sanzo would undo the binding at his wrists...but then he noted with pleasure the sudden increased pressure.



    "Thank you."



    Silence.



    One hand ran down the length of a slight and arched back, and the other played lightly with lithe fingers, as Sanzo licked and bit at Hakkai's earlobe.



    Hakkai gasped and smiled. His ears always were sensitive.



    "What now?" Sanzo asked brusquely, catching a glimpse of sweet, upturned lips.



    "Ah...Sanzo houshi-sama could allow me to pleasure him..."



    "That's not what I meant."



    "Then what?"



    His irritation was barely concealed. "You were smiling again. I thought I told you not to."



    "But you did something I enjoyed, so I smiled," Hakkai protested, dropping the submissive tone from earlier.



    Sanzo moved to face Hakkai directly. "You always smile, so it doesn't mean anything."



    "Do you want it to mean something?"



    Sanzo's gaze hardened, but he kept silent.



    "Would you rather I rapturously cry out your name every time I am pleasured and wake up Goku and Gojyo next door?" Hakkai offered, a dubious suggestion.



    Sanzo offered a suggestion of his own.



    "Shut up."



    Then he kissed him.



    Before passionately returning the kiss, Hakkai smiled again, and Sanzo didn't mind anymore. Under his own lips, he felt the corner of Sanzo's mouth twitch, as if his lips were to curve into a smile of their own.



    ...But that's all there was.



    The placid and submissive tone returned as Hakkai further suggested, "Perhaps I could pleasure Sanzo houshi-sama now..."



    As Sanzo's lips travelled down to the base of his neck, and his fingers began to undo the binding, the youkai murmured, "Do they have to come off?"



    "You should have thought of that before..."



    "Well then, leave them on for now."



    "I thought I was giving the commands," Sanzo challenged lightly.



    Hakkai looked mildly dismayed for once. "Well..."



    "So you can't give up control after all..."



    His houshi-sama didn't bother with trying to hear any reply as his lips and tongue worked Hakkai's flesh, his hand resting on bound wrists and the other gently playing with the tailbone below...



    ...And as Hakkai sighed softly, he really didn't have the opportunity or inclination to protest.



    Sanzo's frtiprtips trailed lower from Hakkai's tailbone to the rim of his anus, probing gently as the wayward priest's lips moved down and attached to a hardened nipple. Hakkai's breaths were noticeably audible. Moving one hand to the back of the youkai's neck, Sanzo continued to gently probe, his thumb reaching down to stroke Hakkai's scrotum.



    A soft moan.



    "Did I say you could make noise?"



    "Forgive me," was all Hakkai said.



    The hand at the back of his neck worked gently, fingertips making unseen spiral patterns against warm, slightly damp skin; and Hakkai let out a, ap, appreciative sigh, taking in all sensations as if they were new, pretending as if it was their first time together. Minus the hesitancy and insecurity, though, of course.



    Also minus the fact that he was currently bound to the bedpost, completely at Sanzo's mercy. At least, that's how they meant it to be. Hakkai seemed to be having a little difficulty with fully giving up control, which, by his occasional interruption of subtle suggestions, irritated the priest.



    Didn't he trust him?



    "Sanzo."



    Hakkai was ignored as the other's lips grazed lazily across his chest over to the neglected nipple. Sanzo's hand below continued its rhythmic motions.



    "Please."



    The silence that followed was brief. In growing frustration, Sanzo roughly bit the nipple before heliceliciting a gasp from Hakkai. For someone who was so quiet the rest of the time, he couldn't understand why the youkai couldn't just be silent...



    "I'll say it."



    "Then say it," was Sanzo's curt response.



    Hakkai considered this and kept quiet.



    The priest's head lifted from a chest marred with faint scars and moved up so that his lips grazed Hakkai's earlobe. "You've been very disobedient tonight. ...Trust me, Hakkai. Let me rol
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