Serendipity | By : evilfairy Category: Fruits Basket > Het - Male/Female Views: 7871 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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Hey there, Talia here... again. I received an interesting review from one of my rabid fans. It follows:
SuKa- Talia!! >_< YOU MUST WRITE MORE!! I'm so obsessed with your story.... Meeeh it’s so good. Gimmie moooore! *Makes grabby motions with hands* But anyway, there's one thing that bothers me about this latest chapter. o_0 Neither Haru or Rin went with their baby and Hatori? I would think that at least one of them would go... anyway, keep writing!! I LOVE YOU. xD
Well, its standard practice for a doctor to take a child up to the age of 11 without the parents because the parents tend to get in the way of treatment. And he was driving. it also follows a saying my sister says, "receiving bad news at home is better then anywhere else." On with the chapterlet. Oh yeah, and this chapie hadn't been Bata-ed yet. Pay no mind to the spelling/ gramar errors -Talia
P.S. I love you too
Rin sat in the rocking chair in the nursery covered in a blanket. Tama had been buried for two weeks but she still felt the loss like it had happened yesterday. Her baby was gone. She prayed for his survival everyday. Every time she held him. Every time she fed him, she would pray for his survival. Rin would never say it out loud, but she had been looking forward to being a mother. Tama had lived three months. Three months for Gods’ sakes, he should have been fine. The horse looked at the small clock. Two thirty already. She might as well kiss sleep good bye for tonight.
“Haru… go to sleep. You have to work tomorrow.” Rin spoke with out looking up. Haru was leaning against the wall out side the baby’s room. Haru took a deep breath and stepped inside.
“Rin-Koi, come to bed.” Haru pleaded with her.
She shook her head. “I can’t sleep. But you should.”
Haru knelt in front of her lightly holding her face in his hands. “I’m worried about you.” Haru lightly kissed her. “Please come to bed. It’s… lonely with out you.” The ox’s smoky colored eyes gazed into Rin’s dark chocolate stare. Haru looked down first before standing and going back to bed. He heard the cloth fall before crossing the room and wrapping her arms around Haru’s waist. The ox froze in mid step and looked down at her slender arms as if they belonged to a goddess.
“Haru… I miss him… But I realize there was nothing that could have been done to help him.” Haru turned around and held her for a space of heart beats before whispering, “Come to bed. We can talk about this later.” Rin held his gaze for a moment before she smiled a little. The horse rose on her toes and kissed her husband lightly, remembering the subtle reasons why she loved him so much. Haru returned her hug and her kiss. Holding her tightly as it through those small actions alone he could convince her everything would be alright. Rin broke first, her head lulling back as her knees went weak.
“I think your right,” She said in a seductive whisper, “let’s go to bed.” They both knew she wasn’t talking about sleep.
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Tohru looked a Nikkou as he slept secure in his bed, Har hand running over his head. News of the Tama’s death had hit her hard and she hoped Haru and Rin would be blessed with another baby soon. And she hopped it would be healthy. They were so deserving.
“Tohru, come on. You can’t watch him every minute of the day.” Kyo rubbed her back.
She smiled up at him, “I know.” Kyo had to offer her a hand so the woman could get up. She gave him a grateful smile and tugged him to bed
A/N- I know it’s a small chapter but I need a transition. Looking at my notes, the story’s almost done. Hope you like the ending I have in store. ^_^
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