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The New Year

By: MinaLilith
folder Death Note › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 4
Views: 6,621
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Disclaimer: I do not own Death Note, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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And to All a Goodnight

And for those of you who missed the first disclaimers: I OWN NOTHING, well, nothing but student loans a laptop and a never-ending supply of ramen. I am, after all an art student...

Sorry for the wait on this one, I’m afraid I foolishly started this fic a day before finals week, and so writing chapter two took some time. Thank you all for your reviews by the way, I love getting them!

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Raito looked down at L slightly amazed. It seems, that he had already worn the other man out. He was sleeping, resting fully exposed across the carpet, his hands still bound above his head. But his face, it was that face of his that made Raito fall in love with him over and over again, his face that made him want the boy with every inch of his soul. Because L’s sleeping face was so contently innocent, so beautifully uncorrupt.

And the need to steal away this boy’s innocence was all he could bear to think about. He had to change that look, had to make him just a little less irresistible, by any means possible. And so he would dominate him, he would force this man to submit, and he would break him so that he could bear looking at him again.

Smiling cruelly, and without bothering to wake him up, Raito suddenly pushed one slender finger inside of the detective. L groaned but his eye’s stayed closed, not yet awake.

“Wake up for me.” Raito growled, adding another finger deep within L’s body. “Submit to me.” Without warning, Raito threw himself forward, and bit into L’s neck, hard, at the same time forcing in yet another finger.

L’s eyes flew open in painful alarm, and his body bucked forward, reflectively trying to escape the pain, but only succeeding in pushing Raito’s wicked teeth deeper into his throat. The bitter taste of rust exploded into Raito’s mouth, and he lapped it up happily. Backing up, but leaving his fingers where they were, and stationary within, he took a moment to lazily examine his pray. The boy lay beneath him naked, a stream of bright crimson trickling down his long, thin neck and staining the pale flesh beneath. His eyes were wide, unbelieving, unsure, and best of all, frightened. “Delicious…” Raito hissed happily.

“R-Raito-kun?” L questioned, his voice hesitant and confused.

“It’s my turn now L.” Raito almost snarled, “And this time, it’s going to hurt.” To punctuate the point, he suddenly jerked his three fingers apart inside of the detective as far as he could stretch them.

L bucked violently under his touch, and letting out the breath he hadn’t know he’d been holding out in a low hiss. Now this was a feeling he understood. Pain, he was downright intimate with pain.

Without waiting for Ryuzaki to adjust, Raito started scissoring his fingers back and forth, skillfully stretching the tight entrance. He could already tell he wouldn’t last long once he was finally inside; the boy was just so fucking tight!

Slowly, L began to notice something strange. The pain was still there, sharp and demanding, but it wasn’t alone. There was another feeling joining it, building up and slowly overtaking the hurt. But before he could truly understand what it was, Raito was back on top of him, sinking his teeth into his neck for a second time.

“I’m going to taste every bit of you Ryuzaki.” Raito hissed as he bit the boy’s delicate neck for a second time. “Your blood, you sweat, your spit, your come, all of you…” He chuckled lightly as the man below him moaned and writhed beneath him.

“Raito-kun…” L cried in response, his eyes wide and full of worry.

Raito looked down at that face, at that beautiful, begging face, and felt the hunger rise within him instantly. He wanted him, and he wanted him now. Moving quickly Raito suddenly pulled his fingers out of the moaning L and stood up, only to go back down on his knees, this time kneeling in front of the detective’s face.

L eyed Raito’s large, throbbing cock suspiciously, unsure.

“Take it.” Raito commanded forcefully. When L didn’t move, Raito impatiently leaned forward, at the same time pulling Ryuzaki’s head by his messy hair, and forcing his dick into the detective’s slightly ajar mouth. This had stopped being L’s choice. He would finish this.

L gagged reflexively as Raito suddenly pushed his entire length into his unwilling mouth. His stomach jumped and flipped in protest, while at the same time his mouth began to quickly produce torrents of saliva, veritably soaking the foreign object.

Raito moaned as L struggled against him, and bit back a staggered scream when he felt the detective gag and squirm within his hold and around his cock. Ryuzaki was helpless, trapped, and forced to bend to Raito’s will. The boy could barely stand it!

Raito lingered, unmoving for another second, before releasing L’s head and allowing him to fall sputtering backwards and onto the carpet below.

And then, smiling gleefully, Raito moved back, to position himself before L’s thin hips. In one smooth motion Raito grabbed the other man’s ankles and threw them over his shoulders, and the same time raising the detective’s ass and positioning himself at the boy’s tight entrance.

And then he pressed experimentally, waiting for some signal before entering him. And L did not disappoint. L’s eye’s suddenly widened to an impossible amount as he realized what would come next. His whole body twitched in frightful anticipation, knowing what was next, and having no way to stop it.

“This is going to hurt.” Raito repeated, before plunging into the detective full force.

Raito moaned in pure delight, while L bucked forward in pain. Tears feathered the corners of his eyes, and he let out a surprised, “O-ow!” That sent chills down Raito’s spine.

Raito pulled half way out of the boy below him before slamming back inside, hard. “God… God…” he repeated uncontrollably in a choked groan. “Oh god…” he slammed into the detective again, “God!” and again, and again, too many times for either of them to count.

Raito’s eye’s never left Ryuzaki’s face as he drove himself into the man over and over again. He revealed in the pain he found there. He smiled at the look of fear and confusion, but he didn’t come until he saw the boy’s eyes hazing over with something else, and until he felt the other’s hips straining to join his, and matching his pace. And then, and only then, Raito’s body shuddered forward, and he screamed L’s name, or rather, the only name he would probably ever know wildly to the heavens. At the same time, he felt a warm splash of semen on his abdomen as his lover came silently with him.

When his orgasm finally released him, Raito collapsed onto L’s chest, letting the man’s ass hit the floor below with a muffled thunk. He didn’t bother pulling out, not yet anyway. He wanted to stay inside that gentle heat, wanted to feel Ryuzaki’s tight embrace for just a little longer.

“You really are my first friend Raito-kun.” L gasped lovingly after a few seconds of comfortable silence.

Raito glanced tiredly up to L, “Damn,” he though sadly, “His face hasn’t changed…”

“And you’re the first person I’ve ever fallen in love with, Ryuzaki-kun.” Raito mumbled sleepily as his vision faded, and his eye’s slowly slid closed…

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…And the next morning that’s how Misa-Misa and the rest of the investigation team found them!

Seriously though, I suppose that’s the end. Please tell me what you though, and sorry for the grammatical (if there are any which I’m sure there are) mistakes. I do try, but what I’m afraid that at 4 in the morning, that’s asking a lot…

Oh, and to my reviewers:

Amicablenemesis: Thank you for calling it cute! But don’t worry, they didn’t drink it all. That’s why Raito was so astounded that Matsuda would give them so much. I’m sorry I hurt L, but I just had to! In the end it all turned out alright, right? Tell me what you though please! Thank you once again for all your compliments!

Danielle Anderson: Alright, well, more for you! Yeah, I though Raito drugging L was kinda fitting. And if you read chapter 1 carefully you’ll notice that Raito wasn’t even really drunk…

Drear: Uke L was always my favorite as well, I hope you enjoyed chapter two, L gets really uke on this one!

Nine Lives: Thank you first off, I’m glad you like the story! And yes, I’m sorry about the typos, I really am, but I have a tendency to start typing these stories at ridiculously early hours in the morning… You think Raito was OOC? But if you read the fic, you’ll notice that he actually didn’t drink all that much, he was never even drunk after all… he was drugging L. And yes, Matsuda was rather cute… I just see him as being so adorable, so I can’t help but write him that way! And yes, L as uke! I love it too… Thank you again for your compliments!

Sairin: Thank you, and thank you again! I though the fic was incomplete where it was as well, but I didn’t want to finish it if it proved to be horribly unpopular (Alas I am a writer who is just as fickle as her audience…). But I am glad that I got the chance to finish!

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