Death Note Drabbles
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Death Note › Yaoi-Male/Male
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Category:
Death Note › Yaoi-Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
4
Views:
1,972
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Death Note, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Name
((Warnin\': There are spoilers for Episode 37))
"Teru."
The first time that he said my name...It was heaven. He had smiled at me with infinite generosity. This was my God. Kira. Yagami Raito was his name but he would forever be my God.
"Teru..."
The second time my name passed through those lips, it was a whisper. It was spoken in the dark amid groans and the sounds of flesh upon flesh. Raito. My God, my Kira was inside me exalting his victory over the defeat of his enemy...I wasn\'t worthy of this. I sobbed in pleasure. Oh..God! God...! My lord\'s eyes glow a sanguine red before he comes, those honey eyes staring at me with and piercing my soul.
"Teru!"
The third time my God speaks my name, it is a scream of pain and desperation. I had failed him. It was all my fault as I wrestled against the handcuffs. No! God! I couldn\'t--I had. No! I was only trying to help God! The crack of gun-fire echoed in the warehouse and in my head. I had failed. Failedfailedfailed...There was nothing I could do. They were distracted so I reach out and grabbed the pen away from one of Nia\'s men and plunged it into my middle again, and again, and again. Blood poured out of my wounds and I felt a constriction in my chest. But I heard the door opening and I know that Kira has escaped but..My failure weights heavily upon my mind. I die.
"Teru."
Blank and tired, like a robot he speaks now. Surrounded by the stark white desert that is Mu. Kira\'s eyes are blank, they have given up searching, for a way out or L I have no clue of. I cling to his side...I am a coward. I am afraid I might loose him in the nothingness or to Higuchi\'s impotent rage. Misa is there too but she is not her bouncy, hyper self. Mu seems to have sucked the energy right out of us, but I don\'t care...I can be with God now..forever.
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After thoughts: I always wondered, since in Japan the use of one\'s first name = intimacy, and Raito being the manipulative bastard that he was would use Mikami\'s first name in private? If only to tighten he hold on the already insanely loyal man. I used Raito\'s Death in the Anime as opposed to the Manga cause 1) Mikami died still believing in his god and 2) Raito died a more dignified (in my opinion) death in the anime than in the manga (both of which make my heart hurt at the end).
P.S. If there is anyone willing to Beta my work please contact me. I am in desperate need of one!!
P.P.S. Reviews Please and thank you!
"Teru."
The first time that he said my name...It was heaven. He had smiled at me with infinite generosity. This was my God. Kira. Yagami Raito was his name but he would forever be my God.
"Teru..."
The second time my name passed through those lips, it was a whisper. It was spoken in the dark amid groans and the sounds of flesh upon flesh. Raito. My God, my Kira was inside me exalting his victory over the defeat of his enemy...I wasn\'t worthy of this. I sobbed in pleasure. Oh..God! God...! My lord\'s eyes glow a sanguine red before he comes, those honey eyes staring at me with and piercing my soul.
"Teru!"
The third time my God speaks my name, it is a scream of pain and desperation. I had failed him. It was all my fault as I wrestled against the handcuffs. No! God! I couldn\'t--I had. No! I was only trying to help God! The crack of gun-fire echoed in the warehouse and in my head. I had failed. Failedfailedfailed...There was nothing I could do. They were distracted so I reach out and grabbed the pen away from one of Nia\'s men and plunged it into my middle again, and again, and again. Blood poured out of my wounds and I felt a constriction in my chest. But I heard the door opening and I know that Kira has escaped but..My failure weights heavily upon my mind. I die.
"Teru."
Blank and tired, like a robot he speaks now. Surrounded by the stark white desert that is Mu. Kira\'s eyes are blank, they have given up searching, for a way out or L I have no clue of. I cling to his side...I am a coward. I am afraid I might loose him in the nothingness or to Higuchi\'s impotent rage. Misa is there too but she is not her bouncy, hyper self. Mu seems to have sucked the energy right out of us, but I don\'t care...I can be with God now..forever.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
After thoughts: I always wondered, since in Japan the use of one\'s first name = intimacy, and Raito being the manipulative bastard that he was would use Mikami\'s first name in private? If only to tighten he hold on the already insanely loyal man. I used Raito\'s Death in the Anime as opposed to the Manga cause 1) Mikami died still believing in his god and 2) Raito died a more dignified (in my opinion) death in the anime than in the manga (both of which make my heart hurt at the end).
P.S. If there is anyone willing to Beta my work please contact me. I am in desperate need of one!!
P.P.S. Reviews Please and thank you!