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Category:
+M to R › One Piece
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
6,424
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own One Piece, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
lol an explanation
I want to explain why i made luffy the way i did. This year i visited japan
and instead of watching dubs i ended up watching the real episodes, ya know the ones where sanji actually smokes and
they curse. Luffy was a little whiny and seemed more crazy then in the dubs or any versions of one piece in America.
Zoro was more mean and more rough edged. I decided i'd just write it like it turned out.
The rubber theory:
My excuse for this is, i wrote a version where he indeed used his rubberness but then i realized
"Hello first time? Needs to be a little rough..." So I ended up writing how nervous he was. I shouldv'e
explained he was a little to nervous. If you were about to have sex for the first time, or at least me, I'd think of
not freaking out instead of how stretchy i was. I deleted the original and put this up instead. Sorry if it wasn't satisfying
but i think its better to give the uke a challenge instead of letting it be to easy. Make me a description of what you'd like and
I'll write one as an apology just for u!! lol
and instead of watching dubs i ended up watching the real episodes, ya know the ones where sanji actually smokes and
they curse. Luffy was a little whiny and seemed more crazy then in the dubs or any versions of one piece in America.
Zoro was more mean and more rough edged. I decided i'd just write it like it turned out.
The rubber theory:
My excuse for this is, i wrote a version where he indeed used his rubberness but then i realized
"Hello first time? Needs to be a little rough..." So I ended up writing how nervous he was. I shouldv'e
explained he was a little to nervous. If you were about to have sex for the first time, or at least me, I'd think of
not freaking out instead of how stretchy i was. I deleted the original and put this up instead. Sorry if it wasn't satisfying
but i think its better to give the uke a challenge instead of letting it be to easy. Make me a description of what you'd like and
I'll write one as an apology just for u!! lol