Love Hina Lemon Loops

Love Hina Lemon Time Loops



By Andrew Joshua Talon



DISCLAIMER: I do not own Love Hina, and I am not writing this for profit. Please do not sue.



Author’s Note: It’s easier to write time loop ficlets than it is to write whole stories, I’ll be honest about that. So this and the other lemons in this series are PWPs-Essentially just an excuse to write porn. Bit of fantasy fulfillment, that, but then what fanfiction isn’t?



Enjoy, you filthy perverts.



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He really, probably should have known better. Keitaro had plenty of experience with Shinobu and Su in a sexual sense. He\'d screwed the two of them silly many a time loop, and like with all the other girls, it had never gotten old.



But he\'d never tried to take them both at the same time. With Mutsumi and Naru? Sure, he could do that. Motoko and her sister? Also doable. But Su\'s boundless energy and Shinobu\'s incredible enthusiasm, and BOTH their unbelievable stamina made taking them both on a daunting task.



It wasn\'t like Keitaro was afraid of dying, mind you. If he did, the loop started over. And it wasn\'t like he felt like a pedophile-Looping so many times basically meant that he was going to be older than everyone anyway, so it was a moot point, especially with how mature they really were. But screwing both of them was still kind of a challenge.



He had to admit, he liked challenges though. So, he decided to consider it as something of an experiment.



So, he found himself once again on the train, and spying on women he loved with all his heart. In this case, Shinobu and Su in their ridiculously perverted-looking schoolgirl uniforms. Seriously, their skirts just bordered on the indecent.



I\'ll have to see the school principal about this, he decided as he moved through the crowded train right behind the two girls. Su was happily babbling about her new invention, as Shinobu stared out the window, nodding every so often with a smile that clearly said she enjoyed Su\'s enthusiasm, but didn\'t understand a word she was saying.



Okay, here goes, he thought. Gently, he lowered his hand down, and slid it up the back of her skirt. Finding her pert bottom easily, he gave it a light squeeze.



"I-Ah!" Shinobu started, and Su looked at her friend.



"Mm? Shinobu all right?"



The blue-haired girl stared at his reflection in the window. Moving quickly, he tapped a few pressure points over her ass, flooding her body with warmth. She trembled, and he smiled warmly at her and winked.



"I... I..." Conflicted, Shinobu\'s crush and feelings warred with her insecurities. Keitaro gave a little more support to the former, mouthing \'Just relax-I want you to feel good, Shinobu-chan\' to her in the mirror as his fingers lightly trailed over her cleft. Her face already bright red, she slowly nodded.



"Ahh... I... I\'m fine... What were you saying?"



Su blinked, but resumed. Shinobu bit her lower lip, holding back a moan as Keitaro\'s fingers slid over her ass and between her legs with a light, almost teasing touch. His other hand slid around underneath her top, pushing her bra up. This allowed him to squeeze her small but perky breasts, and thanks to Shinobu\'s position, Su was none the wiser. Shinobu\'s breathing deepened, and she scooted back a little. Keitaro pressed lightly back against her, and enjoyed her sigh at the contact.



"S-Sempai," she whispered. Su, while rather hyper, was no fool, and she finally took a good look at Shinobu.



"Ah?! Manager, you-MMPH!" Keitaro bent over and shut her up with a deep kiss, and attacked a few of her pressure points. The MolMolese princess groaned into his mouth, and his skillful strikes to her sensitive points made resistance harder.



"Ah... S-Sempai..." Shinobu said, looking confused. Keitaro turned and kissed her deeply in turn, and both girls gasped as his hands found their way underneath their skirts. This was apparently a day where Su had gone without panties, and Keitaro took advantage of the situation by rubbing her pussy in just the right way.



"Auuu... M-Manager~," Su moaned. She clutched at him tightly, and nuzzled the side of his head. One thing that was consistent between loops was how Su had little trouble with slaking her lusts with him. Mol-Mol was pretty liberal in that regard.



"Aren\'t you a pervert?" Su whispered in his ear. Keitaro broke off his kiss with Shinobu, leaving her to gasp out. He looked over at Su with a slight smirk.



"Do you mind it?" He murmured back, as her sex grew moist quickly underneath his fingers. Su moaned and shook her head.



"N-No... Mmm... Su likes it," she said softly back. Keitaro felt Shinobu nuzzle his cheek, and he turned to smile back at her.



"S-Sempai... Kiss me again?" Shinobu asked. Keitaro obliged her.



So far, so good... He was fortunate they weren\'t Awake this time. It\'d let him pace himself...



Per the standard operating procedure of Japanese businessmen in a crowded train, none of them raised a fuss over Keitaro\'s actions. Some of them probably thought they\'d get a shot at the girls too. Which was something Keitaro would not stand for. They were his, period.



But, he did enjoy showing off how much he\'d been blessed with. It helped that all of the girls could be brought around to some exhibition, if he knew what buttons to push.



"Sempai... Ah..." Shinobu moaned softly. Keitaro smiled, and placed a hand on her head.



"Get on your knees, Shinobu-chan," he said softly. She nodded, skin flushed bright red, and complied. He pulled her hands to his fly, and without being asked she undid it. As for Su, he had a different plan in mind.



"Oof!" She grunted, as he lifted her up and pulled her into an embrace. She wrapped her legs securely around his waist, and looked at him curiously.



"Keitaro, what\'s-Mmmph!" He cut her off with a deep kiss, as his hands roamed her body. Below, Shinobu had freed his cock, and she squeaked in some shock as she saw it\'s size.



"Ah... It..." She looked up at him. "It\'s bigger... Than before..." She looked away, and Keitaro smiled at her. He rubbed her head in affection.



"Just suck on it..." His eyes grew a bit mischevious. "Like you drew in that sketch of yours."



"Ee-Eep!" Shinobu gasped. "H-How did you...?"



"Mmmm... Su liked that drawing too~," the Mol Mol princess teased. "Come on, Shinobu... Go on. I\'ll take care of his top." She turned back to Keitaro with a leer that seemed wrong on a girl her age, and she kissed him deeply, tongue burrowing deep into his mouth. Shinobu trembled a bit, and after taking a deep breath, she brought her lips over his member and began to suckle.



Keitaro moaned deeply into Su\'s mouth, as Shinobu\'s warm tongue began licking all over him. He pushed deeper into her warm, wet mouth, his tip touching the back of her throat. Shinobu hummed, and this is when the reason he loved getting head from Shinobu came into play: She took his cock down her throat without gagging.



"Unnngh," Keitaro groaned, releasing Su from their tongue wrestling as Shinobu hummed again. Su gripped his collar and pulled him into another deep kiss, to the point he swore he could feel her tongue almost to the back of his throat.



"Mmnnnggh..."



"Hnn... Hnnghle..." Shinobu closed her eyes, a warm blush lighting up the entirety of her skin. Her small fists balled up the fabric of Keitaro\'s shirt as she deepthroated him, his reactions making his cock shift and move in her mouth in all sorts of subtle, but arousing ways. Her panties were soaked, and she breathed hard through her nose as she took him down into her throat again, and again, and again.



Su was just as active, thoroughly dominating Keitaro\'s mouth with her clever tongue, and running her hands all over his chest and back. Clearly, he wasn\'t the only one who knew something about pressure points.



"Hnnngh..." He reached down and slid his fingers back into Su\'s pussy, plunging them inside her fast and ruthlessly. Su\'s assault on his mouth became less intense as she moaned, and he pressed her back up against the window, dominating her now. His other hand went to her breasts underneath her shirt, and squeezed them tightly. This inadvertantly made him push so deep into Shinobu\'s throat she tried to push him away for breath.



"Mmngh... S-Sorry," he whispered down to Shinobu, as Su panted for breath in his ear. Shinobu looked up at him adoringly.



"It... It\'s all right, Sempai," she whispered back. She took him back into her mouth with a happy croon, and when he was back in her throat, she unleashed a deadly weapon in her arsenal: She purred, the vibrations running through his cock and the rest of his body.



"Ohhh Sh-Shinobuuuu," he groaned, pulling out of her throat but keeping his cock in her mouth. His reasoning became clear to Shinobu a moment later, as his semen flooded her mouth. Her eyes widened, but slowly became half-lidded as the taste and smell electrified her senses. Slowly, she swallowed every drop, not daring to let it go to waste.



"Mmmmm..." Keitaro sighed happily, and caressed Shinobu\'s cheek. She nuzzled his hand back, as Su looked down in amazement.



"Wow... You drank it all down!" She smiled. "Su is impressed... Haa..." She looked at Keitaro with bedroom eyes.



"Su is also hot and wet," she whispered, one tanned hand reaching down and grasping his cock. "Su needs this inside her~..."



"Ohhh... S-Su," Shinobu whimpered from below. "I... I need that too..." A small puddle had formed between her legs, and as she shifted her thighs she moaned softly. Keitaro smiled at both girls.



"Don\'t worry... I\'ll take care of you both..."



"Stand up, Shinobu-chan," Keitaro said huskily. The blue-haired girl rose, and Keitaro embraced her, pulling her into a deep kiss.



"Mmmm..." She moaned cutely into his mouth. Keitaro broke the kiss after a few moments, and treated Su to the same. In all things, a threesome had to be equal.



Pearls of wisdom from Aunt Haruka, he thought wryly, his tongue wrestling Su\'s. Their lips separated, and Keitaro took a moment to appreciate the expressions of both girls. Swollen lips, red cheeks, wanton eyes...



"S-Sempai... Me first, please..." Shinobu begged softly. "Me first, please..." She nuzzled his chest. She froze when she felt Su\'s hand on her back, and turned her face to look at Su. The Mol Mol girl smiled, and Shinobu\'s guilt rose up.



"I... I-I\'m sorry Su, I just..." Shinobu tried, but Su\'s tongue and lips occupied her mouth. "Mmmm...?"



"It\'s all right, Shinobu-chan," Su purred against Shinobu\'s lips. "Nyah~..." She licked her lips, and Keitaro felt his mouth grow dry at the sensual, loving act. "I love you..." She nuzzled Shinobu, and groped her small breasts through her top.



"Ah-Ahhh...!" Shinobu gasped.



"Just as long as we both love Keitaro... I\'ll be happy," Su said. "All right?"



"A-All right..." Shinobu whispered. "I-I love you too, Su..."



"I know..." Su smiled. She looked at me with older eyes than you\'d expect on a girl her age-Filled with sensual heat, love, lust... His dick twitched, and he smiled back with equal warmth.



It wouldn\'t take too long for Su to give Shinobu the ability to "grow up" under red moon light, whether it was the real thing or artificial. When that happened... Well, he spent a lot of time with the two in "study sessions".



"S-Sempai," Shinobu whispered, her small hand grasping his member. Keitaro hissed a breath, and nodded to her.



"Relax," he murmured, his hands sliding between her legs and gripping her tight bottom. Shinobu sighed as she was lifted up, and instinctively she raised her legs. She couldn\'t care less that she was going to be fucked in a train full of people-Her Sempai was taking her, and that was all that mattered.



"He\'ll be gentle," Su crooned, one tanned hand reaching down to her panties. They snapped off, making Shinobu gasp in surprise. Su just grinned.



"All my underwear is easy to remove," Su said. If she could have blushed any harder, Shinobu would have. Keitaro chose this moment to push inside, and he went into a mildly meditative trance as he slid into Shinobu\'s familiar, tight, wet, and hot pussy.



"Oooohhh...!" Shinobu moaned. Keitaro focused his ki, making sure the energy concentrated around the tip of his cock as it made contact with Shinobu\'s hymen. Her eyes widened and she released another loud moan as he pushed through. He\'d done a quick and dirty technique for that-Use enough ki of a particular "frequency", and you could trick the body into thinking pain was pleasure. Shinobu tightly gripping him inside and out as she gasped desperately for breath was proof that not only had it worked, he\'d probably set off a small orgasm inside her.



All the better-He never wanted to cause pain to Shinobu unless she wanted it. Or any of the girls, for that matter.



"Haaa... Haa... Haaa... Haaa..." Shinobu gasped as he went to work, thrusting into her with machine-like precision. He ground up against her G-spot as he slid inside, and got deeper, and deeper into her tight sex with every fuck. Her short nails dug into his back as her legs hooked themselves around his waist.



"Oooh...!" She moaned again as the tip of his cock made contact with her cervix-Most girls, during their first time, this would really hurt, but another quick and dirty application of ki produced the opposite effect.



"S-Sempaaahhh," she moaned loudly as he shifted his hips slightly, digging the crown of his dick into the entrance to her womb. Her mouth hung wide open, her face totally red. She was absolutely adorable, and he pulled her into a deep, loving kiss as he resumed plowing her.



"Mmmff... Hnnph... Gnnph!" She cried against his lips, her pussy molding itself perfectly around him. He sped up for six thrusts, slamming into her hard enough to make an audible slapping sound in the tightly-packed train car. He knew the people weren\'t even pretending to not watch-Wasn\'t exactly something you could ignore.



"Hwaaah," Keitaro breathed, breaking their kiss. He nuzzled Shinobu\'s nose, enjoying the cute gasps and moans she made. "I\'m going to cum, Shinobu-chan..."



"Ohhhh...!" Shinobu moaned, and he felt her legs and arms pull against him harder.



"Do you want me to cum inside?" He asked softly, never breaking his pace. Shinobu looked him in the eyes and nodded frantically.



"Y-Yessss... Yesss..." She gasped. "I-Inside, inside...!"



Keitaro pulled almost all the way back out of her, just leaving the tip of his cock inside her. Shinobu whimpered, the tears at the corner of her eyes from pleasure and the thought he might actually not follow through. All thought fled from her mind the moment he thrust back in, grunting as he hit her cervix dead-on.



"AAAHH-MMMMMNNNGGGHHHH!" Her scream was muffled by Su\'s hand, and Keitaro felt Shinobu squirt, her pussy tightly squeezing him. He saw it in her eyes and felt it through her ki-She wanted him to fill her womb, she was desperate for his seed.



No different from any other loop, then, he thought, as he grunted her name and ejaculated. Shinobu\'s eyes rolled back into her head as she squirted again, one climax now becoming many. Keitaro\'s own orgasm was extended, and he took deep breaths as she milked him for all he was worth.



Shinobu\'s eyes crossed adorably, and became half-lidded as she slowly came down from her high. Su removed her hand, revealing that the blue-haired girl wore a deliriously happy smile.



"S-Sempai... Love you," Shinobu managed to pant. Keitaro smiled at her, and brushed her bangs off her sweaty forehead.



"I love you too, Shinobu-chan," Keitaro whispered. He gave her spine a quick jolt of ki to keep her from fainting-That wouldn\'t do at all.



"Hold onto Su now, Shinobu," Su whispered, as Keitaro pulled out. Shinobu moaned softly as her pussy began to leak, a potent mixture of her cum and Keitaro\'s. A gasp escaped her mouth as Su\'s fingers scooped up some of the mixed cum-Those same fingers bringing the emission to Su\'s mouth.



"Mmmm... You taste good~," Su purred. She gave Keitaro that same dark, sensual look. "What will we taste like, I wonder?"



"Let\'s find out," Keitaro murmured. Su moved Shinobu\'s hands to wrap around her waist, and Keitaro scooted over. Shinobu leaned against Su, barely able to support her weight. She rested her head on Su\'s shoulder, and the Mol Mol girl licked her lips.



"Love Su," she whispered. Keitaro stroked his dick a few times, and focused more ki through it to speed his recovery. His other hand rubbed Su\'s sex, as the Mol-Mol princess raised her legs and wrapped them around his waist. One of her arms went around Shinobu\'s waist, further supporting her friend.



"Always," Keitaro replied with a small smile. It might\'ve sounded cheesy to anyone else, but Keitaro really didn\'t care. He spread her lower lips and pushed inside, enjoying the low moan Su released in response.



"Oooohhh..." She took a deep breath, and lifted up her skirt. This allowed both Keitaro and Shinobu a better view of their mating-His hard, stiff cock pushing inside, her pink pussy lips barely giving way to his intrusion, glistening with her arousal.



"Haaa..." Shinobu sighed, and, to Su\'s surprise, she reached down a hand and pressed two fingers against Su\'s clit.



"Oooh...! Sh-Shinobuuuuhhh..." Su closed her eyes and released another low moan as Keitaro pushed in deeper. Her male lover grunted as he pushed against her tightness-Su being very strong made her even tighter.



"H-Hee!" She cried as Keitaro pushed past her hymen-A mild twinge of pain that immediately felt better as he worked his way in deeper.



"Uhhh," he moaned quietly. Her gaze grew unfocused as she was further impaled, until she was staring through Keitaro rather than at him, whimpering sexily before she let out a grunt as he bottomed out in her vagina.



"It... It\'s in," Su moaned, looking star-struck. Staring down at their joining, she rocked her hips from side to side, and whimpered at the sensation.



"Haaa..." Keitaro focused, once again entering a somewhat-meditative trance as he began to make love to her. Slowly pulling out, and then pushing back in, he soon reached a good rhythm, which made Su moan sexily each time he bottomed out. She squeaked as Shinobu\'s hand continued to rub her, and the blonde and the blunette shared a deep kiss.



"Ummm..." Su broke the kiss with a gasp as Keitaro found her cervix. "Uuuu... Uuuu... Uuuu..." She fixed her eyes on Keitaro as he increased his speed, now pounding into her hard.



"Uhhh... S-Su is... Going to cum," she managed. Keitaro grunted, and used his free hand to do something he knew would drive her wild. Using her juices which were running down her ass at this point, he lubricated his fingers, and pushed two of them up her tight asshole. Su\'s eyes dilated as she gasped.



"Cum, Princess," Keitaro hissed, thrusting into both of her holes. "Cum hard... Cum for me... Just for me... Squirt like a hose..."



"Uuu...uuu...uuu...uuu..." She threw her head back and let out a loud, wail like sound as it happened, her orgasm going off like a bomb as she squirted just like he ordered, in a long, forceful burst. Keitaro\'s shirt was going to be soaked, but he didn\'t care. To further drive her wild, he actually pulled out of her pussy, removed his fingers from her ass... And switched places, gritting his teeth as he slammed into her ass.



"HUNGH!" Su cried out. His fingers found her G-Spot inside her pussy as Shinobu\'s pinched her clit. The blonde\'s expression became truly depraved as she came again, her toes curling and her back arching as every thrust seemed to set her off harder and harder than the last.



"UHHHHHH! K-KEI! KEI!" She cried out. Shinobu didn\'t think to cover her mouth, and again, Keitaro didn\'t care. He instincts could be boiled down to this, in regards to the girls and the other men in the train:



I am the alpha male. Fuck the rest of you, I\'ll fuck my women where I want. You can watch, knowing you can never have what I have. Fucking cockaroaches...



He would have wondered why his inner alpha male sounded like Tony Montana, but Keitaro had more important things to care about.



"Oh Keitaro...Keitaro...Keitaro..." Su crooned as she came yet again. "...Uuuuu..." She was completely struck, overwhelmed by this beast of a man fucking her so amazingly.



"Ungh! Ungh! Ungh! Ungh! Hnnnnnnggghhh...!" Keitaro kissed her deeply, and a second later she felt his seed shoot inside her ass.



She kissed him back hungrily, her tongue probing his mouth before she pulled away. Shinobu gave her another kiss, one which the Mol-Mol princess eagerly returned, as Keitaro finished shooting his seed inside her ass, painting her bowels white.



"Haa... Haa... Haa... Haa..." Keitaro focused, catching his breath. Su and Shinobu continued to kiss, their tongues wrestling each other eagerly. At last, they broke for breath, and looked at Keitaro.



Su panted like a dog, her tongue hanging out as drooled, wearing a depraved smile. Shinobu also panted, drool dripping from the corner of her mouth, as she smiled dreamily at her sempai.



The train came to a stop. Keitaro checked it, and internally grinned. Right on time.



"Come on," he said quietly, pulling out of Su\'s ass (an action that made the girl moan softly) and picking up their bags.



"Where... Where are we going?" Shinobu managed. Keitaro wrapped his strong arms around both girls, and led them off the train, ignoring the stares and gasps. He paid no heed to the applause he received, nor the panties one girl threw at him.



Okay, maybe he paid a little heed to that, but later.



"Love hotel," he said.



"Uuu... H-How long?" Su asked. Keitaro just smirked.



"How long do you want to stay?" He asked softly.



It turned out that both girls wanted to stay for the rest of the day. Something Keitaro had been expecting, but was happy about nevertheless.



He fucked them both rotten, together and individually while the other recovered or showered. He took them in the hotel room shower, on the floor, against the door, the window, on the balcony-Hell, they even used the bed a few times. They only took breaks to eat or cool down-The rest of the time, sex.



By the end of it, both girls were sore, gooey, warm, happy messes, and cuddled against him on either side as they slept. Keitaro held them both, and smiled as he finally broke the trance and allowed himself to feel.



He was tired, that was for sure. But it was definitely the best kind of tired.



"Experiment complete..." He murmured to himself as he nodded off. "Result... Success."



He was definitely going to try this again... Maybe in the loop after the next.



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