Shun's Admirer | By : Chirella Category: +S to Z > Saint Seiya Views: 4802 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Alternate Ending #1
Shun stepped into the room and closed the door
behind him. His breath was shallow as he moved forward, toward the hidden
figure waiting for him. “I recognize your voice.” Shun stated timidly. The
Saint moved out of the shadows and Shun could finally see his face. “Are you
surprised?” The Admirer asked.
Shun gulped before answering, “Yes.” The Saint
smiled softly, his arms clasped in front of him. “I’m sorry for the strange way
I approached you, I’m a little shy sometimes when it comes to matters of the
heart.”
“I liked it, the rose and the note…thank you.
I just didn’t know you liked me, I mean…I thought you favored Shiryu.” Shun was
pleasantly shocked by his Secret Admirer. He’s so beautiful, I hope I’m not
blushing! Shun raised his hands to his cheeks to hide the blush creeping up
at his thoughts.
“I favor you, not Shiryu. Although, he and I
are close friends, I think he knows of my attraction to you.” The Saint held
Shun’s gaze as he stepped closer. “I’m a little nervous.” Shun spoke before
thinking, why did I say that?! His level of frustration rose as he
realized his hands were slightly shaking like they had been at dinner. Shun
quickly put both his hands behind his back to hide them.
“Why are you nervous?” The older Saint asked.
“Because you are a Gold Saint…and…(gulp)…older…and…sexy.” Shun clamped his hand
over his mouth, astonished that he called the man in front of him sexy. Mu
smiled, a small blush crossing his cheeks. “Thank you. I don’t hear that
much. But you are the sexy one, my dear little Shun.”
Mu’s long hair flowed behind him as a gentle
wind breezed through a slightly open window. The moonlight was bright and the
two Saints found themselves within a foot of each other, their eye contact
intense. “May I kiss you?” Mu asked respectfully, his voice steady. Shun’s
eyes got wider at the request, I’ve never kissed anyone.
“Yes. I would like that.” He responded as if
on auto-pilot. Mu leaned only his head close, his body remaining at a distance.
His eyes still holding Shun’s, he lightly brushed his lips across the younger
Saint’s mouth. Shun parted his lips a little and shut his eyes as Mu’s face met
with his own. The Gold Saint kept the kiss light, but opened his mouth to match
Shun’s.
Their tongues licked at one another, Mu taking
the dominant role. As the kiss deepened, Shun awkwardly moved forward, his
hands resting on Mu’s shoulders. The Andromeda Saint wanted their bodies to be
closer and Mu obliged him by wrapping his arms around the boy. He tastes
sweet, like honey, Shun thought as Mu’s tongue traced the inside rim of his
lip.
Mu pulled back, his hands rubbing Shun’s back
gently. “Do you want to…go somewhere else more secluded?” The Aires Saint was
hesitant in asking, not wanting to push Shun too far too fast. Yet, his desire
for the petite boy was fueling him to pursue more than just a kiss.
“Uh—sure.” Shun’s head was spinning from their
heartfelt embrace. “Hold on tight to me then. I know the perfect place.” Mu
grinned and Shun gripped him fiercely. The Bronze Saint dropped his head onto
Mu’s shoulder as they were teleported away. Shun was slightly dizzy from their
trip and Mu had to hold him steady after they arrived. “Are you alright?” The
compassion was sincere and tugged at Shun’s heart.
“I’ll be okay, I wasn’t expecting that.” He
smiled up at his Admirer. “It takes awhile to get used to.” Mu released Shun
and walked toward the room they had landed in. Shun gawked at the finely
decorated bedroom. The bed was gigantic with huge pillows lined against the
headboard and it was laced with heavy purple and maroon drapery of velvet and
silk. The lighting was muted and soft, the perfect ambiance for romance.
Shun wandered toward Mu, his eyes still taking
in the plush surrounding. “Wow! Is this your place?” Shun asked. “Yes, I
hope you don’t mind that I brought you here…to my room. I figured it was as
secluded as any place I could think of.” Mu took one of Shun’s hands in his own
and pulled him toward the bed.
“Whenever you want to leave, let me know and I
will take you back. I won’t ask you to do anything you are not comfortable
with.” Mu seemed so caring and Shun melted as the Gold Saint laced their
fingers and pulled him onto the fluffy bedspread. “I want to be here.” Shun
smiled, his face glowing.
Shun made a bold move and tackled the purple
haired Saint, rolling them around on the bed. Mu laughed and kissed the boy on
top of him, sliding their bodies together creating an erotic friction. “I
didn’t know you were so feisty.” Mu smirked as Shun attacked his neck with his
lips and tongue, trailing the length of it down to his collar bone. “I’m not, I
guess I’m just excited that it’s you!” Shun was totally enthralled with the man
under him.
Mu let Shun slowly undress him. The wide eyed
boy took his time with each piece, first removing it, then kissing and licking
at the body part revealed. Shun did not appear to be in a hurry, savoring every
moment. Mu smiled inwardly, I’m so relieved that he wants me...his innocent
and curious touches are driving me to the edge of sanity. “Ahhh…Shun” Mu
cried out when the Saint’s hand came within inches of his throbbing member,
still hidden by his pants.
Not able to take the teasing anymore, Mu
flipped Shun onto his back so fast that the boy was convinced he had done so
with his teleportation abilities. “Your turn.” Mu planted a full kiss on Shun,
creating a deep and passionate contact between them. Mu’s hands moved quickly
to undress the Andromeda Saint. Again, Shun felt that Mu must have used his
special skills since it all seemed to be a blur and then he was suddenly naked.
Mu’s delicate hand circled Shun’s manhood, his
thumb teasing the under side of his sensitive tip. “Mu…can I ask something?”
Shun barely got his sentence out as Mu moved lower, his mouth trailing kisses
down his chest and abdomen. “Of course. Ask me anything you want.”
“I know you said you favored me…but what does
that mean exactly? I wonder because I want you, but I just don’t want a one
time thing…being my first time and all.” Mu stopped his tantalizing and teasing
to scoot up and stare deep into Shun’s eyes. “This is your first time?” Shun
nodded. “Don’t worry, I do not plan on this being a one time thing. My
feelings for you are not only physical, I care for you as well. I have admired
you from a distance for quite awhile now.”
Shun breathed out a sigh of relief. “I’m so
happy to hear you say that. I’ve had a crush on you since we met.” Mu chuckled
at Shun’s innocent chatter. “You are simply adorable, that’s one of your traits
that I love the most.” Shun blushed at the compliment and pulled the Gold Saint
in for an inviting kiss.
The Bronze Saint’s hands found their way into
the only clothing that Mu still had on, his pants. Shun was surprised to find
the Gold Saint’s erect member to be so silky. Mu had an incredible length to
him and a slender width, built just like his body. Shun looked down at his own
penis and did a quick comparison. Mu’s definitely longer, but I’m a little
wider. Feeling non-competitive after analyzing their sizes, Shun helped Mu
wiggle out of his pants.
Shun once again found his explorative curiosity
getting the best of him. He fondled and stroked Mu’s hard cock, playing with
it, feeling it, letting his hand mold to it. Mu rested his eyes and enjoyed the
gratifying contact, his hands caressing the Bronze Saint’s shoulders. Shun
“ooohed” when a tiny amount of liquid escaped the older Saint’s penis. He
rubbed it around the tip with his fingers while Mu watched the boy assess the
situation with amazement and wonder.
Taking his hand away, Mu guided the Andromeda
Saint to the myriad of pillows, propping him up. His hands molested Shun’s
inner thighs before he dropped his head, his tongue flicking at the head first.
Shun groaned at the onslaught and moved his hips closer to the Saint’s face. Mu
smirked, happy his new lover was excited.
Shun had to bite his lower lip as Mu’s wet
mouth slid down the length of his member, causing exquisite pleasure. Shun’s
eyes popped open when Mu sucked his cheeks in around him, pressing his tongue
flat against the under side of his masculine appendage. “Mu—u…”
The soft pressure holding him in place was
emphasized when the Gold Saint slowly dragged his lips and tongue up and off,
then repeating the cycle. Shooting bolts of light flashed behind Shun’s closed
eyes. I’ve never felt this kind of pleasure before! Mu continued his
alluring technique on Shun until he started to whimper uncontrollably, nearing
his ultimate release. Mu had other plans for him and quickly retracted his
mouth.
“Ssshhh…I promise you’ll be there soon.” Mu
stroked Shun’s hair as he repositioned them. The graceful man switched
positions with Shun, leaning into the massive pillows. Still sitting upright,
he pulled Shun into his lap, the boy’s back against his chest. He held out his
hand and a small vile materialized in his palm. “What’s that?” Shun asked.
“Lubrication, so I don’t hurt you.” Mu busied
himself with the slick gel. “If you want me to stop, now is the time to tell
me.” Shun looked over his shoulder at Mu, “No, keep going.” Mu took Shun’s
hips and rocked him forward so he was on his hands and knees, his butt in the
air. Taking one finger, he inserted it into Shun’s tight opening.
“Ooooh…that feels weird.” Shun commented, once
again looking back as if trying to see what was happening. “Does it feel
okay?” Mu asked as he slid a second finger in, expanding the passage. “Ahh..yes,
it feels good.” His fingers pumped into the boy slowly before, creating a
rhythm before a third one joined in. Shun’s head hung close to the bed, sighs
and moans wafting back to the Gold Saint’s ears. I need to be inside him,
he’s so tight and innocent, Mu thought and decided it was time.
He removed his fingers and once again rocked
Shun’s hips, this time back into his lap. Without warning, Mu steered Shun’s
ready body onto his cock, sheathing himself inside the boy completely. Shun
cried out, both in pleasure and slight discomfort. Mu kissed his shoulders and
neck, his hands massaging Shun’s chest as he waited for the Saint to adjust.
Shun whimpered letting Mu know he was ready and
sat deep onto the Saint below him. The Gold Saint first wrapped his hand around
Shun’s begging cock and then pulled out of him. Mu managed to sit Indian style
while Shun’s legs were spread open. The weight of Shun’s body caused each
thrust to be counteracted with him slamming into the Saint’s lap, taking him in
to the hilt.
The Aires Saint kept his lips on Shun’s neck
and ears, his hands working in fluid motion on the boy’s manhood. His own
member was being stroked methodically by the tight inner muscles of the
Andromeda Saint writhing on top of him. “Mu—u...I’m going to—come…ahhh.” Shun
gnawed on his lower lip in a weak attempt to hold back his orgasm.
The hand around his stiff cock was pulling him
to the edge more intensely than he had ever experienced alone. The feeling of
Mu buried deep inside him added to his bliss. Mu was close to his own
completion and focused on his cosmos. Using his abilities, he tapped into both
his and Shun’s nearing release. He tripped the switch holding their bodies back
and included a surge of energy.
Their orgasms occurred simultaneously, enhanced
by Mu’s ability. Both Saint’s clenched their eyes tightly as they came, Shun
screaming out in ecstasy and Mu moaning loudly. White and yellow stars exploded
in Shun’s mind and his body went limp, collapsing all his weight against Mu’s
chest. He pulled his legs together and turned to sit sideways in his lover’s
lap. Mu gently lifted Shun off of him and coddled the boy, hugging him close.
Shun could feel Mu’s heart beat racing and then
slow down, his breath becoming deeper. Mu noticed that Shun was trembling
slightly and teleported them under the covers. Shun moved his face into Mu’s,
stealing a kiss. “That was extraordinary…thank you.” Shun whispered, his soft
lips taking another warm kiss. Mu responded to the kisses, his tongue dancing
with Shun’s. “I should be thanking you.” Mu smiled, his face radiant with his
after glow.
“Can I stay here tonight?” Shun asked,
snuggling into the Saint as they reclined to lie down. “Of course. I’d let you
stay forever if you wanted.” Shun caressed Mu’s chest and biceps, intrigued
with how dainty the man looked. However, he knew how extremely strong and
powerful Mu really was, his slender body was a deception to arrogant opponents.
“Oh I almost forgot.” Mu held out his hand
again and the rose he had given Shun earlier appeared. Shun giggled as Mu
placed it on the pillow over their heads. “Thank you Mu…you are very sweet.”
They shared a romantic kiss, then curled up with one another and drifted into a
peaceful sleep.
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Alternate Ending #2 is next!!!
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