finding Shuichi

A/N : This fic is not really the continueation from the chapter 2 but i\'m still working on the real chapter 3. this chapter is me explaining some of the terms in chapter 1 and 2.


Xplaination in Chapter 1 :-

• The Haiku Eiri recited during the phone call, I got it from the manga GTO (Great Teacher Onizuka) volume 17. One of Onizuka’s students, Urumi Kanzaki was about to commit suicide and when one of her friends finally got to contact her, they only hear her repeating and mumbling the haiku. I edit the haiku a bit and also change the name of the haiku.

• Since I only have the manga XXX Holic up until vol.2 and missed buying the vol.3, I don’t really have deep knowledge about the story and their characters. You can say I only know the surface of it. Forgive me for those who are XXX Holic’s true fans or those who knows this Clamp’s recent creation more than me. I know the first chapter is a poor crossover.

• Not anyone who passes the witch’s house/shop will be forcefully drag by an invincible force. Only those who have a wish, even though it’s just a small little thing, he or she will be ‘drag’ in willingly or not willingly.

• Maru and Moro are like I think Yuko’s helpers in the shop/house. They don’t have any souls but on the outside they look really like any normal girls. Looks can be deceiving. For those who knows them more, e-mail me so that I could note down.

• Kimihiro Watanuki. He’s an orphaned who lives in an orphanage (I think) and is cursed with the sight that can see spirits and spirits never wish to leave him alone because they’re attracted to the blood that flows in Watanuki.

• Watanuki was also forcefully ‘drag’ into Yuko’s shop/house like what I wrote to Eiri in chapter 1. Yuko said she can make Watanuki unable to see the spirits but his “payment” will be being a worker to Yuko until he have done enough work to pay her off. By that time then she will grant his wish.

• I haven’t mention Eiri’s “payment” to Yuko the space time witch. I was so enjoying myself typing typing and typing until I forgot to tell what’s his “payment” at the end of chapter 1! Stupid me, gomen gomen, in the future chapter I’ll tell.

• Yuko’s Mokona.
It’s a Mokona the same ones like Rayeart’s but black in color. In XXX Holic, Yuko had mention she and Clow Reed (creator of the Clow Cards in Card Captor Sakura) created 2 Mokonas. One is black and the other is white. Yuko gave the white Mokona to another traveling companion in Tsubasa Chronicles. This two manga’s are crossovered and both are ClAMP’s recent works.

• Why 2 Mokona’s?
So that white Mokona can be linked to black Mokona. The two can also ‘transfer’ things like when white Mokona swallow an apple from a certain world, black Mokona receives it and… uh… took it out from it’s mouth. It’s not really disgusting, the apple is still one piece and free from saliva. I made another Mokona (red) because so that Yuko (through her black Mokona) can be linked to Eiri and the gang if they encounter any problems or confusions.

Xplaination in Chapter 2 : -

• Eve and Ririsu.
As I have mention before, these two girls are sisters, look like any human girl but lived over more than 1000 years. They still look like teenagers though. Their work is to take care of the ‘library’ like rearranging books and repairing damaged ones.

• Hatsuki.
Go watch Yami To Boshi sumthing sumthing, she is the female version of a seme but in a shoujo ai anime.

• The animes’ I mentioned are the one once appeared in AXN Astro. Fushigi Yuugi (before they called it Curious Play) and Vandread and Sakura Wars. Only Weizz Kruez series is never to be aired in AXN. I may change my mind about what will happen to the Gravi cast when the fanatic gurls are coming inches away, anyone care to voice out your ideas? But no killing or brutal attack please.


The next chapter of “finding shuichi” will be posted soon but I please give your ideas and comments to the review section or just to my mail `addicted_2_gravitation205@hotmail.com.`

What I’m asking here is dat since the genre of my fic “finding shuichi” is AU and action/adventure, I’m going to write the gravi characters to have their own weapons but I’m afraid if I write something like Eiri’s weapon to fight against the enemy is a samurai sword, some will agree but others might not or I made Tohma’s weapon to be… uh… bow and arrow? (?!) Ryu’s weapon to be a giant robot kumagorou? So dat Ryu can control it and defeat his opponents by squashing them with kuma-machine big paws(?!) off course I’ll get lots of objections so I’m asking for your help my humble readers.

You guys tell me your ideas for a recommended `world` and what weapons can be suitable for the gravi cast, I’ll think about it and apply to the future chapters. The `worlds` of each book the gravi cast will `travel`, I’ll write they’re traveling through anime worlds.

For example Eiri and the gang came to the world of ancient Japan, they might meet Kenshin and the gang of Samurai X or Kagome from Inuyasha or Kyo from Samurai Deeper Kyo. Got it?

So please! Please forgive my selfishness i know this is selfish but really i\'m just asking some help and I will be very grateful if you gave your ideas’ and voice out your opinions.