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Prince of Tennis/Tennis no Ohjisama › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
8
Views:
5,261
Reviews:
41
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Prince of Tennis (Tennis no Ohjisama), nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chapter 3 & 4
Me: I know 20 votes is a lot, but I\'m also asking my friends for their opinion.
Sorry the chapters aren\'t the best, I\'m a tennis player and I practice every day.
Once in the morning, once in the afternoon for 3 hours each, and strength
trainings at night.
Rage: If you want longer chapters, she won\'t update for quite a while.
Me: Anyways, Here are the votes so far.
Tezuka/Ryoma = 12 votes
Tezuka/Fuji = 7 votes
Fuji/Ryoma = 12 votes
Momo/Ryoma = 12 votes
Inui/Kaidoh = 19 votes
Oishi/Eiji/Ryoma = 4 votes
Oishi/Eiji = 16 votes
Taka/Ryoma = 1 votes
Rage/Ryoma = 4 votes
Eiji/Ryoma = 3 votes
Kaidoh/Momo = 5 votes
Tezuka/Fuji/Ryoma = 13 votes
Fuji/Eiji = 7 votes
Tezuka/Oishi = 2 votes
Rage/Sakuno = 23 votes
Kaidoh/Ryoma = 10 votes
Rage: -goes to kill the friends who voted for Rage/Ryoma-
Me: Yes, 10 did vote for Kaidoh/Ryoma. I made a fic that they liked about
that pairing and they somehow become hooked on it.
Ryoma: Can we just get on with the chapter?
Me: Well, this chapter is mostly based on Rage. By the way, does anyone
know what RYoma\'s mom\'s name is?
CHAPTER 3
Rage Tsubaki hated rainy days on a weekend. She hated sitting by the
window watching it, because it made her think of how much of a loser she
was. But there she was, sitting next to the window, drinking coffee, and the
memories were flooding through...
FLASHBACK
Six year old, Rage was sprinting through the dark alleys of New York, with a
rag dress that barely covered her frail body. A gash in her left leg was still
bleeding, fresh bruises made her look like a dalmation, and her head
throbbed in agonizing pain. Rage then tripped over someone\'s garbage can.
The fall made the gash deeper and Rage couldn\'t find the strength to get up.
A younger Nanjiro Echizen was out the door and spotted the young girl. She had
apparently became unconscious and Nanjiro couldn\'t help but take her inside.
She looked like she could be Ryoma\'s twin. A smaller, six year old Ryoma,
asked his dad what happened. \"Ryoma, keep her company. I\'m calling for
an ambulance.\" Nanjiro said as he ran to a phone.
\"Hey, wake up. What happened to you?!\" Ryoma asked, trying to wake Rage
up. Rage\'s eyes fluttered open and her gaze fell on Ryoma. \"Please, whatever
you do, don\'t let me go home. He\'ll kill me.\" Rage cried. \"That\'s terrible, who
would do such a thing?\" Ryoma asked. \"Michael Aniteple, my sister\'s husband.
Please, I just don\'t want to go home.\" Rage said. \"What\'s your name?\" Ryoma
asked. \"Rage Wright.\" Rage answered. Ryoma squeezed her hand and
said, \"Everything will turn alright in the end.\". Rage smiled, but then her world
went black again...
FLASHBACK OVER
Yes, rain did that to Rage...
Rage got better after that, and Michael was sent to a maximum securiy prison for
28 years. It may be a horrible memory to some people, but it was one Rage was
fond of. That day, was the day she came to the Echizen\'s lives. She even remembered
when the Nanjiro came to her school and asked her to marry Ryoma...
FLASHBACK
Rage was living an average day at her foster family\'s house, the Tsubaki\'s. After
the trial, Rage was back to the hospital and put her father to jail for child abuse.
Her mother commited suicide and her sister became insane and unfit to take care
of Rage.
Rage was walking to her bus stop with the same depressing frown on her face. Now
in 4th grade and going to Runestar elementary. Same thing happened as usual.
Kids annoying her or ignoring her or just staring at her. They probably thought she\'d
be crazy too, just like her disfuctional family.
But then someone was waiting for her ooutside the enterance that she hadn\'t seen
in years. Ryoma\'s dad. \"Hello Rage, it\'s been a while. Hasn\'t it?\" she said. Rage
had grown to an even more bitter child than ever and just walked past him without
even a second glance. Nanjiro frowned and wished this had gone much better as he
watched her enter the school...
It was luch time and Rage was eating lunch alone on the roof. The clouds moving in
were gray and threatening to rain. \"I hate the rain.\" Rage said to herself. \"If you hate
the rain, why\'d you come out here?\" A voice asked. Rage didn\'t have to look behind
her to know it was Nanjiro. \"Is there something you want?\" Rage asked. \"Yes, I wanted
to ask you a big favor.\" he said. \"Well, what is it?\" Rage asked. \"Well, there is no
other way to say this, so I\'ll be blunt. I want you to marry my son, Ryoma. Remember
him?\" Nanjiro asked. \"Why?\" Rage asked. \"I believe if you start building a healthy
relationship with Ryome, it might help you with your depression and your hatred of guys.\"
he explained. \"You really mean that? You really want me in your family?\" Rage asked,
feeling tears coming to her eyes. \"Of course.\" he said.
Rage smiled and whispered a soft \"Thank you,\"...
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Me: Hello again.
Rage: This story is stupid.
Me: I know, but if you don\'t cooperate, then I\'ll make Sakuno hate you.
Rage: Yeah right.
Ryoma: I am so killing my dad when I get home!
CHAPTER 4
\'English is such a bore!\' Rage thought. Listening to the teacher blabbing all the time,
yes, we all know what that is like. \'Come on clock, go faster!\' Rage said to herself.
RING!
RING!
\'Finally!\' Rage though to herself as she picked up her books and fat walked towards
the door. She then pulled out her lunch and went outside and sat under the tree.
And then took out from her book bag, a little black book and a pencil (Me: Oooh!
What\'s inside the book?!). In the book were a list of people\'s names and next to it
were their strengths and weaknesses.
TEZUKA KINIMITSU- Good things: Calm, alright looking, likes tennis, and won\'t break
down under pressure.
Bad things: Shows no emotion, a little intimidating, and the type that would make
matchmakers panic.
FUJI SHUSUKE- Good things: Nice, smiles a lot, likes tennis, and is full of surprises.
Bad things: A little intimidating, seems a little tricky, very mysterious (Not exactly the
open book type).
INUI SADAHARU: Good things: Pretty cool, smart, likes tennis, and is very observant.
Bad things: Kind of creepy, always has that weird notebook, and makes drinks that
taste gross and can kill you!
KAIDOH KAORU- Good things: Serious, determined person, likes tennis, and doesn\'t
break down under pressure.
Bad things: Sounds like he needs a cough drop, shows no happiness in his face, and
is always hissing (Is he dieing or something?!).
MOMOSHIRO TAKESHI- Good things: Sense of humor, smiles a lot, likes tennis, and
is very friendly.
Bad things: Doesn\'t have the good qualities that Kaidoh has.
OISHI SHUICHIRO- Good things: Likes tennis, very nice, serious, and very supportive.
Bad things: Too mother like, and doesn\'t seem like the type for Ryoma.
KIKUMARU EIJI- Good things: Nice, shows emotiong, likes tennis, and is serious when
he wants to be.
Bad things: Too child like, more of Oishi\'s type than Ryoma\'s.
KAWAMARU TAKASHI- Good things: Mice, likes tennis, pretty quiet, and is an all
around nice guy.
Bad things: Don\'t make him hold a racket (he goes nuts!).
\"Well, I know I can definitely scratch out Oishi and Inui. I just don\'t think Oishi\'s it
and I don\'t want Inui poisoning Ryoma.\" Rage decided and crossed their names out.
Rage then quickly ate her lunch before the bell rang and left to her next class.
A little black book sat open under the tree...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Inui Sadaharu was walking by that said tree and spotted that little black book. Being
the typical guy he was, he picked it up and read it.
FINDING RYOMA\'S MATCH
PROPERTY OF RAGE TSUBAKI...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Rage became very popular, especially with the MEN. \'Oh god, here comes the guy
who won\'t fucking give up!\' Rage warned herself. Katsuo approached Rage and
tried asking her out... again! \"Hey, you with the weird hairdo, fuck shut up and leave
me alone! In other words, piss off!\" Rage shouted and pushed Katsuo to the ground
before walking away.
As blunt as Rage was, Katsup still tried to follow her.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When Rage went by the girl\'s tennis courts, all the girls sqealed. \"Hi Rage,\" they
all tried to say seductively. Rage, of course was the type that liked to play with people\'s
emotions and gave a wink and a playful smirk back at them. Soon, almost all the girls
were fighting over who Rage winked at.
Rage was about to laugh when someone tapped her on the shoulder. \"Oh, hey
Sadaharu-kun. What\'s up?\" Rage greeted. \"What do I do that makes me kind of
creepy?\" Inui asked. \"What are you talking about Sadaharu-kun?\" Rage asked. \"I\'m
talking about a certain little black book...\" Inui said and held it out. \"My book!\" Rage
exclaimed. \"I\'m not affended, I can even help you out.\" Inui said. \"Really?!\" Rage
asked. \"Sure,\" Inui said as the 2 headed to the tennis courts...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ryoma was so ticked! \'WHAT THE HECK ARE THEY DOING?!\' Ryoma asked in his mind.
Rage and Inui-sempai just kept talking, and Inui even showed Rage what was written
down in his notebook! He won\'t show anybody what\'s in that thing! \'Something\'s up, and
I know it. I mean, I know Rage and Inui are friends, but something is goin on over
there.\'...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Me: Those were the worst chapters I\'ve ever written. -sigh- READ and REVIEW!
Sorry the chapters aren\'t the best, I\'m a tennis player and I practice every day.
Once in the morning, once in the afternoon for 3 hours each, and strength
trainings at night.
Rage: If you want longer chapters, she won\'t update for quite a while.
Me: Anyways, Here are the votes so far.
Tezuka/Ryoma = 12 votes
Tezuka/Fuji = 7 votes
Fuji/Ryoma = 12 votes
Momo/Ryoma = 12 votes
Inui/Kaidoh = 19 votes
Oishi/Eiji/Ryoma = 4 votes
Oishi/Eiji = 16 votes
Taka/Ryoma = 1 votes
Rage/Ryoma = 4 votes
Eiji/Ryoma = 3 votes
Kaidoh/Momo = 5 votes
Tezuka/Fuji/Ryoma = 13 votes
Fuji/Eiji = 7 votes
Tezuka/Oishi = 2 votes
Rage/Sakuno = 23 votes
Kaidoh/Ryoma = 10 votes
Rage: -goes to kill the friends who voted for Rage/Ryoma-
Me: Yes, 10 did vote for Kaidoh/Ryoma. I made a fic that they liked about
that pairing and they somehow become hooked on it.
Ryoma: Can we just get on with the chapter?
Me: Well, this chapter is mostly based on Rage. By the way, does anyone
know what RYoma\'s mom\'s name is?
CHAPTER 3
Rage Tsubaki hated rainy days on a weekend. She hated sitting by the
window watching it, because it made her think of how much of a loser she
was. But there she was, sitting next to the window, drinking coffee, and the
memories were flooding through...
FLASHBACK
Six year old, Rage was sprinting through the dark alleys of New York, with a
rag dress that barely covered her frail body. A gash in her left leg was still
bleeding, fresh bruises made her look like a dalmation, and her head
throbbed in agonizing pain. Rage then tripped over someone\'s garbage can.
The fall made the gash deeper and Rage couldn\'t find the strength to get up.
A younger Nanjiro Echizen was out the door and spotted the young girl. She had
apparently became unconscious and Nanjiro couldn\'t help but take her inside.
She looked like she could be Ryoma\'s twin. A smaller, six year old Ryoma,
asked his dad what happened. \"Ryoma, keep her company. I\'m calling for
an ambulance.\" Nanjiro said as he ran to a phone.
\"Hey, wake up. What happened to you?!\" Ryoma asked, trying to wake Rage
up. Rage\'s eyes fluttered open and her gaze fell on Ryoma. \"Please, whatever
you do, don\'t let me go home. He\'ll kill me.\" Rage cried. \"That\'s terrible, who
would do such a thing?\" Ryoma asked. \"Michael Aniteple, my sister\'s husband.
Please, I just don\'t want to go home.\" Rage said. \"What\'s your name?\" Ryoma
asked. \"Rage Wright.\" Rage answered. Ryoma squeezed her hand and
said, \"Everything will turn alright in the end.\". Rage smiled, but then her world
went black again...
FLASHBACK OVER
Yes, rain did that to Rage...
Rage got better after that, and Michael was sent to a maximum securiy prison for
28 years. It may be a horrible memory to some people, but it was one Rage was
fond of. That day, was the day she came to the Echizen\'s lives. She even remembered
when the Nanjiro came to her school and asked her to marry Ryoma...
FLASHBACK
Rage was living an average day at her foster family\'s house, the Tsubaki\'s. After
the trial, Rage was back to the hospital and put her father to jail for child abuse.
Her mother commited suicide and her sister became insane and unfit to take care
of Rage.
Rage was walking to her bus stop with the same depressing frown on her face. Now
in 4th grade and going to Runestar elementary. Same thing happened as usual.
Kids annoying her or ignoring her or just staring at her. They probably thought she\'d
be crazy too, just like her disfuctional family.
But then someone was waiting for her ooutside the enterance that she hadn\'t seen
in years. Ryoma\'s dad. \"Hello Rage, it\'s been a while. Hasn\'t it?\" she said. Rage
had grown to an even more bitter child than ever and just walked past him without
even a second glance. Nanjiro frowned and wished this had gone much better as he
watched her enter the school...
It was luch time and Rage was eating lunch alone on the roof. The clouds moving in
were gray and threatening to rain. \"I hate the rain.\" Rage said to herself. \"If you hate
the rain, why\'d you come out here?\" A voice asked. Rage didn\'t have to look behind
her to know it was Nanjiro. \"Is there something you want?\" Rage asked. \"Yes, I wanted
to ask you a big favor.\" he said. \"Well, what is it?\" Rage asked. \"Well, there is no
other way to say this, so I\'ll be blunt. I want you to marry my son, Ryoma. Remember
him?\" Nanjiro asked. \"Why?\" Rage asked. \"I believe if you start building a healthy
relationship with Ryome, it might help you with your depression and your hatred of guys.\"
he explained. \"You really mean that? You really want me in your family?\" Rage asked,
feeling tears coming to her eyes. \"Of course.\" he said.
Rage smiled and whispered a soft \"Thank you,\"...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Me: Hello again.
Rage: This story is stupid.
Me: I know, but if you don\'t cooperate, then I\'ll make Sakuno hate you.
Rage: Yeah right.
Ryoma: I am so killing my dad when I get home!
CHAPTER 4
\'English is such a bore!\' Rage thought. Listening to the teacher blabbing all the time,
yes, we all know what that is like. \'Come on clock, go faster!\' Rage said to herself.
RING!
RING!
\'Finally!\' Rage though to herself as she picked up her books and fat walked towards
the door. She then pulled out her lunch and went outside and sat under the tree.
And then took out from her book bag, a little black book and a pencil (Me: Oooh!
What\'s inside the book?!). In the book were a list of people\'s names and next to it
were their strengths and weaknesses.
TEZUKA KINIMITSU- Good things: Calm, alright looking, likes tennis, and won\'t break
down under pressure.
Bad things: Shows no emotion, a little intimidating, and the type that would make
matchmakers panic.
FUJI SHUSUKE- Good things: Nice, smiles a lot, likes tennis, and is full of surprises.
Bad things: A little intimidating, seems a little tricky, very mysterious (Not exactly the
open book type).
INUI SADAHARU: Good things: Pretty cool, smart, likes tennis, and is very observant.
Bad things: Kind of creepy, always has that weird notebook, and makes drinks that
taste gross and can kill you!
KAIDOH KAORU- Good things: Serious, determined person, likes tennis, and doesn\'t
break down under pressure.
Bad things: Sounds like he needs a cough drop, shows no happiness in his face, and
is always hissing (Is he dieing or something?!).
MOMOSHIRO TAKESHI- Good things: Sense of humor, smiles a lot, likes tennis, and
is very friendly.
Bad things: Doesn\'t have the good qualities that Kaidoh has.
OISHI SHUICHIRO- Good things: Likes tennis, very nice, serious, and very supportive.
Bad things: Too mother like, and doesn\'t seem like the type for Ryoma.
KIKUMARU EIJI- Good things: Nice, shows emotiong, likes tennis, and is serious when
he wants to be.
Bad things: Too child like, more of Oishi\'s type than Ryoma\'s.
KAWAMARU TAKASHI- Good things: Mice, likes tennis, pretty quiet, and is an all
around nice guy.
Bad things: Don\'t make him hold a racket (he goes nuts!).
\"Well, I know I can definitely scratch out Oishi and Inui. I just don\'t think Oishi\'s it
and I don\'t want Inui poisoning Ryoma.\" Rage decided and crossed their names out.
Rage then quickly ate her lunch before the bell rang and left to her next class.
A little black book sat open under the tree...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Inui Sadaharu was walking by that said tree and spotted that little black book. Being
the typical guy he was, he picked it up and read it.
FINDING RYOMA\'S MATCH
PROPERTY OF RAGE TSUBAKI...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Rage became very popular, especially with the MEN. \'Oh god, here comes the guy
who won\'t fucking give up!\' Rage warned herself. Katsuo approached Rage and
tried asking her out... again! \"Hey, you with the weird hairdo, fuck shut up and leave
me alone! In other words, piss off!\" Rage shouted and pushed Katsuo to the ground
before walking away.
As blunt as Rage was, Katsup still tried to follow her.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When Rage went by the girl\'s tennis courts, all the girls sqealed. \"Hi Rage,\" they
all tried to say seductively. Rage, of course was the type that liked to play with people\'s
emotions and gave a wink and a playful smirk back at them. Soon, almost all the girls
were fighting over who Rage winked at.
Rage was about to laugh when someone tapped her on the shoulder. \"Oh, hey
Sadaharu-kun. What\'s up?\" Rage greeted. \"What do I do that makes me kind of
creepy?\" Inui asked. \"What are you talking about Sadaharu-kun?\" Rage asked. \"I\'m
talking about a certain little black book...\" Inui said and held it out. \"My book!\" Rage
exclaimed. \"I\'m not affended, I can even help you out.\" Inui said. \"Really?!\" Rage
asked. \"Sure,\" Inui said as the 2 headed to the tennis courts...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ryoma was so ticked! \'WHAT THE HECK ARE THEY DOING?!\' Ryoma asked in his mind.
Rage and Inui-sempai just kept talking, and Inui even showed Rage what was written
down in his notebook! He won\'t show anybody what\'s in that thing! \'Something\'s up, and
I know it. I mean, I know Rage and Inui are friends, but something is goin on over
there.\'...
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Me: Those were the worst chapters I\'ve ever written. -sigh- READ and REVIEW!