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Gravitation › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
4
Views:
4,257
Reviews:
25
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Gravitation, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Explainations that don't explain anything
Disclaimer: I don’t own, you don’t sue, it’s kinda like you scratch my back , I’ll scratch yours… and I don’t own raining like magic…in fact from now n it’s safe to assume I own nothing…just like in real life ;P
Warnings: bastardized Medical terminology, Stupid jokes, OOC Yuki (understatement) once more and a quiet Shuichi.
LAST TIME
“That is why we are here, Shuichi your tests results show a raised levels of progesterone, oestrogen, and b-HCG.”
“Well is that bad?” Shuichi stopped looking confused.
“Shindo-san this particular combination of hormones is only found in pregnant women. That part you asked about is your uterus. Shindo-san, you‘re pregnant.” Suzuki braced himself for the reactions.
Shuichi paled and stared with wide unseeing eyes and Yuki simply fell to the ground, unconscious.
ON TO THE STORY
“Nurse Michiru, Get smelling salts in here now!” Suzuki-sensei yelled to the nurse passing by in the hall. The doctor knelt by Yuki and made sure he didn’t hurt himself too much in the fall to the ground. After satisfying himself that the blond would be alright, the doctor set out to see if the singer was going to be ok. Shuichi, still staring blankly ahead, didn’t even blink as the doctor started to snap his fingers in the singer’s face in an attempt to bring him back to reality.
“Suzuki-sensei, here are the salts.” The nurse said, holding out the smelling salts for the doctor to take. The doctor snatched the smelling salts and opened them up. Suzuki cradled the author’s head with one hand and with the other he waved the salts under Yuki’s nose. Yuki inhaled and shot up. Shuichi came back to reality when Yuki started to get up using the table by his leg.
“How are you feeling Uesugi-san?” The doctor asked concerned.
“Ow, my head. I had a weird dream; you said Shuichi was pregnant…” Yuki said holding his head.
“Uesugi-san, you didn’t have a dream, Shindo-san is indeed pregnant.” As soon as the doctor got that sentence out Shuichi broke in to tears.
“OH GOD I’M A FREAK!!” Shuichi started to scream at the top of his lungs, he grabbed my head and started sobbing. And as Shuichi was crying his heart out, Yuki ushered the doctor and the nurse out of the room. When the door was closed, Yuki rushed back to his fiancé’s side. The author wrapped his arms around Shuichi in a vain attempt to comfort the torn singer. After a few minutes of the singer muttering “I’m a freak” Yuki had enough. Yuki ripped Shuichi from his body and brought him up to look him straight in the eye. Yuki shook the singer gently twice to get his attention.
“You listen and you listen well, Shindo Shuichi I love you, you are not a freak, do you understand me?” Shuichi shook his head and opened his mouth to protest, and Yuki shook him, “NO! Let me hear it out of your mouth! Say it! Say you’re not a freak!”
Shuichi trembled and said timidly, “I’m not a freak…”
Yuki smiled and said gently, “Good now I want to hear you say, ‘Yuki loves me’”
Shuichi gave a small smile, his face still wet from tears, “Yuki loves me.” Yuki’s smile went a fraction bigger and he leaned down and kissed Shuichi on the mouth while wiping a bit of the moisture off the vocalist’s face. Shuichi started to deepen the kiss when the doctor knocked hesitantly on the door.
Yuki pulled back and smirked down at his lover, “Why don’t we let him in and see what kind of crack-pot explanation this quack has?” and at Shuichi’s tentative nod, sat beside Shuichi, holding his hand, and called out “Come in!”
The doctor walked in and smiled at the picture the young couple made, two grown men holding one another and sitting side by side a very short table. The world is progressing, the doctor thought. “Is every thing alright in here?” The doctor said out loud, shaking himself out of his contemplation.
“Everything will be ok if you can explain this crack-pot theory of Shuichi, who is completely male, being pregnant. That’s not anatomically possible.” Yuki stated forcibly.
“I think I can explain that better if I can get give him a physical. If I can examine the possible places that the cervix could be then I can give you a better theory on how you became impregnated in the first place.” Suzuki-sensei said with the utmost confidence, nodding along to his words.
“Well, how many “possible places” can the cervix be?” Shuichi asked, finally speaking up in his confusion. Wait till Hiro hears this, Shuichi thought, he’ll get a kick out of it.
“Well, if we were going all out, there would be two, but one is almost impossible because the stomach acid would neutralize the semen, so the only place we would be checking is your rectum. I would insert a short and flexible tube with a camera and a light at the end, it is called a Sigmoidoscopy. With that we would be able to see in to the rectum.” The doctor explained calmly and both the other occupants grew pale. Misinterpreting the uneasiness of the two men, the doctor said in an afterthought, “It won’t hurt, it is at most uncomfortable.” Suzuki-sensei looked at Shuichi and Yuki, who by now were looking a little peeved, and sighed. “I’ll let you discuses this while I get the machine, if you don’t want to do it, I won’t do it, Ok?” The doc walked to the door and turned, “I’ll be about 10 minutes.” and he walked out.
Yuki and Shuichi looked at each other, still shaken from all the revelations of the day. Yuki picked up Shuichi’s hand and squeezed. “Well.” Yuki started, “what do you want to do… Your decision…”
“I don’t know what to do… Can’t you decide for me?” Shuichi looked up imploringly. Shu wrapped his arms around the author’s chest and resting his head on a shoulder. Yuki held Shuichi and gently swayed back and forth. They stayed like this for a while when Yuki broke the silence.
“I think you should do it….after all it would help if we knew why the doctor thinks your pregnant, if he can’t find anything then we’ll sue him…and if he can find a reason then… well we’ll deal with that if we come to it.” Yuki said very calmly, trying not to scare Shuichi.
The doctor knocked softly, and said through the door, “Shindo-san, if your going to go through with the procedure then you will need to take off your pants and you undergarments, I’ll be out here, call out when your ready.”
Shuichi sighed and went to unbutton his pants; his hands shook and interfered with the process. He tried to stop the shaking and Yuki grabbed his hands to steady the anguished singer.
“If you don’t want to do this” Yuki started, “you don’t have to. I don’t think the doctor will take any offence to it.” Shuichi’s case of shakes started to lesson and Yuki let go of one of Shuichi’s hands to bring it up to the singer’s face, “I won’t let anything happen to you, you have to believe that.” Yuki the knuckles on the hand he was holding. “Trust in me, I’ll keep you safe.” Shuichi sighed and leaned into Yuki’s body.
As Shuichi relaxed a knock came for the other side of the door. “Is every thing ok in there.’ The voice of the doctor leaked into the room.
Shuichi called out to Suzuki-sensei, “Yeah, give us a few more minutes, will ya?” at the affirmative noise, the singer’s hands left the author’s and went back to the fly of his pants, “ I can do this, Yuki, just not with out you by my side…” Shuichi pulled away from Yuki’s body, “you will stay by my side won’t you?”
Shuichi looked into Yuki’s eyes. Yuki leaned down, kissed Shuichi softly and said the most beautiful “Yes” Shuichi has ever heard before.
Shuichi jumped off the table, pulled down his pants and underwear, pulled down the robe, and hopped up on the table again. Yuki sat in the chair by the examination table, grabbing hold of Shuichi hand again… “You can come in now.” the vocalist called to the doctor that was waiting out side of the door.
Suzuki-sensei wheeled in a device that looked like a TV screen with a cord coming out of it. The doctor looked at the couple. “Are we going to go through the procedure?”
“Yep,” Shuichi chirped, trying to be calm, “so how do you want me to be?”
“If you can turn over on to your side, which ever side you’re more comfortable on is fine.” as Shuichi laid down on his side, facing Yuki, The doctor explained the procedure. “I’ll insert this tube into your anus, and the camera on the tip will feed into the screen. We’ll be able to see anything the camera is pointed at.” the doctor then put on a pair of gloves and asked kindly, “Are you ready to start?”(1) Getting an affirmative nod, he put lubricant on the tube and slowly put it in the younger man’s anus.
The screen flickered and showed a reddish-pink canal, and started to slowly move forward. Shuichi held on to Yuki’s hands tightly and Yuki did his best to comfort the singer, while being morbidly fascinated in to seeing into the singer in a whole new way. The doctor’s eyes stayed focused on the screen, sporadically making a noise in the back of his throat, either agreeing or disagreeing with himself. Once they got past, what Yuki thought was the prostate, the doctor’s eyes widened and moved backwards. “See there,” the doctor began, not really talking to either of them just talking at them, “That is not supposed to be there.” He pointed out a small hole almost completely covered be the prostate, it was no bigger then the top of a ball point pin is reality, but on screen it was magnified. “That is your cervix Shindo-san. And it seems to be protected by the prostate…” Suzuki-sensei trailed off, looking off into nothingness, he shook himself and turned to Shuichi. “Shindo-san I will be removing the tube now.” then he slowly removed the tube from Shuichi. Shuichi flinched and sighed as the tube was removed completely. “You get redressed and I’ll take these machines out of here.” he grabbed the ultrasound and the sigmoidoscope and wheeled them out and shut the door.
The singer put on his clothes on autopilot, staring blankly ahead. Yuki grabbed Shuichi’s arm and pulled the singer to his chest. The singer relaxed in to his husband-to-be and started to sing/whisper “Raining like Magic”(2) in an attempt to calm himself and Yuki down. Yuki started rocking back and forth in time to the song. The doctor came back in and sighed.
“Well now is a good time to talk about your options. You can either keep the child or you can terminate the pregnancy. It’s your choice. You can call our office and tell us your answer later after you made you decision and we’ll schedule the appointment necessary. But right now, you’re free to go.” Dr. Suzuki went to the door and ushered them out.
On the way home not one of the men talked, both contemplating the news they got today. The car was filled with a tension that you could cut with a knife, and outside the gloomy rain came down harder, reflecting the feelings of the occupants of the car. When they got back to the apartment, after a very unconformable elevator ride with another occupant of the building, Shuichi started talking.
“We could get rid of it, if you want…”
You all probably hate me right now…not only did it take me forever to update I leave it at a cliffhanger. Lol Poor people, waiting this long for a chapter and all you really got was a cliffhanger…I would kill me in your shoes…~hides from anything that is coming for her~
(1) This procedure is accurate to the best of my knowledge… only one thing is wrong and that is that the prep for this takes a day of fasting on a liquid only diet and laxatives…but I take artistic license on that one…
(2) Where I got stuck at for about a month… and I changed the song a few times… and I still didn’t chose one everyone knew…but for anyone who is interested “Raining like magic” is by Raffi…I think…and it’s on the Fern Gully soundtrack.
OK! Poll time everybody, this poll is on the baby!
Should Shuichi have:
A Girl
A Boy
Twins: Girl, Boy
Twins: Girls
Twins: Boys
(For you morbid people) A Miscarriage……
OR an abortion
EVERYONE CAST YOUR BALLOTS!!! This is a multi-chapter poll…. It ends when I say it ends…..well not the last option…that will end next chapter…. What will Eithne do next?
PS: THANK YOU EVERYONE THAT SUPPORTED ME THOUGH ME LATEST TRIALS… EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOU ARE MY HEROES AND THIS CHAPTER WOULDN’T HAVE BEEN POSTED IF IT WEREN’T FOR YOU!!!! ~kisses to you all~
PPS: I’m sorry this chapter didn’t get posted in the allotted time I allowed myself… but I’m not that late on it…just a few days, it’s just…nothing was going like it was supposed to, so I re-wrote over and over and over again…and I still don’t like it, but this will have to do for now I’ll re-write it later anyway. And it will be beta-ed if all goes according to plan…and I get around to it.
Warnings: bastardized Medical terminology, Stupid jokes, OOC Yuki (understatement) once more and a quiet Shuichi.
LAST TIME
“That is why we are here, Shuichi your tests results show a raised levels of progesterone, oestrogen, and b-HCG.”
“Well is that bad?” Shuichi stopped looking confused.
“Shindo-san this particular combination of hormones is only found in pregnant women. That part you asked about is your uterus. Shindo-san, you‘re pregnant.” Suzuki braced himself for the reactions.
Shuichi paled and stared with wide unseeing eyes and Yuki simply fell to the ground, unconscious.
ON TO THE STORY
“Nurse Michiru, Get smelling salts in here now!” Suzuki-sensei yelled to the nurse passing by in the hall. The doctor knelt by Yuki and made sure he didn’t hurt himself too much in the fall to the ground. After satisfying himself that the blond would be alright, the doctor set out to see if the singer was going to be ok. Shuichi, still staring blankly ahead, didn’t even blink as the doctor started to snap his fingers in the singer’s face in an attempt to bring him back to reality.
“Suzuki-sensei, here are the salts.” The nurse said, holding out the smelling salts for the doctor to take. The doctor snatched the smelling salts and opened them up. Suzuki cradled the author’s head with one hand and with the other he waved the salts under Yuki’s nose. Yuki inhaled and shot up. Shuichi came back to reality when Yuki started to get up using the table by his leg.
“How are you feeling Uesugi-san?” The doctor asked concerned.
“Ow, my head. I had a weird dream; you said Shuichi was pregnant…” Yuki said holding his head.
“Uesugi-san, you didn’t have a dream, Shindo-san is indeed pregnant.” As soon as the doctor got that sentence out Shuichi broke in to tears.
“OH GOD I’M A FREAK!!” Shuichi started to scream at the top of his lungs, he grabbed my head and started sobbing. And as Shuichi was crying his heart out, Yuki ushered the doctor and the nurse out of the room. When the door was closed, Yuki rushed back to his fiancé’s side. The author wrapped his arms around Shuichi in a vain attempt to comfort the torn singer. After a few minutes of the singer muttering “I’m a freak” Yuki had enough. Yuki ripped Shuichi from his body and brought him up to look him straight in the eye. Yuki shook the singer gently twice to get his attention.
“You listen and you listen well, Shindo Shuichi I love you, you are not a freak, do you understand me?” Shuichi shook his head and opened his mouth to protest, and Yuki shook him, “NO! Let me hear it out of your mouth! Say it! Say you’re not a freak!”
Shuichi trembled and said timidly, “I’m not a freak…”
Yuki smiled and said gently, “Good now I want to hear you say, ‘Yuki loves me’”
Shuichi gave a small smile, his face still wet from tears, “Yuki loves me.” Yuki’s smile went a fraction bigger and he leaned down and kissed Shuichi on the mouth while wiping a bit of the moisture off the vocalist’s face. Shuichi started to deepen the kiss when the doctor knocked hesitantly on the door.
Yuki pulled back and smirked down at his lover, “Why don’t we let him in and see what kind of crack-pot explanation this quack has?” and at Shuichi’s tentative nod, sat beside Shuichi, holding his hand, and called out “Come in!”
The doctor walked in and smiled at the picture the young couple made, two grown men holding one another and sitting side by side a very short table. The world is progressing, the doctor thought. “Is every thing alright in here?” The doctor said out loud, shaking himself out of his contemplation.
“Everything will be ok if you can explain this crack-pot theory of Shuichi, who is completely male, being pregnant. That’s not anatomically possible.” Yuki stated forcibly.
“I think I can explain that better if I can get give him a physical. If I can examine the possible places that the cervix could be then I can give you a better theory on how you became impregnated in the first place.” Suzuki-sensei said with the utmost confidence, nodding along to his words.
“Well, how many “possible places” can the cervix be?” Shuichi asked, finally speaking up in his confusion. Wait till Hiro hears this, Shuichi thought, he’ll get a kick out of it.
“Well, if we were going all out, there would be two, but one is almost impossible because the stomach acid would neutralize the semen, so the only place we would be checking is your rectum. I would insert a short and flexible tube with a camera and a light at the end, it is called a Sigmoidoscopy. With that we would be able to see in to the rectum.” The doctor explained calmly and both the other occupants grew pale. Misinterpreting the uneasiness of the two men, the doctor said in an afterthought, “It won’t hurt, it is at most uncomfortable.” Suzuki-sensei looked at Shuichi and Yuki, who by now were looking a little peeved, and sighed. “I’ll let you discuses this while I get the machine, if you don’t want to do it, I won’t do it, Ok?” The doc walked to the door and turned, “I’ll be about 10 minutes.” and he walked out.
Yuki and Shuichi looked at each other, still shaken from all the revelations of the day. Yuki picked up Shuichi’s hand and squeezed. “Well.” Yuki started, “what do you want to do… Your decision…”
“I don’t know what to do… Can’t you decide for me?” Shuichi looked up imploringly. Shu wrapped his arms around the author’s chest and resting his head on a shoulder. Yuki held Shuichi and gently swayed back and forth. They stayed like this for a while when Yuki broke the silence.
“I think you should do it….after all it would help if we knew why the doctor thinks your pregnant, if he can’t find anything then we’ll sue him…and if he can find a reason then… well we’ll deal with that if we come to it.” Yuki said very calmly, trying not to scare Shuichi.
The doctor knocked softly, and said through the door, “Shindo-san, if your going to go through with the procedure then you will need to take off your pants and you undergarments, I’ll be out here, call out when your ready.”
Shuichi sighed and went to unbutton his pants; his hands shook and interfered with the process. He tried to stop the shaking and Yuki grabbed his hands to steady the anguished singer.
“If you don’t want to do this” Yuki started, “you don’t have to. I don’t think the doctor will take any offence to it.” Shuichi’s case of shakes started to lesson and Yuki let go of one of Shuichi’s hands to bring it up to the singer’s face, “I won’t let anything happen to you, you have to believe that.” Yuki the knuckles on the hand he was holding. “Trust in me, I’ll keep you safe.” Shuichi sighed and leaned into Yuki’s body.
As Shuichi relaxed a knock came for the other side of the door. “Is every thing ok in there.’ The voice of the doctor leaked into the room.
Shuichi called out to Suzuki-sensei, “Yeah, give us a few more minutes, will ya?” at the affirmative noise, the singer’s hands left the author’s and went back to the fly of his pants, “ I can do this, Yuki, just not with out you by my side…” Shuichi pulled away from Yuki’s body, “you will stay by my side won’t you?”
Shuichi looked into Yuki’s eyes. Yuki leaned down, kissed Shuichi softly and said the most beautiful “Yes” Shuichi has ever heard before.
Shuichi jumped off the table, pulled down his pants and underwear, pulled down the robe, and hopped up on the table again. Yuki sat in the chair by the examination table, grabbing hold of Shuichi hand again… “You can come in now.” the vocalist called to the doctor that was waiting out side of the door.
Suzuki-sensei wheeled in a device that looked like a TV screen with a cord coming out of it. The doctor looked at the couple. “Are we going to go through the procedure?”
“Yep,” Shuichi chirped, trying to be calm, “so how do you want me to be?”
“If you can turn over on to your side, which ever side you’re more comfortable on is fine.” as Shuichi laid down on his side, facing Yuki, The doctor explained the procedure. “I’ll insert this tube into your anus, and the camera on the tip will feed into the screen. We’ll be able to see anything the camera is pointed at.” the doctor then put on a pair of gloves and asked kindly, “Are you ready to start?”(1) Getting an affirmative nod, he put lubricant on the tube and slowly put it in the younger man’s anus.
The screen flickered and showed a reddish-pink canal, and started to slowly move forward. Shuichi held on to Yuki’s hands tightly and Yuki did his best to comfort the singer, while being morbidly fascinated in to seeing into the singer in a whole new way. The doctor’s eyes stayed focused on the screen, sporadically making a noise in the back of his throat, either agreeing or disagreeing with himself. Once they got past, what Yuki thought was the prostate, the doctor’s eyes widened and moved backwards. “See there,” the doctor began, not really talking to either of them just talking at them, “That is not supposed to be there.” He pointed out a small hole almost completely covered be the prostate, it was no bigger then the top of a ball point pin is reality, but on screen it was magnified. “That is your cervix Shindo-san. And it seems to be protected by the prostate…” Suzuki-sensei trailed off, looking off into nothingness, he shook himself and turned to Shuichi. “Shindo-san I will be removing the tube now.” then he slowly removed the tube from Shuichi. Shuichi flinched and sighed as the tube was removed completely. “You get redressed and I’ll take these machines out of here.” he grabbed the ultrasound and the sigmoidoscope and wheeled them out and shut the door.
The singer put on his clothes on autopilot, staring blankly ahead. Yuki grabbed Shuichi’s arm and pulled the singer to his chest. The singer relaxed in to his husband-to-be and started to sing/whisper “Raining like Magic”(2) in an attempt to calm himself and Yuki down. Yuki started rocking back and forth in time to the song. The doctor came back in and sighed.
“Well now is a good time to talk about your options. You can either keep the child or you can terminate the pregnancy. It’s your choice. You can call our office and tell us your answer later after you made you decision and we’ll schedule the appointment necessary. But right now, you’re free to go.” Dr. Suzuki went to the door and ushered them out.
On the way home not one of the men talked, both contemplating the news they got today. The car was filled with a tension that you could cut with a knife, and outside the gloomy rain came down harder, reflecting the feelings of the occupants of the car. When they got back to the apartment, after a very unconformable elevator ride with another occupant of the building, Shuichi started talking.
“We could get rid of it, if you want…”
You all probably hate me right now…not only did it take me forever to update I leave it at a cliffhanger. Lol Poor people, waiting this long for a chapter and all you really got was a cliffhanger…I would kill me in your shoes…~hides from anything that is coming for her~
(1) This procedure is accurate to the best of my knowledge… only one thing is wrong and that is that the prep for this takes a day of fasting on a liquid only diet and laxatives…but I take artistic license on that one…
(2) Where I got stuck at for about a month… and I changed the song a few times… and I still didn’t chose one everyone knew…but for anyone who is interested “Raining like magic” is by Raffi…I think…and it’s on the Fern Gully soundtrack.
OK! Poll time everybody, this poll is on the baby!
Should Shuichi have:
A Girl
A Boy
Twins: Girl, Boy
Twins: Girls
Twins: Boys
(For you morbid people) A Miscarriage……
OR an abortion
EVERYONE CAST YOUR BALLOTS!!! This is a multi-chapter poll…. It ends when I say it ends…..well not the last option…that will end next chapter…. What will Eithne do next?
PS: THANK YOU EVERYONE THAT SUPPORTED ME THOUGH ME LATEST TRIALS… EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOU ARE MY HEROES AND THIS CHAPTER WOULDN’T HAVE BEEN POSTED IF IT WEREN’T FOR YOU!!!! ~kisses to you all~
PPS: I’m sorry this chapter didn’t get posted in the allotted time I allowed myself… but I’m not that late on it…just a few days, it’s just…nothing was going like it was supposed to, so I re-wrote over and over and over again…and I still don’t like it, but this will have to do for now I’ll re-write it later anyway. And it will be beta-ed if all goes according to plan…and I get around to it.