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Demoness Of Desire

By: Bishonen
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Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 9
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Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter Four

Chapter Four





Motoko woke up. (Was that all a dream?)



"No, my pet, it was real. Everything really did happen, and now that you're awake, we should get to work. We still have a pretty good sized choice of playthings to break in," Lilith said, calling up images of everyone that still had free will. "I think you'll have a lot of fun with the innocent ones. Besides, these two have strong wills," Lilith said, indicating Kanako and Naru. Motoko thought about it for a few seconds.



"Okay, let's start with Su. She's caused me a lot of trouble. I'd really like to completely destroy that annoying personality of hers," Motoko said.



Lilith started to leave the room. "You're becoming almost as cruel as me, and you're not even halfway through your transformation...I can't wait to see what you'll be like later."



The two of them went in search of Su, and found her before very long. Before she even had a chance to speak a single word, Motoko snapped her fingers. Haruka appeared behind the young girl and placed a ball gag in her mouth.



"I figured it was easier to just shut her up right now," Motoko said. Haruka then handed her a pair of handcuffs.



"Oh my, you've already gotten quite good at using your powers, and without any training, I might add," Lilith said, honestly impressed. "A shame you were ever a human to begin with; you're clearly a natural demoness."



Motoko walked up to the odd foreigner. "I never could stand you. You've never been anything except a pain and an annoyance," Motoko said, lightly pinching one of Su's nipples through the thin material of her shirt. Because she was still so young, she had no need for a bra. Haruka snapped the cuffs in place.



"You may leave now."



Motoko looked at Su. Her eyes seemed to hold a small amount of fear, but as soon as they met the inky void of Motoko's, it seemed as though all conscious thoughts evaporated.



"I know that you've always had a bit of a thing for me...but you never once really thought about how that or any of your actions affected me, or anyone else. You've always been so busy entertaining yourself that you've barely ever thought to care for how you might have hurt your friends. You've hurt Shinobu's feelings, upset me, and endangered all our lives, just because you wanted to have fun. Such as that stupid machine that stole my first kiss, for example. Well, now you're going to care only for MY entertainment, and I'm going to take something far more precious from you," Motoko said, pushing Su against the wall. She used her long nails, which had only grown sharper, to slice open Su's shirt. Motoko lowered her head and placed her mouth over one of the younger girl's tiny breasts, easily covering the entire thing. Su moaned as best as she could around the gag that had put been placed in her mouth. Motoko flicked her tongue across the hardened nub of flesh that was Su's nipple. She pulled away. She then pulled down Su's skirt, and she sliced the edge of her panties, letting them fall away, exposing her practically hairless quim. Motoko ran the very tip of her fingernail along Su's labia, before she plunged her finger in, piercing Su's hymen instantly. A muttered groan of pain could be heard as blood leaked out around Motoko's finger, which she pulled away. A few drops fell onto the hallway floor.



Motoko brought the crimson coated digit to her mouth and licked it clean. "Back before I began these changes, I never knew how sweet blood really was."



Motoko then dropped to her knees and began to lick away at the ample amount of juice that had gathered. "You really like having your pussy licked, don't you?" Motoko asked, not really caring about the answer as she plunged her face deep into Su's crotch again, shoving her tongue in as deep as she could and rubbing it against the slick inner walls of Su's pussy.



Lilith walked up in front of Su. "Tell you what. I'll remove that gag, but you can't make too much noise, because we don't want to draw any attention. Deal?" Su nodded. Lilith unhooked the straps of the gag. Su let out a slight moan but kept her word and was doing her best to keep quite.



"Well, while you're busy pleasing her, I'll do the same for you," Lilith said, placing her foot between Motoko's legs and brushing her toe against the front of Motoko's pussy, occasionally rubbing her razor sharp nails against her clit or using her toes to slightly part the lips, letting a cool breeze in, causing Motoko to moan deeply into Su's cunt.



After a while, Su had the first orgasm of her life. Her entire body shook, and her knees could no longer support her. She began to fall to the floor. Motoko kept moving lower, so that as Su's ass touched the ground, Motoko was still eating her out.



Motoko now had her hips up in the air, so Lilith decided to have a bit more fun with her. She got down and licked Motoko's pussy from behind, the three of them forming an incomplete daisy chain.



After Su had two more orgasms, Motoko sat up. "Now tell me Su, since you now know that I can give you fun like you've never experience before, and since you look up to me so much, do you want to make me happy? Be mine, and you will have fun like this and more, and I shall be very happy."



Su nodded, only half awake. Having had so many orgasms in such a short amount of time had really weakened what little rational thought she had.



"Very well then," Motoko said, licking away most of the cum that coated her face. She then sank her fangs into Su's neck.



As soon as she pulled away, pain washed over her, more than she could even imagine was possible, and it was followed by the same darkness of her first transformation. She shrieked in agony, and was consumed by darkness...







Motoko's eyes fluttered open. Everything was blurry. She could hear Lilith's voice, but only barely. It was distant and foggy. But as her senses cleared, she could tell the sounds were moans of pleasure.



"Mistress," Motoko croaked in a low weak voice.



"Okay, that's enough for now, but get a glass of water for your other mistress."



Motoko's sight cleared completely now, and she saw Su in her adult form, completely naked, putting on basically nothing more than a sheet and leaving the room.



"So you're awake. To be honest, I was almost afraid you'd die. The transformation this time was completely internal. You no longer need to eat or drink or even sleep. Your energy and other needs comes solely from the sexual pleasure that you and your slaves feel,"Lilith explained.



Then why send Su to get me water?" Motoko asked, sitting up. Her body was a bit sore, but it wasn't as bad as what a hard day of training would have caused.



"Because it will make you feel better. Just because you don't need it doesn't mean it won't help you. You simply are no longer dependant on it. That doesn't mean you can't still enjoy a refreshing drink, a quiet and leisurely nap, or a delicious meal."



A few seconds later, Su returned. Motoko got her first good look at how Su had changed. She was in her adult form, but it was slightly different. Her eyes had turned bright gold, and she had a pair of small fangs that were visible even with her closed mouth.



(I can't believe I passed out. I'm still far too weak), Motoko thought as she sipped at the water. Its coolness seemed to spread out through her entire body.



“You really shouldn't think like that. You're not the first person that I've changed but you are the first to survive that part of the process. Only a handful of others were even strong enough to become complete enough demonesses to get this far, and of those few that did, they all perished by this part. You should be proud," Lilith said, running her hands through Motoko's long hair.



"Now that you feel better, I think you should play with her. There's a change that you can't see," Lilith said, getting off the bed.



"Come over here and let me see what you can do," Motoko ordered, not really wanting to get out of bed. Su pulled back the sheets and got between Motoko's legs. She reached down and lightly brushed her finger against her own clit. Motoko was impressed to see it grow four time larger than normal.



"You can start now," Lilith said as she moved to the end of the bed, lowering herself onto Motoko's foot. Su began to pump her hips. Her enlarged clit pressed against Motoko's, while very slightly parting her lower lips. It was an odd experience, but Motoko liked it. She sat up slightly and looked Su in the eyes. They were bright gold, and her pupils had become vertical slits, like a cat's. But the most noticeable thing was that now, like all the other girls, there was nothing there except for lust and obedience.



Motoko grabbed hold of the back of her head and kissed her. Motoko's breasts pressed against Su's, which had grown considerably larger. Their nipples would brush against each other, causing a bit more pleasure. They broke the kiss, and Su began to grind her hips harder, pressing her enhanced clit further in as best as she could manage.



After a little while Motoko felt Lilith's pussy clench around her foot as she came. A few seconds later, Motoko also came, setting Su off.



"Let's get cleaned up, and after that, go for Shinobu," Motoko said.



"Sounds good. But for clean up, I don't think one alone is enough," Lilith said, snapping her fingers. The other three slaves appeared. Kitsune and Mutsumi tended to Lilith, licking and caressing every single inch of her body, while Su and Haruka did the same for Motoko, giving her a full body tongue bath. Both of the demonesses came again after all of the cum had been licked away, and their slaves had to lick the new cum away as well.
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