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Category:
+M to R › One Piece
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
7
Views:
9,135
Reviews:
51
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own One Piece, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Cahpter #5
A/N: umm… this counts as “soon”, right? Man, I’ve really come a long way. At first I felt bad if the chapters were updated more than 1 day apart. Wow. No way could that last. In other news, I got three (count ‘em three) reviews last time! WOO! THAT’S AWESOME considering it wasn’t really worth much. I feed off of review energy. Without it my body loses form and my head implodes. 0.o not a pretty site…. Ew it’s on the ceiling.
Disclaimer: *sighs* I don’t own one piece…. Nor am I making money off of this unfortunately. Don’t sue me. Not like you’d get much any way. A quarter, a bus pass, and a gift card to book-a-million that has $0.13 on it. (really that’s all that’s in my wallet right now.)
Important info: I rock. Just kidding. In the manga this one takes place in between the end of chapter 22 and the beginning of chapter 23. For those who don’t have access to the manga or are to lazy to go look in it This takes place basically right after the last one, and I’m following the series though the manga not the anime so some stuff might seem out of place.
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Chapter #5
Apparently while I was asleep they found some island. I took note of this a soon as woke up due to the fact that we suddenly had an over abundance of fruit on board. I look around. Nighttime again. Nami is no doubt ably asleep, but from the looks of it Luffy’s still awake.
His body laid out of the deck looking up at the sky. He seemed entranced by what ever he’s looking at. Unable to look away as he studies it. I look up but there’s nothing there. Just sky. Nothing else. My gaze fixes itself back on my captain still amazed by something I can’t see.
“it’s awesome, isn’t it?” his eyes have now turned to see me. Wide. Expecting an answer, and why lie to him.
“what is?” I had already looked and seen nothing. There was nothing there. And if something was ’awesome’ like he said it would stick out, right?
“stars!” he voice chants the word almost sing-songily as if he had never seen them before. Stars? What could the big deal about stars be? There’s about nothing more ordinary than stars. I let out a ‘humph’ and give him the “you’re-kidding-right-?” look, but he can’t see it. He’s already refocused on the sky. I follow his gaze upward, and I saw it.
It wasn’t just sky anymore. It was a million glorious shinning lights blazing despite the fact that endless darkness surrounded them. It was a bight crescent moon in the middle of it all shining the brightest out matching all the others, but yet the others still dared to shine even though out match. It was an endless blanket covering all. Seeing all. Watching over all. It was twinkling shimmers light up even the darkness that would engulf everything else. It was… well… awesome.
“I…I guess you’re right, Luffy.” I still studied the sky as if I was seeing it for the first time. It was so amazingly beautiful. Why had I never seen it before? Luffy showed me. I would have taken it’s glorious existence for granted if Luffy hadn’t opened my eyes. He really is special beyond being special ed.
I turned to look over to him to find he had more to where he was now sitting right beside me. Smiling as he looked up at the beauty I recently discovered. Every one of his breaths seemed to be a small laugh as they came it a repeated rhythm. I wonder what else I’m missing out on and how he sees the world. Amazed by every thing, finding light in darkness, hope in loss, truth in lies, and honor in everything. Pulling all that off and still being a complete idiot. He’s truly amazing.
“What?” he asks now looking at me. I hadn’t even realized I was staring until he broke my trance. He was more intriguing than the stars. I couldn’t tear my gaze away even now that I was aware of what I was doing I still couldn’t look away.
He smiles a me but it’s not that tooth filled grin he normally wears. It’s a small smile. He looks almost nervous. I tell myself that it’s not right to keep him waiting.
“I don’t know” was a I could manage to get out. Not breaking my gaze from him once. He smiles a little more. My stomach tightens and my heart rate speeds up although I’m not really sure why. His smile goes back now and his eyes brighten. It looks like he can read my thoughts. Like he knows what’s happening within me even though I don’t understand it myself. His hand raises itself to rest of my cheek.
“Zoro…” he half-whispers closing his eyes half-way. And then leans closer to my face than he been before. His breath meets mine and we share air but he stops right before his lips touch mine. I don’t move away, but I’m really confused now. I look at his eyes which are watching mine intently. Those huge, deep black orbs. And for a moment I swear I can read his thoughts. He waiting for me. He doesn’t want to force me into anything. There’s space between us and its up to me to fill it. My eyes close as I push forward meeting him.
My first kiss. I never had time for girls I was too busy training and they didn’t really interest me anyway. Well all but one, but I was too young to think of her that way. Still don’t; I’ve found someone special. His tongue runs itself over my lips and only then do I truly register what‘s happening.
He’s a guy and I’m a guy. He’s my captain and I his first-mate. It’s a business or maybe friend relationship. Or it’s supposed to be. I want to feel his tongue with mine. Every inch of me wonders what he tastes like. I want this, but I can’t. it’s just not right. What would people think if they saw us? Wait, since when did I care what people think? I don’t! I live my own way by my on code. I never done something I’ll regret and won’t do one now. Which is why I can’t push Luffy away. I want this and who ever comments can go to hell. my mouth begins to open.
I hear a creak of boards and suddenly my resolve doesn’t seem so strong as I push him away from me. Nami. She comes out on the deck of her ship and lets out a small yawn covering her mouth with hand. She looks over to us only seeing her two crewmates sitting on deck together. One laying on the deck like he’s been pushed and me sitting up looking uncomfortable.
“you guys been fighting? Geez, men.” she shakes her head. “You guys need to relax a little and enjoy the little things… like stars.” her hand raises itself to point toward the sky.
At this moment I’m about ready to panic afraid Luffy’s going to come out and say something like ’Well, we weren’t fighting. We were kissing!”. oh god. He would be dumb to openly admit it, but then again why am I so desperate to hide it? Uh, geez. This is why I don’t have time for relationships. They’re so damn confusing.
“Well-” he began.
Please don’t say it please don’t say it please don’t say it. I silently pray to myself.
“Well, I guess you’re right, Nami.”
She smiles a little and small blush appears on her cheeks. She gets off her boat and walks over to us finally sitting down between the two of us.
The rest of the night was consumed by star-gazing with Nami. I looked back up. The stars had lost their twinkle. So instead of gazing at them I watched Luffy. He never looked my way to busy looking at stars that Nami said were part of some constellation or another.
Will he-no. Can he forgive me?
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A/N: there happy now. Hopefully that makes up for last “chapter”. REVIEW RESPONCES!
Reyn: you think I update often?! How is that possible? Really, I only update often enough to keep my fans… weird. Anyway, I definatly think that you should write a one piece fic! ^-^ there just aren’t enough of them! Thanks for reviewing even though last chapter sucked!
NOIP: YAY! “spiffy” is my third favorite word!!!!!! The fact that your review had this word in makes it awesome. Thanks!
Noriko Sakuma: you never let me down do you? Hee hee. I love you’re constant reviews! It feels like we’re best friends on e-mail or something. I don’t know just ignore that. I am evil and I hope this is enough fluff to last you until my next update. Thax! *huggles*
Quick question- I’ve written a little more of my horribly written angst fic. Should I finish and post or not?
Remember REVIEWS ARE MY LIFE FORCE!!!!! I NEEDS THEM PRECIOUS!! NEEDS!!!
Disclaimer: *sighs* I don’t own one piece…. Nor am I making money off of this unfortunately. Don’t sue me. Not like you’d get much any way. A quarter, a bus pass, and a gift card to book-a-million that has $0.13 on it. (really that’s all that’s in my wallet right now.)
Important info: I rock. Just kidding. In the manga this one takes place in between the end of chapter 22 and the beginning of chapter 23. For those who don’t have access to the manga or are to lazy to go look in it This takes place basically right after the last one, and I’m following the series though the manga not the anime so some stuff might seem out of place.
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Chapter #5
Apparently while I was asleep they found some island. I took note of this a soon as woke up due to the fact that we suddenly had an over abundance of fruit on board. I look around. Nighttime again. Nami is no doubt ably asleep, but from the looks of it Luffy’s still awake.
His body laid out of the deck looking up at the sky. He seemed entranced by what ever he’s looking at. Unable to look away as he studies it. I look up but there’s nothing there. Just sky. Nothing else. My gaze fixes itself back on my captain still amazed by something I can’t see.
“it’s awesome, isn’t it?” his eyes have now turned to see me. Wide. Expecting an answer, and why lie to him.
“what is?” I had already looked and seen nothing. There was nothing there. And if something was ’awesome’ like he said it would stick out, right?
“stars!” he voice chants the word almost sing-songily as if he had never seen them before. Stars? What could the big deal about stars be? There’s about nothing more ordinary than stars. I let out a ‘humph’ and give him the “you’re-kidding-right-?” look, but he can’t see it. He’s already refocused on the sky. I follow his gaze upward, and I saw it.
It wasn’t just sky anymore. It was a million glorious shinning lights blazing despite the fact that endless darkness surrounded them. It was a bight crescent moon in the middle of it all shining the brightest out matching all the others, but yet the others still dared to shine even though out match. It was an endless blanket covering all. Seeing all. Watching over all. It was twinkling shimmers light up even the darkness that would engulf everything else. It was… well… awesome.
“I…I guess you’re right, Luffy.” I still studied the sky as if I was seeing it for the first time. It was so amazingly beautiful. Why had I never seen it before? Luffy showed me. I would have taken it’s glorious existence for granted if Luffy hadn’t opened my eyes. He really is special beyond being special ed.
I turned to look over to him to find he had more to where he was now sitting right beside me. Smiling as he looked up at the beauty I recently discovered. Every one of his breaths seemed to be a small laugh as they came it a repeated rhythm. I wonder what else I’m missing out on and how he sees the world. Amazed by every thing, finding light in darkness, hope in loss, truth in lies, and honor in everything. Pulling all that off and still being a complete idiot. He’s truly amazing.
“What?” he asks now looking at me. I hadn’t even realized I was staring until he broke my trance. He was more intriguing than the stars. I couldn’t tear my gaze away even now that I was aware of what I was doing I still couldn’t look away.
He smiles a me but it’s not that tooth filled grin he normally wears. It’s a small smile. He looks almost nervous. I tell myself that it’s not right to keep him waiting.
“I don’t know” was a I could manage to get out. Not breaking my gaze from him once. He smiles a little more. My stomach tightens and my heart rate speeds up although I’m not really sure why. His smile goes back now and his eyes brighten. It looks like he can read my thoughts. Like he knows what’s happening within me even though I don’t understand it myself. His hand raises itself to rest of my cheek.
“Zoro…” he half-whispers closing his eyes half-way. And then leans closer to my face than he been before. His breath meets mine and we share air but he stops right before his lips touch mine. I don’t move away, but I’m really confused now. I look at his eyes which are watching mine intently. Those huge, deep black orbs. And for a moment I swear I can read his thoughts. He waiting for me. He doesn’t want to force me into anything. There’s space between us and its up to me to fill it. My eyes close as I push forward meeting him.
My first kiss. I never had time for girls I was too busy training and they didn’t really interest me anyway. Well all but one, but I was too young to think of her that way. Still don’t; I’ve found someone special. His tongue runs itself over my lips and only then do I truly register what‘s happening.
He’s a guy and I’m a guy. He’s my captain and I his first-mate. It’s a business or maybe friend relationship. Or it’s supposed to be. I want to feel his tongue with mine. Every inch of me wonders what he tastes like. I want this, but I can’t. it’s just not right. What would people think if they saw us? Wait, since when did I care what people think? I don’t! I live my own way by my on code. I never done something I’ll regret and won’t do one now. Which is why I can’t push Luffy away. I want this and who ever comments can go to hell. my mouth begins to open.
I hear a creak of boards and suddenly my resolve doesn’t seem so strong as I push him away from me. Nami. She comes out on the deck of her ship and lets out a small yawn covering her mouth with hand. She looks over to us only seeing her two crewmates sitting on deck together. One laying on the deck like he’s been pushed and me sitting up looking uncomfortable.
“you guys been fighting? Geez, men.” she shakes her head. “You guys need to relax a little and enjoy the little things… like stars.” her hand raises itself to point toward the sky.
At this moment I’m about ready to panic afraid Luffy’s going to come out and say something like ’Well, we weren’t fighting. We were kissing!”. oh god. He would be dumb to openly admit it, but then again why am I so desperate to hide it? Uh, geez. This is why I don’t have time for relationships. They’re so damn confusing.
“Well-” he began.
Please don’t say it please don’t say it please don’t say it. I silently pray to myself.
“Well, I guess you’re right, Nami.”
She smiles a little and small blush appears on her cheeks. She gets off her boat and walks over to us finally sitting down between the two of us.
The rest of the night was consumed by star-gazing with Nami. I looked back up. The stars had lost their twinkle. So instead of gazing at them I watched Luffy. He never looked my way to busy looking at stars that Nami said were part of some constellation or another.
Will he-no. Can he forgive me?
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A/N: there happy now. Hopefully that makes up for last “chapter”. REVIEW RESPONCES!
Reyn: you think I update often?! How is that possible? Really, I only update often enough to keep my fans… weird. Anyway, I definatly think that you should write a one piece fic! ^-^ there just aren’t enough of them! Thanks for reviewing even though last chapter sucked!
NOIP: YAY! “spiffy” is my third favorite word!!!!!! The fact that your review had this word in makes it awesome. Thanks!
Noriko Sakuma: you never let me down do you? Hee hee. I love you’re constant reviews! It feels like we’re best friends on e-mail or something. I don’t know just ignore that. I am evil and I hope this is enough fluff to last you until my next update. Thax! *huggles*
Quick question- I’ve written a little more of my horribly written angst fic. Should I finish and post or not?
Remember REVIEWS ARE MY LIFE FORCE!!!!! I NEEDS THEM PRECIOUS!! NEEDS!!!