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Breaking Ointment
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters or make money off of this story.
A/N: Yeah thank you for all of those who have reviewed! It’s not many but I love it still! ^o^ I hope you like the final chapter of Greatest!
Greatest
By Eule Vix
Chapter 5: Breaking Ointment
I felt torn, I was mixed in my fear and emotion as I felt Eiri’s hand slide up my shirt, his fingers pinching at my skin. I was starting to shake again, my body arguing with my mind, saying horrible things were going to happen to me. I knew who hovered over me, but the memory screamed and thrashed in my muscles, wanting me to run. I felt Eiri’s hand getting closer to my chest as my panic built. We both knew that I might have had some trouble, but not like this. As his hand pinched my nipple a sharp short screech came from my mouth as I grabbed Eiri’s shoulders, gripping tightly.
Eiri stopped and stared down at me. My eyes were tightly closed and pictures began to flutter past of what had been done weeks ago. As I cringed at the memory I felt a cold drop hit the small exposed part of my stomach. The memories disappeared from my mind’s eye, and my eyes shot open. My eyes locked with Eiri’s and a feeling rose that I could not escape from. One that had almost torn Eiri from me, it had come back, tearing apart Eiri; his eyes said it all. A horrid pain tingled through me, greater then any fear or sorrow. I knew that Eiri’s past, because of what had happened with me, once again had started to haunt him.
A tear was held at the end of each of his eyes as he looked at me. I knew then that, all this time that I had been in the hospital, all the days I hadn’t seen him he deliberately stayed away from me. He blamed himself for what had happened, like last time. The real reason why the men who hurt me weren’t dead was only because someone stopped Eiri, with the pain and anguish that mixed in his eyes struck my heart; the red claws that tore me apart ravished and cut him inside as much as it did me. I should have known better then to think the pain was one sided. I looked at him, not a wisp of breath it seemed came from us. The sadness and anger at myself welled and bubbled in my heart, and when a third tear fell from Eiri my soul could no longer withstand the dam of shock I was in. I broke the silence, in cries of desperation to Eiri, to stop him from killing himself on the inside.
“It’s not your fault! It’s not your fault.”
I said it over and over again, wanting the dark spaces of his mind I had fought with for years to understand he was not to blame. I should have known that my greatest weakness, my greatest fault, my greatest strength, everything that I could have feared and loved was in Eiri. That no matter what happened to me, or to him, it shouldn’t matter.
“It’s not your fault Yuki…don’t blame your self.”
As I spoke I looked at him, I needed him now more then ever, as he needed me. We could only work this though holding each other up as the memories of our bad past faded. The fear of the past rape of me disintegrated, it could no longer light a fire to burn away all I held dear. I leaned up, kissing Eiri, pulling him down and quickly turning him onto his back. I broke the kiss and as I sat onto I saw the tears were gone from his face, though he now diverted his eyes from mine. I cringed, I couldn’t let him run from it as he always did. I reached and pushed his face towards mine as I kissed him again, easing his mouth open. I reached under his shirt, realizing then how cold my fingers were compared to his chest. I gradually pulled his shirt off only breaking our kiss only for a brief moment, long enough for Eiri to take a few quick breaths. I threw his shirt to the side and began to pinch at his nipples; he became a uneasy, wiggling slightly underneath me. I ignored him, knowing he didn’t fully understand yet the why to my actions.
I rocked against his clothed member, which I could feel despite the denim of his black pants. As I moved up and down against him I felt the small tinge and pull of my own being restricted in my pants. I stopped pinching and kissing Eiri, who in turn stopped wiggling under my touch. His eyes burned in me as I took off his pants, caressing his legs and kissing lightly. Once I had the tight clothing off I pulled mine off as well, breathing in at the cold that quickly pinched my penis. I sat on Eiri’s chest breathing hard, I didn’t know if I could do what I needed to do next. I was scared again, but before the pained memory could grip me again I looked at Eiri who still stared at me. It wasn’t menacing or cold, it was raw and confused. I moved under his gaze, I needed to cause I could fell the fear closing again and grabbed the lubricant from the bedside desk drawer. I squeezed the bottle, watching it drizzle into my hand. After I hand a generous amount in my hand I leaned back down and kissed Eiri again as I rubbed the lubricant over his penis that occasionally pulsed in my hand. After making his member slick and wet, I held myself up and I pushed what was left of the lubricant into myself. I wasn’t used to the angle I was at, nor was I truly prepared because of the weeks I spent in the hospital bed; but I pushed my finger as far and as deep as I could. A chill sparked a long forgotten felling in me, a want that was animalistic in its feeling. The heat in my body rose as I explored myself and divulged further into Eiri’s mouth. Only minutes passed as I quickly added more fingers into myself, my body burned underneath Eiri’s hands that now roamed over my body, and with the hunger in my gut for what was to come the cold fingers of pain almost were forgotten.
I was ready and my body wanted more, the yearn was insatiable and would slowly drive me mad until I quenched it. But as I removed my fingers and broke once again I felt the grip of fear instill in me. No matter how fast I ran from it, it would always catch me. I clenched my eyes as I positioned myself over Eiri’s member. I froze, it wet with lubricant in my hand and pulsing at my opening. I took in a deep breath, shaking and scared, I slowly push myself down as the head of Eiri’s member pushed against my opening. I pushed a little harder, flashes of my rape shown behind my closed eyes and tears started to fall again. I couldn’t pull my self down any further, my arms and legs visibly shook as I felt the air being squeezed out of me from the chilled grip of my recent past. My eyes were closed tight, and I felt that the world was spinning around me. I felt my body stretch and land with a soft thud against the bed. I opened my eyes to find that the spinning I had felt was not of my thoughts and I now lay with my back and Eiri again on top of me. Eiri leaned down and kissed me, his eyes open, glaring into mine. I knew I had forced his sudden change, though now he was with me and we could pull though; my heart told me so. The cold hands fell from my body, replaced with warmth of Eiri’s hands. Then with a small thrust from Eiri, his tip broke through my opening and stretched my walls. I whined into our kiss, wrapping my arms around his neck, holding tightly. The pain quickly disappeared and I was filled with a serge of excitement. I tightened my grip, clawing little marks into Eiri’s back, kissing him deeper; and in the sway of it all I pushed his member a little further into me as well. I could feel his smirk in our kiss as he felt my excitement suddenly flow though. Our mouths latched together, our tongues tangled, and as we part strings of saliva kept us tied together even as we parted. Before the clear strings broke I slipped my tongue again into Eiri’s mouth as I sucked on his bottom lip, my small wet muscle exploring the mouth of my lover, flavored with the dulled tang of smoke. He pushed more of his member in slowly filling me. The pain still lingered but the slickness of my insides and the small throbs of his member gave rise to a heat in my body burning it away. My face became flushed as I nibbled and sucked and bit harder in our kissing and my clawing. Once I felt him in me completely, my body adjusted, desperation for movement filled me.
“Yuki…move. I want to feel you move in my ass…Yuki!”
As I started wanting to move he only looked and smirked at me and I soon became desperate and overcome, wiggling underneath him.
“I can’t hear you Shu.”
“Move! It’s hot, so move! I want your cum in me.”
I wined louder wanting my throws of passion to be fulfilled, but he just smirked. Without warning I was picked up and soon sitting on Eiri.
“I did the hard part, so if you want me to move that bad then move.”
He leaned and kissed me as I held myself up, bobbing slowly on his dick. My muscles sucked and clenched as I moved. My gut tightened and pushed for release. I moved faster, my cock rubbing against Eiri’s pale stomach as we ravished each other’s mouth.
“I’m gonna cum. I’m gonna cum.”
I muttered between the breaks in our kiss. Eiri’s hand reached down to my member and quickly squeezed it stopping me from cumming.
“Aahh, Yuki!”
“Why are you cumming so soon, Shu? We barely started.”
His voice dripped with lust, as mine whimpered as I moved.
“Yuki, let me cum! I haven’t done this in so long! I want to cum!”
I started to feel the sweat rolling down my body and the firm harsh grip Eiri had on my member. It hurt but it only added to the build that I wanted to let out. Eiri grabbed me and pushed me back onto the bed. He started to thrust and drive deep into me as he leaned forward and filled my mouth again with his tongue. He kept the tight hold on my member as I whimpered in his mouth as I moved my hips in time with his. I placed my hands on his back and started to dig in as the want to release became overbearing. I broke my lips from his crying out loudly.
“Yuki! I can’t wait any longer!”
Not stopping his thrusts he relinquished the grapple on my penis and started to stroke it in time with his thrusts. The hot pressure in my belly released with a great force. I felt my member pulse in his hand as my cum shot out dripping down Eiri’s hand and jetting onto both of our stomachs. Eiri never stopped in his fast thrusts and stroked my member as though he was milking the cum from it.
“A lot’s coming out Shu.”
“It’s still coming out I can’t stop! Stop stroking it I can’t stop!”
“Now I’m not the one who came early, was I?”
After one last large squirt, which ended up on my face, I finally stopped cumming. Still hard and breathing hard I continued to rock with Eiri. Eiri let got of my dick, looking at all the cum I had shot over both of us.
“Look at the mess you made, and it was just the first time. Do you even have any cum left?”
“Stop teasing me! Just keep moving! I want to feel you deeper in my ass!”
“Fine. But lets put your mouth to work. You’re being too noisy.”
I was hot and breathing hard with my mouth open. Eiri moved his cum covered hand to my mouth and quickly slipped in three of his fingers. I licked my tongue over his long fingers. My cum tasted tangy, thick, slightly stale, and salty from being on Eiri’s hands. I gagged a little at the taste at first though I ignored it. Eiri thrusts became deeper and quickened in pace. I tried to move in time with his thrusts, though quickly my muscles started to burn and I couldn’t keep the speed. Soon found myself being pounded into as I tried my best to rock back every other thrust. Eiri moved his fingers deeper into my mouth and started to finger my mouth as though he was preparing me. With the taste of my cum now gone I could smell the musky lingering scent of my member on his hands. I became more and more excited by it all. Eiri’s lengthy fingers moving in and out of my mouth, the taste of my own cum, and the deep feel of his member in me as it twitched and pulsed periodically. I soon found myself cumming a second time, unhindered by any hand and more intense then the last. I arched my back off the bed and I came finding my member being rubbed against Eiri’s stomach as I ejaculated onto him.
“Again? I didn’t think you had any left.”
My moans and whimpers were muffled. My body felt wet as I dripped with sweat and cum. I was wanting more though I knew Eiri couldn’t move any faster or go any deeper in me. Eiri removed his fingers from my mouth and pinched my nipples making them stand and quickly building me to my third release.
“Yuki! More…deeper...”
Eiri ignored my request and instead stroke my member and stroked the tip periodically with his hand.
“Yuki!”
“Too noisy.”
He against kissed me, entangling our tongues. I was again whining as he kept his pace and the build below my stomach grew. I started to feel his penis pulse more violently and my wall around it started to spasm as well as we both gasped for breath in our kissing. It didn’t take long for me to be close to cumming again except that Eiri was close as well. My muscles tightened and my fingers dug imprints onto Eiri and he gripped my member tighter. He broke our kiss and pushed one last time into me as he spilled his cum into me. I could feel the sticky hot substance moving further into me as more of Eiri’s cum spilt out.
“Yuki!”
The hot juice wiggling its way in me pushed me over the edge and I came one last time shooting my cum over my stomach and getting some on my face for a second time,
Once our releases ceased I felt my love more Eiri bubble up and glow from me; and as I looked up at Eiri I could see that angelic smile I see so rarely. His eyes and smile said more then any story or song could tell.
Despite the problems ahead nothing can over come us. I complete him and he completes me. His is my greatest weakness, my greatest strength, my greatest fault, my greatest love. And whether or not he ever says it, I am for him as well.
END
A/N: Hey hope you all liked it!! It’s the first story for me to ever complete!!! Yeah!!! This was kind of an experiment (to long to explain though) and it turned out a great way for me to do my stories so hopefully I can use this new method for me to defeat my procrastination! I want to say thank you to my friends Ariel and Alex and my beta SilverDeathAngel, for bearing with me and being so wonderful! And my friends for giving me some praise and conviction which helped me finish my story! I’m glad that everyone who reviewed my story liked it and I hope that everyone liked the last chapter of Greatest! Look for more stories in the near future!
See ya!
~ Eule Vix
A/N: Yeah thank you for all of those who have reviewed! It’s not many but I love it still! ^o^ I hope you like the final chapter of Greatest!
Greatest
By Eule Vix
Chapter 5: Breaking Ointment
I felt torn, I was mixed in my fear and emotion as I felt Eiri’s hand slide up my shirt, his fingers pinching at my skin. I was starting to shake again, my body arguing with my mind, saying horrible things were going to happen to me. I knew who hovered over me, but the memory screamed and thrashed in my muscles, wanting me to run. I felt Eiri’s hand getting closer to my chest as my panic built. We both knew that I might have had some trouble, but not like this. As his hand pinched my nipple a sharp short screech came from my mouth as I grabbed Eiri’s shoulders, gripping tightly.
Eiri stopped and stared down at me. My eyes were tightly closed and pictures began to flutter past of what had been done weeks ago. As I cringed at the memory I felt a cold drop hit the small exposed part of my stomach. The memories disappeared from my mind’s eye, and my eyes shot open. My eyes locked with Eiri’s and a feeling rose that I could not escape from. One that had almost torn Eiri from me, it had come back, tearing apart Eiri; his eyes said it all. A horrid pain tingled through me, greater then any fear or sorrow. I knew that Eiri’s past, because of what had happened with me, once again had started to haunt him.
A tear was held at the end of each of his eyes as he looked at me. I knew then that, all this time that I had been in the hospital, all the days I hadn’t seen him he deliberately stayed away from me. He blamed himself for what had happened, like last time. The real reason why the men who hurt me weren’t dead was only because someone stopped Eiri, with the pain and anguish that mixed in his eyes struck my heart; the red claws that tore me apart ravished and cut him inside as much as it did me. I should have known better then to think the pain was one sided. I looked at him, not a wisp of breath it seemed came from us. The sadness and anger at myself welled and bubbled in my heart, and when a third tear fell from Eiri my soul could no longer withstand the dam of shock I was in. I broke the silence, in cries of desperation to Eiri, to stop him from killing himself on the inside.
“It’s not your fault! It’s not your fault.”
I said it over and over again, wanting the dark spaces of his mind I had fought with for years to understand he was not to blame. I should have known that my greatest weakness, my greatest fault, my greatest strength, everything that I could have feared and loved was in Eiri. That no matter what happened to me, or to him, it shouldn’t matter.
“It’s not your fault Yuki…don’t blame your self.”
As I spoke I looked at him, I needed him now more then ever, as he needed me. We could only work this though holding each other up as the memories of our bad past faded. The fear of the past rape of me disintegrated, it could no longer light a fire to burn away all I held dear. I leaned up, kissing Eiri, pulling him down and quickly turning him onto his back. I broke the kiss and as I sat onto I saw the tears were gone from his face, though he now diverted his eyes from mine. I cringed, I couldn’t let him run from it as he always did. I reached and pushed his face towards mine as I kissed him again, easing his mouth open. I reached under his shirt, realizing then how cold my fingers were compared to his chest. I gradually pulled his shirt off only breaking our kiss only for a brief moment, long enough for Eiri to take a few quick breaths. I threw his shirt to the side and began to pinch at his nipples; he became a uneasy, wiggling slightly underneath me. I ignored him, knowing he didn’t fully understand yet the why to my actions.
I rocked against his clothed member, which I could feel despite the denim of his black pants. As I moved up and down against him I felt the small tinge and pull of my own being restricted in my pants. I stopped pinching and kissing Eiri, who in turn stopped wiggling under my touch. His eyes burned in me as I took off his pants, caressing his legs and kissing lightly. Once I had the tight clothing off I pulled mine off as well, breathing in at the cold that quickly pinched my penis. I sat on Eiri’s chest breathing hard, I didn’t know if I could do what I needed to do next. I was scared again, but before the pained memory could grip me again I looked at Eiri who still stared at me. It wasn’t menacing or cold, it was raw and confused. I moved under his gaze, I needed to cause I could fell the fear closing again and grabbed the lubricant from the bedside desk drawer. I squeezed the bottle, watching it drizzle into my hand. After I hand a generous amount in my hand I leaned back down and kissed Eiri again as I rubbed the lubricant over his penis that occasionally pulsed in my hand. After making his member slick and wet, I held myself up and I pushed what was left of the lubricant into myself. I wasn’t used to the angle I was at, nor was I truly prepared because of the weeks I spent in the hospital bed; but I pushed my finger as far and as deep as I could. A chill sparked a long forgotten felling in me, a want that was animalistic in its feeling. The heat in my body rose as I explored myself and divulged further into Eiri’s mouth. Only minutes passed as I quickly added more fingers into myself, my body burned underneath Eiri’s hands that now roamed over my body, and with the hunger in my gut for what was to come the cold fingers of pain almost were forgotten.
I was ready and my body wanted more, the yearn was insatiable and would slowly drive me mad until I quenched it. But as I removed my fingers and broke once again I felt the grip of fear instill in me. No matter how fast I ran from it, it would always catch me. I clenched my eyes as I positioned myself over Eiri’s member. I froze, it wet with lubricant in my hand and pulsing at my opening. I took in a deep breath, shaking and scared, I slowly push myself down as the head of Eiri’s member pushed against my opening. I pushed a little harder, flashes of my rape shown behind my closed eyes and tears started to fall again. I couldn’t pull my self down any further, my arms and legs visibly shook as I felt the air being squeezed out of me from the chilled grip of my recent past. My eyes were closed tight, and I felt that the world was spinning around me. I felt my body stretch and land with a soft thud against the bed. I opened my eyes to find that the spinning I had felt was not of my thoughts and I now lay with my back and Eiri again on top of me. Eiri leaned down and kissed me, his eyes open, glaring into mine. I knew I had forced his sudden change, though now he was with me and we could pull though; my heart told me so. The cold hands fell from my body, replaced with warmth of Eiri’s hands. Then with a small thrust from Eiri, his tip broke through my opening and stretched my walls. I whined into our kiss, wrapping my arms around his neck, holding tightly. The pain quickly disappeared and I was filled with a serge of excitement. I tightened my grip, clawing little marks into Eiri’s back, kissing him deeper; and in the sway of it all I pushed his member a little further into me as well. I could feel his smirk in our kiss as he felt my excitement suddenly flow though. Our mouths latched together, our tongues tangled, and as we part strings of saliva kept us tied together even as we parted. Before the clear strings broke I slipped my tongue again into Eiri’s mouth as I sucked on his bottom lip, my small wet muscle exploring the mouth of my lover, flavored with the dulled tang of smoke. He pushed more of his member in slowly filling me. The pain still lingered but the slickness of my insides and the small throbs of his member gave rise to a heat in my body burning it away. My face became flushed as I nibbled and sucked and bit harder in our kissing and my clawing. Once I felt him in me completely, my body adjusted, desperation for movement filled me.
“Yuki…move. I want to feel you move in my ass…Yuki!”
As I started wanting to move he only looked and smirked at me and I soon became desperate and overcome, wiggling underneath him.
“I can’t hear you Shu.”
“Move! It’s hot, so move! I want your cum in me.”
I wined louder wanting my throws of passion to be fulfilled, but he just smirked. Without warning I was picked up and soon sitting on Eiri.
“I did the hard part, so if you want me to move that bad then move.”
He leaned and kissed me as I held myself up, bobbing slowly on his dick. My muscles sucked and clenched as I moved. My gut tightened and pushed for release. I moved faster, my cock rubbing against Eiri’s pale stomach as we ravished each other’s mouth.
“I’m gonna cum. I’m gonna cum.”
I muttered between the breaks in our kiss. Eiri’s hand reached down to my member and quickly squeezed it stopping me from cumming.
“Aahh, Yuki!”
“Why are you cumming so soon, Shu? We barely started.”
His voice dripped with lust, as mine whimpered as I moved.
“Yuki, let me cum! I haven’t done this in so long! I want to cum!”
I started to feel the sweat rolling down my body and the firm harsh grip Eiri had on my member. It hurt but it only added to the build that I wanted to let out. Eiri grabbed me and pushed me back onto the bed. He started to thrust and drive deep into me as he leaned forward and filled my mouth again with his tongue. He kept the tight hold on my member as I whimpered in his mouth as I moved my hips in time with his. I placed my hands on his back and started to dig in as the want to release became overbearing. I broke my lips from his crying out loudly.
“Yuki! I can’t wait any longer!”
Not stopping his thrusts he relinquished the grapple on my penis and started to stroke it in time with his thrusts. The hot pressure in my belly released with a great force. I felt my member pulse in his hand as my cum shot out dripping down Eiri’s hand and jetting onto both of our stomachs. Eiri never stopped in his fast thrusts and stroked my member as though he was milking the cum from it.
“A lot’s coming out Shu.”
“It’s still coming out I can’t stop! Stop stroking it I can’t stop!”
“Now I’m not the one who came early, was I?”
After one last large squirt, which ended up on my face, I finally stopped cumming. Still hard and breathing hard I continued to rock with Eiri. Eiri let got of my dick, looking at all the cum I had shot over both of us.
“Look at the mess you made, and it was just the first time. Do you even have any cum left?”
“Stop teasing me! Just keep moving! I want to feel you deeper in my ass!”
“Fine. But lets put your mouth to work. You’re being too noisy.”
I was hot and breathing hard with my mouth open. Eiri moved his cum covered hand to my mouth and quickly slipped in three of his fingers. I licked my tongue over his long fingers. My cum tasted tangy, thick, slightly stale, and salty from being on Eiri’s hands. I gagged a little at the taste at first though I ignored it. Eiri thrusts became deeper and quickened in pace. I tried to move in time with his thrusts, though quickly my muscles started to burn and I couldn’t keep the speed. Soon found myself being pounded into as I tried my best to rock back every other thrust. Eiri moved his fingers deeper into my mouth and started to finger my mouth as though he was preparing me. With the taste of my cum now gone I could smell the musky lingering scent of my member on his hands. I became more and more excited by it all. Eiri’s lengthy fingers moving in and out of my mouth, the taste of my own cum, and the deep feel of his member in me as it twitched and pulsed periodically. I soon found myself cumming a second time, unhindered by any hand and more intense then the last. I arched my back off the bed and I came finding my member being rubbed against Eiri’s stomach as I ejaculated onto him.
“Again? I didn’t think you had any left.”
My moans and whimpers were muffled. My body felt wet as I dripped with sweat and cum. I was wanting more though I knew Eiri couldn’t move any faster or go any deeper in me. Eiri removed his fingers from my mouth and pinched my nipples making them stand and quickly building me to my third release.
“Yuki! More…deeper...”
Eiri ignored my request and instead stroke my member and stroked the tip periodically with his hand.
“Yuki!”
“Too noisy.”
He against kissed me, entangling our tongues. I was again whining as he kept his pace and the build below my stomach grew. I started to feel his penis pulse more violently and my wall around it started to spasm as well as we both gasped for breath in our kissing. It didn’t take long for me to be close to cumming again except that Eiri was close as well. My muscles tightened and my fingers dug imprints onto Eiri and he gripped my member tighter. He broke our kiss and pushed one last time into me as he spilled his cum into me. I could feel the sticky hot substance moving further into me as more of Eiri’s cum spilt out.
“Yuki!”
The hot juice wiggling its way in me pushed me over the edge and I came one last time shooting my cum over my stomach and getting some on my face for a second time,
Once our releases ceased I felt my love more Eiri bubble up and glow from me; and as I looked up at Eiri I could see that angelic smile I see so rarely. His eyes and smile said more then any story or song could tell.
Despite the problems ahead nothing can over come us. I complete him and he completes me. His is my greatest weakness, my greatest strength, my greatest fault, my greatest love. And whether or not he ever says it, I am for him as well.
END
A/N: Hey hope you all liked it!! It’s the first story for me to ever complete!!! Yeah!!! This was kind of an experiment (to long to explain though) and it turned out a great way for me to do my stories so hopefully I can use this new method for me to defeat my procrastination! I want to say thank you to my friends Ariel and Alex and my beta SilverDeathAngel, for bearing with me and being so wonderful! And my friends for giving me some praise and conviction which helped me finish my story! I’m glad that everyone who reviewed my story liked it and I hope that everyone liked the last chapter of Greatest! Look for more stories in the near future!
See ya!
~ Eule Vix