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Critical Changes	By : Asukalover88 Category: +M to R > Neon Genesis Evangelion Views: 17540 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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“How did it go?” Doctor Ritsuko Akagi asked carelessly over the phone as she typed wildly away on a keyboard in front of her.

“How do you think it fucking went? I just told a young girl she was a goddamn clone and she didn’t have a real fucking family, I mean she almost killed herself! FUCK! How would you feel if someone told you some shit like that?” Misato barked over her cell-phone as she felt like reaching through the phone and breaking the good doctor’s neck.

“Yes, it's terrible but she's going to pilot Unit-5 right?” Ritsuko’s voice hardened as she wasn’t crazy about Misato’s about face to Murduke and its processing of pilots, but she expected this.

“Didn’t you hear what I just said? She almost killed herself!” Misato yelled insanely and kicked a pile of cloths on the floor.

“I just told you it was terrible, how many times you want me to say it? Yui wants a report, is the girl going to do it?” Ritsuko asked callously as she stared deeply into computer. Misato slapped her face, as her words didn’t seem to concern Ritsuko in the least.

“I don’t know she hasn’t said a word in the last couple of hours, Asuka and Rei are comforting her.” Misato looked over to the girl’s room and sighed.

“You got 2 hours to get an answer out of that girl and Misato...” Ritsuko cleared her throat. “...Be quick about it.”

“You!” Misato started to complain as Ritsuko just hung up on her.

“That rotten bitch!” Misato gripped her phone tightly and looked at her door again.

“Poor Hikari, I hope she’s doing ok.”

In Rei and Asuka's room the three sat on the bed. Rei sat behind Hikari and combed her hair as Asuka painted her toenails.

“How’s that look Hikari-chan?” Asuka asked lifting the girl’s foot up slightly. Hikari just stared at the wall, as she didn’t even look down.

“Hikari?” Asuka asked softly as Rei leaned over the girl’s shoulder. Hikari’s eye’s started watering again as she covered her face. Both girls hugged Hikari tightly as she sobbed quietly, her mind still unable to believe she was a… clone.

“Hikari, please stop crying you have nothing to be ashamed about.” The German girl whispered softly as she kissed her on the neck.

“Stop it Asuka, just leave me alone!” Yelled Hikari as she pushed the red head back.

“You are what you are Hikari-chan, and you need to deal with it, all me and Asuka want to do is help you.” Rei rocked Hikari slowly as Asuka crawled back to the distressed girl.

“What would anyone want with a clone? I-I’m just a worthless piece of trash.” Hikari groaned bleakly as she let Asuka into her arms.

“We’ll be your family, we’ll be your sisters, and we’ll be…” Rei said caringly as she took a deep breath. “…Your lovers.”

“R-Really?” Hikari sniffled loudly as she looked into Asuka’s smiling face. Asuka nodded as she leaned in again and kissed Hikari squarely on the lips.

“Yeah silly, we’d do anything to you… I mean anything for you.” Asuka joked merrily as she licked the tip of Hikari’s nose.

“You two really are… strange.” Hikari moaned with embarrassment as Rei cupped her breasts from behind. Asuka and Rei quickly laid Hikari to their bed and began to strip her down as Hikari shyly let them. Soon the three girls all laid naked together, kissing and touching each other sensuously. Asuka and Rei held Hikari under their frisky fingers and smooth tongues as the brown haired squirmed lovingly.

“What’s wrong Hikari? You’re trembling? Rei looked up at the girl’s contorting face as she flicked her tongue over Hikari’s stiff nipple.

“Hehehe it’s your first time is’in?” Asuka giggled hotly as she pulled at the brown haired girl’s matching pubic hair, causing her to writhe.

“Y-yes, s-so please be gentle.” Hikari groaned meekly as she looked up at both girls grinning down at her.

“It’s that look again.”

Hikari remembered the strange look from early as she flashed back to both Asuka and Rei constantly flashing it at her.

“I thought you liked it rough; don’t tell me you’re going soft on me now Hikari-chan?” Asuka licked her lips and yanked on Hikari’s pubic hair again, making the enthralled girl yelp.

“But Asuka, it’s her first time maybe we should go easy on her.” Rei retorted lightly as she drilled her tongue in the red head’s ear. Suddenly a twisted smile crept up the side of Asuka’s face.

“How about a little good girl, bad girl?” Asuka suggested brightly as Rei purred her approval and kissed her deeply.

“Please hurry, I-I’m going crazy.” Hikari’s body started to burn for attention of the two girls as she reached up and cupped both of their faces in her hands.

“You’re so cute Hikari-chan.” Asuka gripped Hikari's chest roughly as Rei dropped swiftly between her legs and began sucking on the girl’s already soaking gap with unrestraint vitality. Asuka pinched Hikari’s nipples harshly, pulling one and sucking on the other then alternating back and fore as Rei sunk her tongue and now fingers deep, but gently into Hikari's lower orifice passionately. Asuka and Rei switched off continuously on Hikari’s holes and body as they were covered sweat and sex. The unbridled lust was like a heavy blanket over them as they breathed in and tasted each other’s unique scents and flavor.

“I-I’m going to…” Hikari moaned hotly as she held her legs apart for Asuka as the blue-eyed girl pumped her fingers violently into her drenched twat and then slip one into her tight asshole. The shock and pleasure rocketed Hikari’s body to new heights of pleasure as she felt her first orgasm given to her by another person smashed into her like a tide wave.

“Ohhhh my GOD!!!” Screamed Hikari as she came so hard, her body tensed to its breaking point as she crammed in several different places at once. Both Rei and Asuka leaned back, panting heavily as Hikari body convulsed.

“Was it good for you?” Rei smirked as she wiped a bit of sweat from her forehead.

“Hehehe when was the last time you “took care” of yourself Hikari?” Asuka just watched cum pour out the brown haired girl’s slit and stain her sheets as she smiled, gently scraping her fingers up Hikari’s drenched gap.

“I-I-I.” Hikari was speechless as she stared at the ceiling, her vision still blurry.

“So sweet…” Asuka smiled lovingly as she lifted her wet fingers to Rei’s mouth, who took them in.

“…And tasty too.” Rei groaned as she sucked the red haired girl’s fingers dry. Hikari looked dazed at both girls as she slowly blinked, ready for sleep.

“Hey, you’re not passing out on us are you Hikari-chan?” Asuka slapped Hikari’s face lightly as the exhausted girl awoke abruptly.

“W-What do you mean?” Hikari slowly leaned up as the girl’s door opened.

“Room for one more?” Misato asked as she stood stark naked equipped with a strap-on in the doorway and smiled. Both Asuka and Rei leered lustfully at the woman as Hikari sighed lowly and fell back onto the bed.

“This is just too lucid…”

T.B.C…
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