My Captain
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Category:
+M to R › One Piece
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
7
Views:
9,137
Reviews:
51
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own One Piece, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
chapter #7
A/N: HEY! New chappie! Yay! No action. Boo.
Disclaimer: I don’t own one piece, but one piece owns me.
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Chapter #7
Damn. Just a few moments ago. Usopp ran past us screaming about something or another. Surely he isn’t still mad at the butler for bad mouthing his father. Something else must have happen. Something bad. I can’t explain it, but I have a feeling in my gut that tells me something is wrong. Wait, why was he alone? I thought Luffy went to find him a while ago.
The “veggie pirates” said that Usopp had been at the beach and now their leading the way. They’re running about snail speed and it’s so tempting to just run past them until I remember my directional sense isn’t the greatest.
I have to find him. He’ll know what’s happening. Maybe I’m just paranoid or I might be obsessing, but I have to find him. Of course Nami doesn’t understand at all. Nothing concerns her besides money. She slowly walks behind us just barely keeping us in sight. As she’s said nearly a thousand times now, Luffy’s most likely fine and I can slow down, but I want to find him as soon as possible. Who knows what could have happened.
Trees surround us as the vegetables take us though their “shortcut”. the thick woods slowly fade until they are just spread out trees. A cliff comes into view, but no Luffy that I can see. Where the hell is that idiot?
“This is where captain normally goes,” one of the wannabe pirates says. His eyes covered with a weird hat making his hair poke up though the top like a carrot. The one that looks a pepper nods in agreement. Then the “onion” started screaming.
“HE’S DOWN ON THE BEACH! IT LOOKS LIKE HE FELL ON HIS HEAD!”
My legs moved at a speed I didn’t know to be possible to the edge of the cliff. There. Luffy was upside -down and from the looks of it he did in fact fall on his head. Shit. I knew something was up. At least I know where he is and he most likely isn’t dead. A short drop wouldn’t kill a guy like him. A short drop couldn’t kill a guy like him.
With a quick look at the landscape I can see a pathway down. I run over to it and practically fly down. I know he’s alive. He had better be alive. My gut twists as I realize that if he died he would be the second people I lost to falling. I lost her from falling down the stairs and I don’t know what I’ll do if I lose him to falling off a cliff. I can’t lose him. I can’t. I won’t.
Nami finally catches up after I get him out of the ground and lie him on his back. Soon the “veggies” are there too. He’s breathing. He’s alive. I long breath escapes my lungs. I didn’t lose him. Slowly I shake him awake. Black eyes soon open themselves to look around as he sits up right and crosses his legs.
“hmm… I must have dozed off.” he said as he looked around. “I was sure I was at the top of the cliff.”
Nami falls over. The three kids’ jaws lower. Luffy tilts he head in confusion and goes on to wonder why he had decided to take a nap there. He didn’t remember being sleepy. Nami screams at him for being an idiot. The three kids stare blankly. Luffy looks even more confused than before. I just laugh.
Weather I was laughing at him or out of relief, I will never know.
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A/N: good god. That was short, but okay right? Remember reviews lead to better writing which leads to greater stories which means happy readers. Review, damn it! All reviews serve a purpose. Constructive criticism leads to better writing. Praise helps my self-esteem and makes me want to write more. Advice leads to more inspired chapters. Negative responses lead to me respecting your opinion. Flames are just for roasting various animals. Even reviews that say “omg! Zoro’s gay?” have a point. If I get those I have something to make fun of for a good 10 minutes.
Oboro: thanks! I’m glad it pleases you! Keep reviewing.
Reyn: oh yes. Sanji is most defiantly going to be a potential rival. HEE HEE. And the mihawk scene is very important too. But I must get to Bartie first. THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEWS AND ADVICE!
Yokiko_angel: hopefully this fic will be done by the time you die, but I do like your reviews!
simple insanity: well, Luffy did fall off the cliff, but no smut. It Is coming! Keep reviewing!
Noriko_Sakuma: ZoroXLuffy it is. And I said in earlier review response, Sanji is going to be a rival. Please don’t hit me with the whip. I have a fear of pain. Love you and your reviews! *huggles*
Crazyb1tch85: do you really where glasses? ^.^ you don’t have to answer that if you don’t want to. Also this isn’t going to turn into a zosan or anything like that. WAY too much of that pairing. Keep reviewing, ’Kay?
Senera san: *sigh* I know the chappies are short. *big sigh* but I agree to your deal! Here is an update so I get a review! YAY! Thanks!
Phidias bagel: I think I will finish before you die. And I hope I finish before I die. Keep reviewing!
Lady k: thanks for your lovely advice. If you see any places where its REALLY repetitive just tell me and I’ll go back and fix it. Thanks again!
Disclaimer: I don’t own one piece, but one piece owns me.
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Chapter #7
Damn. Just a few moments ago. Usopp ran past us screaming about something or another. Surely he isn’t still mad at the butler for bad mouthing his father. Something else must have happen. Something bad. I can’t explain it, but I have a feeling in my gut that tells me something is wrong. Wait, why was he alone? I thought Luffy went to find him a while ago.
The “veggie pirates” said that Usopp had been at the beach and now their leading the way. They’re running about snail speed and it’s so tempting to just run past them until I remember my directional sense isn’t the greatest.
I have to find him. He’ll know what’s happening. Maybe I’m just paranoid or I might be obsessing, but I have to find him. Of course Nami doesn’t understand at all. Nothing concerns her besides money. She slowly walks behind us just barely keeping us in sight. As she’s said nearly a thousand times now, Luffy’s most likely fine and I can slow down, but I want to find him as soon as possible. Who knows what could have happened.
Trees surround us as the vegetables take us though their “shortcut”. the thick woods slowly fade until they are just spread out trees. A cliff comes into view, but no Luffy that I can see. Where the hell is that idiot?
“This is where captain normally goes,” one of the wannabe pirates says. His eyes covered with a weird hat making his hair poke up though the top like a carrot. The one that looks a pepper nods in agreement. Then the “onion” started screaming.
“HE’S DOWN ON THE BEACH! IT LOOKS LIKE HE FELL ON HIS HEAD!”
My legs moved at a speed I didn’t know to be possible to the edge of the cliff. There. Luffy was upside -down and from the looks of it he did in fact fall on his head. Shit. I knew something was up. At least I know where he is and he most likely isn’t dead. A short drop wouldn’t kill a guy like him. A short drop couldn’t kill a guy like him.
With a quick look at the landscape I can see a pathway down. I run over to it and practically fly down. I know he’s alive. He had better be alive. My gut twists as I realize that if he died he would be the second people I lost to falling. I lost her from falling down the stairs and I don’t know what I’ll do if I lose him to falling off a cliff. I can’t lose him. I can’t. I won’t.
Nami finally catches up after I get him out of the ground and lie him on his back. Soon the “veggies” are there too. He’s breathing. He’s alive. I long breath escapes my lungs. I didn’t lose him. Slowly I shake him awake. Black eyes soon open themselves to look around as he sits up right and crosses his legs.
“hmm… I must have dozed off.” he said as he looked around. “I was sure I was at the top of the cliff.”
Nami falls over. The three kids’ jaws lower. Luffy tilts he head in confusion and goes on to wonder why he had decided to take a nap there. He didn’t remember being sleepy. Nami screams at him for being an idiot. The three kids stare blankly. Luffy looks even more confused than before. I just laugh.
Weather I was laughing at him or out of relief, I will never know.
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A/N: good god. That was short, but okay right? Remember reviews lead to better writing which leads to greater stories which means happy readers. Review, damn it! All reviews serve a purpose. Constructive criticism leads to better writing. Praise helps my self-esteem and makes me want to write more. Advice leads to more inspired chapters. Negative responses lead to me respecting your opinion. Flames are just for roasting various animals. Even reviews that say “omg! Zoro’s gay?” have a point. If I get those I have something to make fun of for a good 10 minutes.
Oboro: thanks! I’m glad it pleases you! Keep reviewing.
Reyn: oh yes. Sanji is most defiantly going to be a potential rival. HEE HEE. And the mihawk scene is very important too. But I must get to Bartie first. THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEWS AND ADVICE!
Yokiko_angel: hopefully this fic will be done by the time you die, but I do like your reviews!
simple insanity: well, Luffy did fall off the cliff, but no smut. It Is coming! Keep reviewing!
Noriko_Sakuma: ZoroXLuffy it is. And I said in earlier review response, Sanji is going to be a rival. Please don’t hit me with the whip. I have a fear of pain. Love you and your reviews! *huggles*
Crazyb1tch85: do you really where glasses? ^.^ you don’t have to answer that if you don’t want to. Also this isn’t going to turn into a zosan or anything like that. WAY too much of that pairing. Keep reviewing, ’Kay?
Senera san: *sigh* I know the chappies are short. *big sigh* but I agree to your deal! Here is an update so I get a review! YAY! Thanks!
Phidias bagel: I think I will finish before you die. And I hope I finish before I die. Keep reviewing!
Lady k: thanks for your lovely advice. If you see any places where its REALLY repetitive just tell me and I’ll go back and fix it. Thanks again!