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Demoness Of Desire

By: Bishonen
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Rating: Adult ++
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Chapter 7

Chapter 7



"You have only two girls left," Lilith said. "Sara and Naru. I suggest you take Sara now. I feel that Naru should be the very last."



"Okay, Mistress," Motoko said nodding. "Although finding her might be hard. She runs around almost as much as Su did."



"Nah, that won't be the hard part. The hard part'll be what you'll do with me now that you've found me," came a voice behind them.



Motoko and Lilith turned around and were surprised to see Sarah standing by the edge of the water, wearing nothing at all.



"What do you mean?" Motoko asked, surprised that the prey had come to her.



"Pretty simple!" Sara said, stepping into the water. She was so short that even the shallow part of the water came up to her completely flat chest. "Nice wings, by the way, Motoko. I was hiding and spied on you while you took Kitsune and Mutsumi. When I heard Lilith's name, I left and looked through some of Papa's books and stuff to do some research. So I have a pretty good idea of how you work, Lilith, taking girls as slaves and making demonesses like Motoko and all that. I figured you'd try to get me eventually, too."



"So what do you want?" Motoko asked. Was she here to try to stop them? She'd always known Sara was crazy, but that was a little much even for her.



"What I want? I want in!" Sara said, crossing her arms and grinning her evil little girl grin. "I've overheard you talking. You need to take each of us as your own to get powerful enough, or your sister's gonna stop Lilith and that'll be the end of that. Since I know what you're up to, I could just refuse to give in...I don't think you can turn me, and even if you can, you can't afford to waste time with me! So here's the deal: I've got two demands, and if you promise to meet them, I'll agree to be yours. What do you say?"



Motoko looked at her mistress. She couldn't believe they were bargaining with a 9-year-old. But Lilith was grinning in amusement.



(I like this one, Motoko...she may be mean and a pest, like Kanako, but she's got spunk), Lilith told Motoko mentally. Vocally she said, "Well, we'll see about that. Bargaining with demons is a risky business, you know. What is it you want?"



Sara grinned and held up her fist. "Now we're talking! First thing: I want to be the real deal, not just some mindless slave. I'll submit to you, and follow my promise to do what you want, but I want to keep being me, okay? I get to keep my free will."



Lilith thought about this for a minute with a smile on her face. "Hmmm, well, that can be arranged...I'm willing to make you a minor demoness. I usually keep a strict rule about only turning girls who are at the very least thirteen years old, but...you strike me as having some good potential, even as only a minor demoness. You'll do a change like the others, but you'll keep your free will, and some day you might even get to take a slave for yourself--two, if you're a real natural. You won't have the power for any more than that, though. How does that sound?"



"Great! Hee hee, I can't wait to beat up Keitaro worse than ever with the new power!"



Obviously she hadn't heard Motoko tell Kanako about Keitaro and Seta. This was actually a good thing, since Sara probably wouldn't be so cooperative if she knew Seto was gone.



"One thing: once you change, whether you're a minor demon slave or a demoness, you'll never age again. Just so you know," Lilith said.



Sara shrugged and said, "That's okay, growing up is dumb. You have to work and pay bills and stuff like that. Now the other demand is...when I change, I want to be able to do sex and orgasm and stuff! I've tried to do it before, but I'm just not old enough to do it, and I know you demon types are all into it."



Motoko was surprised. "How do you know about that stuff?" she asked.



Sara snorted. She said, "I live in a house with a bawdy drunkard lady and the biggest pervert in Japan. I'm not exactly a sheltered girl."



"Well, that part is no problem. Once you're a minor demoness, you'll be as sexually capable as anyone else. You'd have to be, to survive, since your sustanence will be the sexual pleasure you and any slaves you take feel. Is that it?" Lilith said.



"Yup. What do you say, do you promise?" Sara said.



"I do. And I never lie," Lilith said.



Sara grinned again and opened her arms wide. "Cool! Take me, Motoko, I'm all yours!"



Motoko moved to bite Sara, but Lilith stopped her. "We'll both have to bite her at the same time...you need to do it so she's counted as your own, so you'll grow in power from her, but I need to do it because you don't have the control yet to make her a minor demoness instead of just a regular demon slave," she said.



Motoko nodded. They both went over to Sara. She was obviously a little nervous, but she hid it pretty well. Both Motoko and Lilith bit her neck at the same time as she held in a yelp at the sharp pain. They drew away.



Sara looked like she was about to say something, when suddenly she gasped as the transformation began. She yelled in pain and grabbed at the edge of the stones around the water to keep herself steady.



"AHHHHH! OH! OWWWWWW! Shit that hurts ow ow ow ow OWWWW!" Sara screamed as her body twisted in agony.



Motoko actually felt a lot of sympathy for her soon to be demoness sister, since she knew that pain well. Then again, she felt a little jealousy, too...when Motoko transformed, it was usually so painful that she couldn't even manage to form words, but Sara could apparently take it well enough to do so.



(Don't be jealous of that), Lilith told her mentally. (Remember how I offered to take some of your pain before? I'm taking most of Sara's right now--I knew it would be too much for someone her age, no matter how tough she is).



Finally Sara calmed down as her transformation stopped. While she was recovering, Motoko's own pain began. It was intense, but quick, like how it had been earlier, and when it was over, Motoko saw that her fingernails and toenails had become fully like Lilith's--long, curved, and sharp, colored the deepest shade of black one could imagine, just like her eyes. Her fingers and toes had gotten slightly more slender and elegant as well.



A few minutes after Motoko was done with her latest transformation, Sara had the energy to try to speak. "Mmy bsodly fleels ssstrlanlge...whlat'sss wrong wrlith mmmy tongueg?"



Sara kept mumbling this way, trying to make her words clear, and Motoko saw why she was having trouble while she opened her mouth. Her tongue had become much thinner and longer, and now it was forked, as well, like a snake's tongue.



Sara finally seemed to get the hang of it after a few minutes of practice. "Wow...my tongue feelsss ssso ssstrange...actually, everything feelsss ssstrange...everything below my waissst feelsss different..."



Lilith smiled. "Let me help you out and you'll see why."



Lilith lifted Sara out of the water and put her down on the solid ground. Sara had changed in a big way. She was completely the same in her upper half (besides the tongue). But her legs were gone completely. In their place, from her waist down she now had a snake's body, smooth and scaled. It was jet-black with no markings on it, simply a solid darkness that matched her new demoness status. At the end of the tail, there were rings around her tail, like a rattlesnake's tail. Her tail extended a few feet behind her.



Sara looked herself over and grinned, delighted with her new body. She tried moving with it and found that the gliding scales could take her very fast and smoothly where she wanted--in fact, she could go almost lightning-fast! And if she reared up tall enough, she could actually stand just a little higher than Motoko did. The one thing that had stayed the same was that there was a cleft in her center where her skin remained human, right where her legs had met originally. In the center of it was her hairless young pussy, as much a testament to her young age as her little girl's flat chest.



"Thisss isss ssso cool!" Sara said, grinning as she ran her hands along her scales.



"You'll go through a few more changes soon, as Motoko grows, but for now the major ones are taken care of. Also, you should be feeling a new sexual awakening as well," Lilith said.



Sara's hand brushed from her scales to her pussy. "Mmm...yeah...thisss feelsss a lot better than it usssed to. And I feel like I need more..."



"All in due time. But for now, it's time you pleased us, first," Lilith said.



Sara nodded, her demoness instincts and what little she'd learned from Kitsune kicking in. She slithered up to Motoko, and lowered herself down until she sat on her tail so low that she was face level with Motoko's pussy. She reached for Motoko's folds and held them open, making Motoko shudder a little in anticipation. Then Sara slowly and carefully stuck her new forked tongue within Motoko's pussy, testing it out. Motoko yelped a little at the pleasurable feeling, and Sara decided she liked the taste in there, so she began to lick all around inside, brushing her tongue against Motoko's inner walls and wiggling it around a little. Motoko moaned in bliss.



"Hmmm, I think I have an idea for servicing me, as well," Lilith said. She took the tip of Sara's tail and carefully inserted it into her cunt. She gasped; even though it didn't fill her completely, it was still a great feeling.



"Now, I know what you're capable of in this form," Lilith said. "Let me send you a mental idea of what I want you to do..."



Motoko couldn't pay any more attention to what her mistress was saying and doing at that point, because she was starting to have trouble concentrating on anything more than the pleasure she was feeling. It was taking a lot just for her to remain standing up.



Finally, when Motoko was sure she couldn't take any more, Sara removed her tongue, then stuck it up against Motoko's clit. Motoko shrieked at the feeling, but Sara wasn't done yet. She pushed it so that her tongue's split prongs were on either side of Motoko's pleasure nub, and squeezed them together. Motoko screamed and came, hard and long, from the feeling of the strong, smooth, wet muscle pinching and then rubbing her clit. Sara kept squeezing wonderfully hard until Motoko's orgasm was over, and only then took a taste of her juices, which she found that she liked.



"That looks like fun," said Lilith, who had also orgasmed from whatever it was that Sara had been doing to her. "Maybe not as fun as this has been, but I'd hate to be selfish and not share it with Motoko. Sara, turn around and give us each what we've missed."



Sara nodded, looking uncomfortably horny (she really, really needed a release!), but also looking like she was having a terrific time in her new body. She turned around and bent down to start licking at Lilith. Motoko wondered what she was going to do for a minute, but soon got her answer. The tip of Sara's tail lifted from the ground and began to rub against Motoko's legs, the black rattlesnake coils pleasantly teasing her. She moaned and reached down to spread her lips open wide for it. Sara pushed herself in a little, then a little more, each coil on the tail tip acting as a wonderful, bulbous round ridge to please Motoko. Finally, she was filled completely, gasping hard at how good it felt. Then Sara started to push her tail up even further, and Motoko, not really having anywhere left for it to go, gasped and began to stand higher and higher, trying to cope, until finally she was balancing on her tip-toes, supported more by Sara's strong tail than by her own limbs. Sara pushed further still, and Motoko was lifted off her feet. She closed her legs around Sara's tail as firmly as she could to keep her balance as she was lifted a foot into the air, and beat her wings regularly to keep her position and stay from tipping over. She had never felt pleasure quite like this, the feeling of being so wholly filled, while having constant force behind it...incredible!



Then Sara rattled her tail tip. Just a little. It was pure heaven--or, in the case of demonesses, pure hell. It was faster, stronger, yet more controlled than any vibrator, an incredible rapture of pleasure that completely washed over her. She came, she came again, she kept cumming and Sara kept pushing and rattling as Motoko's girlcum leaked down her sleek black tail. Motoko was screaming and shrieking in a demonic screeching voice as she was taken with pleasure.



Finally, Lilith came from Sara's tongue work, and Sara lowered Motoko down to the ground and removed her tail tip. As Motoko watched, Sara lifted the tip, curled it around, and positioned it in front of her lips to lick away Motoko's many juices. She then lowered it down and began to slowly rub her cum-covered tail against her own opening. It was an erotic enough sight that Motoko's energy was quickly restored.



"Lilith, Motoko, I...I really feel...I think I'm finally really feeling arousssed," Sara said happily. "Doing thisss feelsss ssso good! Pleassse, would you pleassse do me now?"



"We will, but you must first learn to address us as your mistresses," Lilith told her sternly. "In certain ways, we are your equals and sisters, since you are a demoness and not just a simple slave, but even so, you pledged obedience to us, and owe us respect as greater demonesses than you are, so you must learn your place."



"Yesss, Missstresssesss! I'm...uh...I'm, er, I'm...sssorry...sssorry for the missstake," Sara said, looking down, a little embarrassed. Motoko was a little surprised; this was the first time she'd heard Sara apologize for anything, ever.



"You're forgiven, so long as you remember. Now, let's let you have a little fun," Lilith said.



Motoko got in front of Sara and began to kiss her deeply. She showed the young girl more compassion than she had to anyone else besides Lilith so far, feeling a kinship with her as a fellow, if minor, demoness. Lilith got behind Sara and started to run her hands along Sara's sensitive belly's sides, caressing her while gently suckling at her neck. Motoko began to french-kiss Sara, shoving her tongue into the girl's little mouth and caressing her new snaky tongue with her own.



Once she'd had enough of that, she stopped the kiss and began to lick at Sara's face slowly, sensuously. She slowly dragged her tongue down Sara's flesh, down her cheek, her chin, her neck, stopping for a moment to kiss Lilith, then further down across her skin to Sara's little nipples. They were standing out, tiny but perky and proud, against her absolutely flat chest. Motoko actually felt sorry for the girl for a moment, because she was now never going to have a chance to age and fill her chest out, stuck for the rest of her life as a flat-chested little girl, but on the other hand, Motoko had to admit there was a certain perverse appeal to these tiny, innocent nipples with no swell behind them...she'd heard of lolicon before, but she'd never understood the appeal until this moment. She licked each of them, going back and forth over and over between one and the other, driving Sara crazy with desire as her nipples screamed with pleasure.



Finally, Lilith's hands came up to Sara's nonexistant chest and began to gently, but firmly rub and tweak the nipples, and Motoko decided to move on downward. She left a trail of saliva down to Sara's cleft. She licked all around its outside, marvelling at the total virginal lack of hair and relishing Sara's happy groans. She stuck her tongue into Sara's young pussy and found that it was so tight, even her tongue had a little trouble pushing its way in. As Motoko ate Sara out, she lifted one of her hands and laid the tip of one of her claws on Sara's clit, pressing the tip in just a little bit, letting the pressure add to the girl's pleasure. After hardly any time at all, Sara screamed and came for the first time in her life.



"Wow," Sara said once she'd caught her breath. "That wasss amazzzing..."



"Glad you enjoyed it. Welcome to demonhood," Lilith said.



Once they'd cleaned up a little, they dismissed Sara, and Lilith told Motoko, "Now, it's finally time for you to take Naru."
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