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Critical Changes	By : Asukalover88 Category: +M to R > Neon Genesis Evangelion Views: 17540 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Hikari Horaki walked out of the school’s main entrance in the late afternoon as she had been in the library longer than normal.

“I wonder if the others are still in their clubs…”

She took the back way around the building, to where most of the clubs when she suddenly heard loud scuffing and harsh words. Hikari looked around the corner first as she saw four girls standing against one. Hikari made out the “one” girl instantly. Rei had a very distinct look, the blue hair and red eyes were hard to miss. She didn’t know three of the girls very well; she had seen them in school but other than that they were complete strangers to her. The fourth one was an American exchange student, Rebecca Roberts. The long-haired blonde with bright blue eyes, she was pretty and from a rich family, but her Japanese was as bad as her manners. They were only talking, but by the way Becky spoke it didn’t look friendly.

“J-BO!!!” Sudden the Yankee girl slapped Rei’s books from her hands and pushed her down. To Hikari’s surprise Rei did nothing, not a word of protest or feeble begging, instead only started to pick her books up.

“Come on Rei…”

The blonde laughed and said something vulgar as she kicked Rei over. Hikari had enough, racing from her corner as she rushed pass the staring girls and pushed Rebecca away from Rei.

“Leave her alone!” The Class rep said darkly as Rebecca quickly bounced back.

“Or what? You’ll tell the principle? I’ll get 3 days tops, then I’ll be back for you fucking Jap-o plick!” Becky threatened bitterly as Hikari’s fists tighten until they glowed white.

“Hikari, I’m fine.” Rei slowly leaned up as Rebecca kicked the blue-haired girl hard in the face, sending her back to the ground with a loud thud.

“I’m not done with you yet, you red-eyed weirdo and you...” Rebecca’s finger and eyes pointed daringly at Rei as she turned her attention back to Hikari sneering and that was it…

Hikari snapped on the inside as she blasted the American snob in her stupid, smug face without warning. The long-haired blonde’s hands covered her face instantly as Hikari slugged her openly in the stomach. Rei just watched in amazement as Rebecca fell back with Hikari already straddling her. The two hit the ground as Hikari glared violently at the girl below her. The brown-haired girl grabbed Becky’s collar, cocking her fist back.

“I told you to leave her alone, but you wouldn’t listen!” Roared Hikari as her fist dropped like a hammer on Rebecca’s face. A shocked murmur spat from Becky’s throat as the class rep dropped her fist again, left eye, again, nose. One of the watching girls stepped forward to help Becky, trying to grab Hikari from behind as Hikari elbowed her in the gut, causing her stumble back. The breathless girl hit the ground next to Rei, her face coiled agonizingly as she held her stomach, fighting for air. Rei managed to get to her knees and watch the bloody event unfold before her eyes.

“P-Please… S-stop!” Rebecca cried out, flailing weakly with arms as Hikari just punched her in the mouth. Both the top and bottom of Rebecca’s lips exploded open with fresh blood as a few drops splashed Hikari’s face.

What was she doing? She only needed to hit the girl once maybe twice, so why was she beating the living shit out of this girl? For Rei? For justice? No, it was something more primal, almost animalistic. She didn’t realize it then, but she was grinning from ear to ear as she stopped punching and began slapping the bleeding girl. The watching girls had now taken off as they didn’t want anything to do with the insane class rep or the situation she was putting herself in. Rei watched in horror as Rebecca’s head rocked left to right violently, her eyes closing slowly.

“She’s losing consciousness.”

The blue haired girl struggled to her feet, holding the footprint on her face as Hikari raised her arm once more.

“You like bullying people HUH!?! Make you feel good?!? Look where it got you now, you fucking cunt!!!” Suddenly a hand gripped her wrist as Hikari struggled to bring it back down on blonde’s already ruined face.

“That’s enough Hikari! She can’t feel it now.” A stern voice demanded as Hikari’s heart and blood started to slow. She looked back to see Asuka Langley Sohryu, standing into the orange light with a frown.

“Are you crazy? You could have killed her!” Hikari’s grinning face cracked as she lifted her bloody hands. Her face warped as a loud sob pushed passed her trembling lips. Head bowed, tears dripped straight from Hikari’s pitiful brown eyes to the beaten girl under her. Asuka jerked Hikari off Rebecca and slapped her aggressively. Rei stood about two feet away, holding her side with one hand and pawing her face with the other.

“We need to call for help.” Rei said shortly as Asuka nodded, still holding Hikari’s wrist tightly in her hand.

“And you are in big trouble, Miss Class rep.” Asuka’s voice held intimidation as Hikari felt like punching the cocky German girl in the face. Asuka was no better than Rebecca sometimes, always running her mouth and insulting everyone. Hikari’s eyes betrayed her as Asuka glared back at her unexpectedly, their eyes meeting in a menacing way.

“You want to swing on me now, is that it?” Asuka palmed the girl’s face and pushed her back callously. Hikari’s set her feet with a snarl as she wound-up. Hikari’s fury sparked her forward as she was ready to destroy Asuka where she stood.

“STOP IT HIKARI!!!” The brown haired girl froze in mid swing, her bottled up rage and anger ready to send the red head into next week, but even so, Asuka didn’t even flinch as she just shook her head. Rei held Hikari around the waist as the brown-eyed girl came back to her senses again.

“I’m s-sorry, Rei was in trouble a-and I-I-I?!?” Hikari finally broke down as Asuka connected the three in a group hug. Hikari sighed longingly as the heat from both Asuka and Rei’s body soothed her like it always did. Hikari’s eyes widened as she looked up at Asuka’s now grinning face, but it wasn’t the red head’s cute smile that surprised her, it was her roguish fingers.

“Did you get all wet from beating Rebecca up little Hikari-kun?” Asuka’s fingers gingerly worked up Hikari’s inner thighs and skirt as they found a giant wet spot on the bottom of the girl’s panties. Exhaustion took Hikari’s body as she fell into the red head’s arms, panting for breath and serenity.

“Rei, wake sleeping not-so-beauty up and explain to her Hikari had nothing to do with this, then get on her cell phone and call Sakura, Miki and Kikyo and tell them the same, if they know what’s good for them.” Asuka ordered as her fellow pilot nodded and pulled at a water bottle from her bag.

“And let’s get you clean up before someone notices you.” Asuka lead the sobbing girl to the bathroom as they both heard a splash of water behind them. After an hour or so Asuka’s plan paid off as Rebecca said some older guy tried to rape her, and Hikari and the others had found her beaten bloody. The other three girls kept their mouths shut and Hikari kept her perfect reputation. Only Hikari felt a little guilty as Asuka and Rei went about like nothing had happened, remembering what they had told her weeks ago after her “acknowledgement” as the 4th child.

“We’ll be your family…”

And family will do anything for each other.

T.B.C…
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