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Updated and rewritten, more nude girls! This is not really an original story. It’s a rewriting of the first book in the manga series, just a little more ecchi. I have just made minor changes in the plot and I have added some more dialogue. (And removed some of the original dialogue.) The chapters follow the book (roughly) but I have changed the titles. The original titles sound good in the manga, but not in a written story (my opinion). Finally I apologize for grammar errors and bad uses of words in my story. English is not my first language and I’m not a skilled writer. But enough small talk; read and enjoy…it’s just for fun. Disclaimer: The original story is written by Ken Akamatsu and I owe him a big thanks. (I hope he doesn’t get too upset if he finds out about what kinds of sluts i'm turning his characters into.)
”Wow! There sure are a lot of people here in Japan. According to the map and description I was given I’ll have to take this train. My plane was delayed, but if the academy is not too far I should make it in time.”
The young magic student Negi Springfield from Wales has been sent to Japan to work as a teacher as a part of his education. He is not quite sure what this has to do with becoming a magician, but he has confidence in his mentors and he is determent to do his best in his new task.
“It’s so crowded in this car and no place to sit down and…so many girls.”
But it’s going to get more crowded. At the next station a large group of people are waiting and two men are pushing them in through the doors until the car is so packed as humanly possible.
“I can almost not breathe, my face is…” Negi mumbles to himself. He is wedged in between two young women and since he is small, their breasts are pressing towards both sides of his head. But all four breasts are nice to him and don’t kill him and a few stations later they leave and he can relax a little after his first close contact with Japanese culture. But the chaos is not over yet; he has to sneeze and maybe because of some side effects to his mage training, he doesn’t know himself, but his sneeze causes a strong wind from underneath, making all the girls’ skirts to be lifted up, showing everybody’s panties (or lack of, if somebody is bold enough to go without). He doesn’t see such a thing but he can bring home that most Japanese school girls are using white cotton panties. Luckily for him, nobody understands the wind has anything to do with him and the next station is where he will be getting off. Most of the girls in his car are also getting off the train here and the street outside is crowded with people all heading in the same direction.
Two girls are running side by side, one of them on rollerblades. It’s Konoka Konoe, the granddaughter of the principal at Mahora Academy, and her best friend and roommate Asuna Kagurazaki. Asuna is helplessly in love with Takahata, her teacher. Konoka wants to help her and she has a fortune book, which says that if Asuna pronounce his name ten times and bark like a dog, a meeting of fate will come true.
“I can’t believe you did it,” says Konoka. “You really love him, don’t you? Well now you’ll have to stand on your hands and run 50 meters and then meow like a cat.”
“I can’t do that,” Asuna is shouting but then she gets aware of a strange looking boy running beside her.
“Your physiognomy shows signs of unrequited love,” he says.
The girls stop running and they are just staring at him.
“I overheard your conversation about fortune telling and I am…”
“You did what, you little brat?” Asuna shouts angrily and grabs him by his hair.
“Let it be Asuna,” says Konoka. “He’s just a kid from elementary school.”
But Asuna isn’t finished yet. “This is the all female school at Mahora Academy and little brats aren’t allowed here, understand?” she says while holding him by his jacket a feet or so above the ground.
“Please put me down,” begs Negi, quite shocked by what is happening to him.
“The elementary school is that way,” says Asuna and releases him. “Now get out of here.” She pushes him away.
“How come this girl is so violent?” Negi says to himself. “I thought Japanese girls were supposed to be considerate and mild-mannered.”
But then a window above them opens. They are standing right next to the wall of one of the school buildings.
“Negi! Long time no see,” says a man in the window.
“Takahata-sensei,” Asuna stammers out and her face turns red.
“Good morning! It’s been a while Takamichi,” says Negi.
“Welcome to Mahora Academy Negi-sensei. I think you will like it here.”
“Sensei?” says Konoka confused.
“Ah yes. I’m Negi Springfield, the new English teacher.”
“Wait a minute. How can you be a teacher?” says Asuna and grabs his jacket again. “A young punk like you is…”
“Don’t worry Asuna,” says Takahata. “He is very bright and fully capable of teaching. He is going to substitute for me as your class’ homeroom teacher.”
“But I don’t want a brat like him. Just a minute ago he said some really rude things to me.”
“I was just trying to be nice. What wrong did I say?” Negi replies.
“Shut up, I hate like brats like you, you are…” She puts her hand on his face, but she shouldn’t have done that. It makes him sneeze, which creates a strong wind that blows off most of her clothes, leaving her only in her bra and panties.
“Wah! What’s going on?” she shouts and sits down on the ground before she gathers herself and runs inside. She finds new clothes in her locker and she and Konoka goes to the principal’s office to ask him about this.
“Oh no, he’s here also,” Asuna thinks when she sees Negi. But it’s too late to run away and the principal asks them to come closer. He informs them that it’s all true what they have heard; Negi will be their new homeroom teacher.
“But it is a difficult assignment, you will be evaluated throughout the semester and if you fail, you will be sent back home,” he says to Negi.
“I understand sir. I will do my best.”
“You will start today and I will introduce you to our guidance counsellor, Ms Shizuna.”
Negi hears someone behind him and quickly turns around. And for the second time this morning he has his face buried in Japanese boobs.
“Nice to meet you,” says Ms Shizuna and puts her hand on his head. “If you have any questions please come to me.”
“Nice to meet you too (two?),” says Negi and takes a step back. “I will remember that.”
“She really has big boobs,” he thinks to himself. “They were so soft and…”
“Then everything is settled for now,” says the principal. “Just one more question, Negi. Do you have a girlfriend? You know my granddaughter is very cute. And she is intelligent and good at…”
“Grandfather!” says Konoka embarrassed. “Stop kidding.”
“Ah! I almost forgot. You must have a place to sleep Negi. And we don’t have any vacant rooms by now. Konoka! Asuna! How convenient that you are here. Can you let Negi stay in your room temporarily?”
“Huh?” Asuna is so shocked she is not able to speak a word.
“That’s a good idea,” says Konoka.
“That’s kind of you girls. Well, you’ll have to go Negi. Your class is starting soon. And you girls should be in your classroom now. Off you go.”
Ms Shizuna goes with Negi and he looks at the class roster Takahata gave him. It has pictures and names of all the girls and it also says what clubs and activities they are attending. Takahata has also written notes on some of them. Negi looks at it for a long time trying to memorize their names and faces.
All girls have arrived in the classroom when the teachers are coming. It’s a lively class of 31 girls and they have prepared some surprises for him, which includes erasers, sponges and a bucket of water. He managed to avoid getting wet though.
After they have had their fun Ms Shizuna helps calming down the class and they sit down at their seats and Negi is able to introduce himself. But they don’t respond by sitting calmly and telling him their names as he had expected; most of them run forward and grabs him and he is in the middle of a large group of girls who all try to hug him and pet him while they are asking him a thousand questions.
“He is so cute,” they whine. “So adorable, can we take him home?”
“Take it easy girls,” says Ms Shizuna. “He is not your free lunch.”
Negi first gets a little scared, but then he starts to enjoy being in the centre of so much attention. To be hugged by more than 20 cute girls isn’t so bad; really he couldn’t have gotten a warmer welcome.
But not everyone is taking part in the welcoming committee. Asuna comes forward and grabs his jacket and demands an explanation on how he was able to avoid the blackboard eraser trap.
“That’s enough!” A tall blonde girl raises her voice and everybody, including Asuna, becomes silent. She is Ayaka Yukihiro, the class representative. Negi thanks her for saving him but the peace doesn’t last long. Asuna gets mad at Ayaka and they start arguing. Asuna accuses Ayaka for running after young boys and Ayaka says Asuna has a thing for older men (like Takahata). They begin fighting physically and Negi understands that as their teacher, he has to stop them. If he only knew how; he remembers well how Asuna lifted him up earlier and how strong she was and the other girl is even bigger. But Ms Shizuna claps her hands and they stop fighting and all the girls find their seats. Then she leaves and Negi can start his teaching.
“I can’t reach the blackboard, it’s too high up,” he says a little irritated to himself.
“Sensei, please. Use this pedestal,” says Ayaka and smiles to him. “Do you want me to lift you up?” she grabs around his waist.
“No thanks, it’s ok now. Thank you class rep.”
After yet another fight between Asuna and Ayaka the class is finally over and Negi can have a little break. In the hallway he meets Takahata.
“How was your first class?”
“It was horrible, it was…”
“How are you Takahata-sensei?” Asuna interrupts. “There’s no problem at all. Our first class went really well. Didn’t it Negi-sensei?” She is stroking his hair.
“That’s great. Then I’m counting on you to help Negi out,” says Takahata and leaves.
“Oh I get it. You like Takahata,” says Negi. “Is he the one you are helplessly in love with?”
“Shut up,” says Asuna. “I’ll never acknowledge someone like you as a teacher.”
“That girl really has an attitude problem,” says Negi to himself in the afternoon break. He is sitting outside looking at his roster and decides to add some comments himself also. “A petty person” he writes above the picture of Asuna. “And I’m going to sleep in her room tonight. I just hope she will not throw me out again. But isn’t that…?” He looks at the roster again. “Yes, it is student # 27 Nodoka Miyazaki walking down the big stairs from the library. But it’s dangerous to carry so many books.” He isn’t finished thinking it before she loses her balance and falls down towards the paving stones on the ground. “Oh no, this leaves me no choice.” He quickly unpacks his wizard staff and pronounces a spell. Nodoka stops falling a foot above the ground and her skirt is blown upwards showing all of her panties. Negi is running towards her and catches her in his arms. Nodoka is in shock and she is still lying in his arms when Asuna is coming towards them shouting to Negi. She has seen it all. Negi puts Nodoka down and runs away and Asuna runs after him.
Nodoka looks around and sees Negi disappear around a corner. “Oh no, he touched me. For the first time in my life I’ve been touched by a male and he…held me in his arms and his hands were on my thighs and he saw my panties. What am I going to do?” She runs away in the opposite direction, forgetting that she had a pile of books to deliver.
Meanwhile Asuna has caught up with Negi in a nearby park. She grabs his jacket like she already has done a few times today.
“You are not a normal human being, are you? You have supernatural powers, you’re a …witch!”
“I’m not a witch, I’m a…mage,” says Negi realizing he cannot deny it now when she has seen him using his magic twice.
“That’s the same thing. In the class this morning…”
“I’m sorry, but please keep it a secret. I will be in deep trouble if this comes out.”
“Like I give a damn.”
“Then I have no choice. I have to erase your memory.” He grabs his staff and holds it in front of him. “Your brain may feel a little weird afterwards, but here it goes.” He pronounces the spell and all Asuna’s clothes except for her jacket disappear and he is looking straight at her nude body.
“Eh, I’m sorry, I think I made a mistake.”
“Hi! What are you two doing?” Takahata suddenly shows up but he walks on when he sees the state Asuna is in. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to interrupt anything.”
Asuna is in shock and she is just standing there while tears are filling her eyes.
“I’m very sorry,” says Negi again. “I was going to erase your memory, but somehow I erased your panties instead.”
“I’d rather have my memories erased,” shouts Asuna “If you’re a real mage, turn back the time, now!” She throws herself to the ground with her face down. “I can’t bear it. First he saw me in my little bear panties and now no panties. I don’t even have any pubes yet.” She rolls around and sits with her head between her knees.
“That’s ok,” says Negi. “I think you look very nice without pubes, it is…”
“Will you shut up?” She quickly gets up and grabs Negi the way he is used to now and a lot of nude skin is being pressed towards him. Fortunately he is well dressed. “Why did a bratty wizard like you have to come here? I had a perfectly happy life before you showed up.” She puts him down again.
“It’s for training. In order to become a great mage I have to go through a long training period and this is a part of it. A great mage uses his power for the sake of world peace and public welfare.”
“Oh! So what happens if someone finds out about this?”
“I will lose my permit and I get deported back to my home country. And I will never get the chance again to be a great mage.”
“A mage’s job is to help people, right? And you will take full responsibility for what you did to me?”
“Yes.”
“Then first go and get me some clothes. If you weren’t so small I would have taken your clothes and let you walk naked back, but I know I will never get your trousers on so hurry and get me something I can wear.”
“Of course, just stay there until I come back.”
“You bet. I’m not going anywhere like this. I will hide in the bushes over there.”
“What took you so long?” says Asuna when Negi is back. She is sitting on her jacket and she is buck naked when she rises up. “It’s cold today and I’m freezing my butt off. Feel it.” She takes his hands and places them on her buttocks. Negi gets quite surprised and embarrassed by this move. From what he has learned it is a bad thing to touch a girl’s butt. And that is when she is wearing clothes. But Asuna doesn’t let him hold her bare butt for long. She turns towards him and keeps talking. “This is not a good place to hide, you know. Many people are passing by here. A little while ago a girl and her boyfriend came by and they sat down and started kissing each other. She was lying on top of him and he felt her underneath her clothes. And I was sitting naked just a few feet away from them and was forced to watch it all. But then two girls came along and they were talking quite loud and the couple stopped and walked away. God knows what they might have done if they hadn’t been interrupted.” Asuna seems to have forgotten her anger and she is talking to Negi like he was her best friend. The naked girl doesn’t make any attempts to cover herself and Negi can enjoy the sight of a piece of Japan not many foreigners get to see.
“I’m sorry. I’m not familiar with this place and I didn’t know where to find the right clothes for you. But I brought you these.” He gives her a jogging trouser and a t-shirt.
“Mm.” She holds them up. “They look a bit too short for me, especially the t-shirt, but it’ll have to do for the time being. And stop staring at me. Have you never seen a naked girl before?”
“No, I mean yes, but not like this. My best friend Anya and I used to bathe in the river when we were younger.”
“Do I look like her?”
“Yes, especially in the crotch area…”
“That’s enough, let’s walk back to school.” She puts on the clothes Negi brought her and he
can see she is right about the t-shirt; there’s a gap between the lower edge of it and the trousers showing her navel. Apart from that the clothes fit all right.
They walk in silence a little, and when they take a short cut through a grove Asuna speaks again. “What…what do you think of my crotch area?”
“I only saw it from a little distance. If you pull down your trousers and let me have a closer look I can…”
“Idiot. Do you think I will let you gape at my privates? What I meant was…what would Takahata-sensei think when he saw me? But of course, a brat like you will not see it like a real man does.”
“What will I not see?”
“This you stupid fool.” She pulls down the trousers to her knees and pushes her hips forward. “My vagina, my pussy or whatever they call it where you come from.”
“It’s ok, I have seen it now.”
“You haven’t seen anything you hear.” She grabs his jacket and says it right into his face. “If Takahata-sensei thinks I’m a jerk now it is your fault so you’ll have to take the responsibility and help me repair my relationship with him. What kinds of magic can you use?” She lets him go but she is still standing very close.
“Not so many I’m afraid. I’m still in training.”
“Do you have any love potions?”
“Sorry, nope.”
“Hm…How about a money tree?”
“I don’t understand what you mean by that.”
“Hmm. You’re pretty useless, aren’t you?”
“I’m really sorry, the only magic I’m good at is mind reading.”
“You’re pretty good at destroying clothes also. But if you do that to Takahata-sensei I will never forgive you. I have no urge to see him naked and…Aogh,” she grunts angrily. “But you said mind reading…I can take advantage of that. You can find out what Takahata-sensei really is thinking. But I can’t go to class like this.”
“No, you should pull up your trousers first.”
“Eh?” She looks down and realizes her trousers are still around her knees and she quickly pulls them up as much as possible. “What I meant was I need a school uniform. Wait here a minute.”
It takes more than a minute, but eventually she is back. She is still wearing the clothes Negi brought her and she carries her uniform and underwear with her. She hands it over to Negi and strips naked. And again he can behold the nude body of the girl with no pubes. She takes her clothes one by one and puts them on.
“I thought you would change inside before coming here,” says Negi.
“Eh? Yeah, why didn’t I do that? You ask too many questions. And this is my last school uniform, so if you destroy this one also, I will strip you and chase you naked all around Mahora Academy. And you are going to pay me for the two uniforms you already have destroyed.”
“I will Asuna. As soon as I’m getting my first payment I will buy you new uniforms.”
“Okay, let’s go to the classroom. I think the break is over long ago.”
“NEGI-SENSEI! WELCOME!” The whole class is there and they are throwing him a welcoming party. They have brought food and drinks and everybody wants to talk to him. But they are a little more behaved now and don’t hug and pet him all the time. He gets many comments and compliments on how cute he is and everybody seem to have a good time. Nodoka thanks him for saving her and gives him a library gift certificate and Ayaka gives him a statue of him she has made. Asuna doesn’t like that and the two girls start to fight again. Takahata and Ms Shizuna are also there and when Asuna notices Takahata-sensei, she stops her fighting and asks Negi to read his mind. And Negi approaches Takahata while Asuna is waiting on the other side of the room.
“What do you think of Asuna,” he asks straight out.
“Well, she works really hard in her morning part time job; she’s a reliable person…a very cheerful and energetic girl.”
That’s what he says, but he was thinking something else and Negi goes to Asuna to report. “He was wondering why you were without panties together with me earlier today,” he says.
Asuna gets so embarrassed she almost falls to the floor. “Did he think Negi and I were doing something…indecent? Oh no, but I can’t blame him. And I can’t talk to him about it.” To Negi she says: “Ask him what he thought of me before that.”
“He was thinking about how you look like in little bear panties,” says Negi when he has done his task.
This time it’s too much for her and she runs out of the room and Negi runs after her.
“Stop following me,” she shouts to him when she runs down the stairs.
“ASUNA!” He is yelling out so it echoes down the stairway.
She stops and waits for him. “Don’t shout so loud. They hear you all over the academy.”
“But it’s all my fault. I’m your homeroom teacher and you are my…” He almost says friend, but he changes it to student. “I still want to help, but I don’t think magic works in a situation like this. My grandpa used to say: real magic is the courage you have.”
“Courage…hm. I got it. I’ll find my courage. I will confess to Takahata-sensei about my feelings. But I need to practice first. You pretend that you are Takahata-sensei.” She makes him stand at the top of the stairs while she is standing a little lower so their faces are in equal height. “I love you sensei,” she says.
Negi is looking at her face and he has to admit that she is very cute. She reminds him of his sister when she lets her hair down. And when she talks like that…maybe she will be his good friend, like Anya. He looks into her eyes and his heart beats faster.
“I’ve loved you for a long time,” continues Asuna. “Does that bother you?”
“Ah no…but…” Her face is just a few inches away from his and he is sweating by nervousness.
“No. There’s no hope for someone like me,” she says and turns away.
“That’s not true,” says Negi and grabs her shoulder.
“Well then…shall we continue with the next step?” She puts her hands on his neck and cheeks and moves her face closer to him. “Now close your eyes.”
“She is really going to…what is it with this girl?” Negi thinks confused. “But she’s my student, I shouldn’t let her...”
“I got you,” she says and pinches his cheeks. “Ha ha! You really thought I was going to kiss you. Your face was all red and quivering. I’m gonna punish you for putting me through all those awful situations.”
Suddenly the whole class is coming with Ayaka in front. She thinks that they are kissing for real and she attacks Asuna with great fury.
“Do something sensei,” shouts Asuna. “She is killing me!”
“Okay, erase their memories,” he says and raises his staff.
Fortunately Asuna is able to tear herself loose from Ayaka and stops him. “Are you crazy? Do you want everybody to lose their clothes? Isn’t it enough that you erased mine?”
Soon they have all calmed down and he is able to explain to Ayaka what this was all about.
“Hmf. But be careful sensei. You shouldn’t let her get so close to you, she’s capable of doing some really crazy things you know. She can be very violent.”
Fortunately Konoka is talking to Asuna so she doesn’t hear what Ayaka is saying or else they would probably have started fighting again.
They finish earlier since it’s the first day of the new semester and Negi says goodbye to the class and heads for the dorm together with Asuna and Konoka. It’s not far so they don’t have to take the train, they can just walk.
“I’m sorry,” he says to Asuna. “My first class ended in disaster and my secret was exposed. Everything went wrong for me; I can’t continue as a teacher.”
“Of course you can,” says Asuna. “We want Negi-sensei as our homeroom teacher, won’t we Konoka?”
“We sure do. The whole class want you. We have never had so much fun at school before.”
“And regarding your secret,” says Asuna. “I swear to the Gods I will never tell anyone and I will help you protecting it. Now what do you say?”
“Thank you very much Asuna. You are right, I can’t give up already. I will work hard to be a good teacher.” He finds his roster and erases what he written about Asuna earlier today. “A nice person after all” he writes instead.
“And in return Asuna I will not tell anybody that I saw you naked, that you showed me your privates and…”
“You have already told someone, haven’t you?” Asuna interrupts. “Konoka is here, if you didn’t notice.”
“I’m sorry, I thought you were best friends and…”
“What have you two been doing?” says Konoka. “But I think it’s a nice thing to do. Asuna has a cute vagina, hasn’t she?”
“Yes, it’s so smooth and pink.”
“She has cutest vagina in the whole class. We voted, in the bath when she was not there. Well, one of the cutest that was. But it was a very nice gesture of you Asuna, to show it to our new home room teacher.”
“Can we please stop talking about my vagina?” says Asuna. “We must go now. I guess you’re curious to see the place where you are going to sleep Negi. It’s ok, you can sleep with my vagina, I mean with me, in my room I mean, or in mine and Konoka’s room that is.”
“Thank you eh eh…atchoooo,” Negi sneezes so Asuna’s and Konoka’s skirt are lifted up. But luckily no panties are erased and he doesn’t see any cute vaginas.
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