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Keitaro\'s revenge

By: megler
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Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Keitaro's revenge

Disclaimer: Love Hina and all its character is owned by Ken Akamatsu.

”Okay Keitaro,” says Naru. “It’s because of you we all came safely back from the trip to the amusement park. So we have decided to do something for you back. And the good thing is that you can decide yourself what you want us to do, as long it’s not a lot of work. We will not do all the work in the house for you.”

“And you can not choose something that cost a lot of money,” adds Mitsune.

“That was really a surprise,” says Keitaro. “I never thought you would do something for me. But for how long will you do this…“something”?”

“It depends,” says Naru. “If it’s an easy thing we can do it the whole semester. But if it’s more time consuming it will be for a shorter time.”

The other girls look a little sceptical at Naru. Apparently they haven’t discussed that issue. They just agreed that they wanted to do something for Keitaro to thank him for looking after them on that trip. They had behaved more irresponsible than primary school kids and it was the eldest of them who were the worst. If not Keitaro had done what he did, they would probably have gotten into some serious trouble. So after they got home and all the girls took a bath in the outside pool they decided this and when they were finished and all dressed they called Keitaro to the garden.

“I’ll choose an easy thing,” says Keitaro. “Something that is not time consuming at all. I want you to go naked always, in the house and outside in the garden.”

“You fucking pervert!” shouts Mitsune and hits him as hard as she can with her fist. She attacks him furiously and she shouts: “You pig, you pervert, you…is that all you think of? Peeking and looking at nude girls? You are disgusting.”

“You call me a pervert no matter what I do, so I might as well behave as one,” shouts Keitaro while trying to cover his face to avoid Mitsune’s punches.

“Why are you just sitting there?” shouts Mitsune to the other girls. “Naru! Why don’t you help me give this little shit boy a lesson? You have never been afraid of doing that before!”

“Let’s first hear what he has to say,” says Naru surprisingly calm. “Let him go Mitsune. Now speak out Keitaro; why do you want us to be naked?”

“I think Mitsune pretty much have answered that question already,” says Keitaro while wiping off a little blood from his mouth. “I’m fed up with being beaten up every time I accidentally get to see a bare breast or a bit of a panties. You walk around the house and the garden naked or half naked and every time you happen to bump into me you beat the shit out of me. Do you expect me to be invisible? I don’t care being called a pervert and the other names you give me. I just want to be able to walk around in the house where I’m living without fearing getting beaten up around the next corner. So if you were naked all the time you would have no reason to do that and I could calm down my nerves and get some peace to concentrate on my studies.”

Mitsune is having a hard time controlling herself while she waits for the others to say something.

“He’s right,” says Naru and all the others gasp in surprise. “We have treated him unfairly. I mean, he is the manager of this place and we treat him like a slave. It’s not strange that he wants revenge.”

“If he wants revenge, why doesn’t he fight then?” says Mitsune. “He didn’t even try to fight back when I attacked him.”

“He is small and slender and weighs only half of what you do Mitsune. Not everybody can be a martial arts expert. You know he has no time to train, and if he had he would soon have beaten you. If you want to fight, try a few rounds with Motoko.”

“Why the hell are you picking on me?” says Mitsune irritated. “You have beaten him up hundreds of times, but when I do it once you defend him. I had a lot better reason for hitting than you usually have.”

“And I have said I’m sorry. Keitaro, I think it’s better that you go inside while we discuss this. You might be hit again if you stay. I’ll talk to you later.”

“Now I’ve done it,” he thinks while he walks away. “I should never have been so bold, they’ll never forgive this. They are just going to make me work even harder and scold me every minute. How could I be so stupid? Maybe I should just pack my things and get out of here before they all come to beat me up?”

“Now maybe we can discuss this without screaming and be angry at each other,” says Naru when Keitaro is gone. “I understand you are mad Mitsune and that’s ok, you have every right to believe that his suggestion was disgusting.”

“Ok, I’ll calm down. Say what you want to say.”

“Well, we are very lucky to live here. It’s cheap, we have lots of room and we can do almost whatever we want here. Keitaro is the manager, it’s not us, and he can throw any of us out whenever he wants to. Is there anybody who wants to leave? Have you thought of how difficult and expensive it is to find a place to live here in Tokyo? We don’t know how lucky we are. We are privileged to have a landlord like him. We should appreciate him and show him a little respect and if the only thing he wants is to see us naked I think it’s a small price to pay for having such a good and easy life here.”

“Yoohoo, I want to be naked!” shouts Suu and throws off her dress. “It’s so fun, I want to be naked all the time and climb trees and play in the jungle.” And before anybody is able to stop her she runs away and climbs buck naked up in a tall tree where she hangs upside down shouting with joy.

“Look at that baboon,” says Mitsune. “We will never get clothes on her again. Anybody else who wants to say something?”

“I’ll do anything for Keitaro,” says Shinobu. “He has seen me naked before and I don’t mind. I have nothing to be ashamed of.”

“See, you are already in a minority Mitsune,” says Naru. “We are now three who is for it.”

“But you cannot let these young brats decide. They don’t understand what this is all about.”

“What is it they don’t understand? They live here and they have just the same right as you to decide matters that concerns us all.”

“What do you think Motoko?” says Mitsune resigned. “You haven’t spoken yet.”

“Naru is right that we have treated Keitaro bad. Very bad in fact. Any other house lord would have thrown us out immediately, but he only wants to do his best and works his ass off for us.”

“So you are also for it then?” interrupts Mitsune.

“I didn’t say that. What I mean is that we should appreciate him a little more and show him some respect, but I wish there was another way to do it, I wouldn’t mind doing more of the work in the house.”

“We have three for, one against and one who hasn’t decided yet,” says Shinobu maturely. “Will we do it then?”

“We’ll have to talk to Haruka and hear what she says,” says Mitsune, quite sure that Keitaro’s aunt will correct the others and tell Keitaro what a pervert he is.

“You’re right,” says Naru. “Will you run down and get her Shinobu?”

A short while later Haruka is coming, with a cigarette in the corner of her mouth as usual. “What’s the fuzz here?” she says. “Shinobu tells me something about everybody being naked. Can someone tell me the whole story?”

“You tell her Mitsune,” says Naru.

“Okay, we, all of us girls decided that we would do something for Keitaro because he looked so well after us in the amusement park and we also felt that we haven’t been really nice to him since he arrived. So we asked him what he wanted and he said he wanted us to be naked here all the time?”

“Yes, and what’s the problem?” says Haruka.

“The problem is that little…boy wants us to walk around naked and show ourselves off so he can peek at nude girls all the time,” says Mitsune a little irritated.

“It’s only normal for a boy to look at girls,” says Haruka. “You should be flattered because he likes you. And there’s no problem being naked here. The house is on the top of a hill and it has high walls around it and lots of trees in the garden so nobody can look in. The gate is locked and if somebody is coming he has to ring a bell outside and wait for someone to come and open. The only place anybody might see you is on the roof. I know some of you have a habit of sitting on the roof, but I’m sure Keitaro will accept that you put on a skirt and a blouse if you are going up there.”

“So what about you?” asks Mitsune. “Will you also be naked?”

“Sure. But I’ll leave up to you girls to decide it. If you decide to go for it, Haruka will also be naked, outside in the garden and when she is inside the inn with you.”

It becomes very silent, nobody knows what to say but suddenly Mitsune starts to laugh. The others look surprised at her. “You guys are just crazy, totally insane. I thought I was the one who was crazy here, but you are a hundred times worse.” She rises up while she is laughing out loud. “I’ll go with you,” she says and starts to undress. “I’ll show Keitaro my small breasts and my little pussy and he can gaze at it ‘till he goes blind.” She pulls down he pants together with her panties and she is stark naked. “That’s it, that was the last time I had clothes on for the next six months.”

“You are great Mitsune,” says Shinobu and starts to undress too.

“Wait a second,” says Naru. “We’ll have to agree all of us first and Motoko hasn’t. What do you say Motoko? You don’t want to?”

“It’s not that, it’s…I’m so shy. I feel terrified letting a boy see me naked. I wish I was like you but…”

“Why Motoko?” asks Mitsune. “You have the nicest body of us all.”

“Do I?”

“\'Cause you do. Open your blouse and let me see your boobs. You are not shy to us are you?”
“No it’s only when there are boys or men around,” says Motoko and does as Mitsune says. She has nothing underneath and her round firm breasts are soon exposed. “They are so small, not like you and Naru.” She looks at Naru. “Why are you sitting there with all your clothes on? It was your idea from the beginning. Let’s take her.”

Motoko and Mitsune throw themselves upon Naru and with a little help from Shinobu they tear all her clothes off.

“That felt good,” says Motoko. “Now I can also take my trousers off.” She pulls down her wide cotton trousers and her panties and she is standing unabashed in all her naked beauty.

“Haruka,” says Mitsune. “Who have the nicest boobs and the most beautiful body of the three of us? You are the only one who can tell.”

The three girls pose beside each other and Haruka walks around them. Suu has come down from the tree and she and Shinobu are sitting beside each other watching the show.

“You are all very beautiful,” says Haruka. “You two also.” She looks at Suu and Shinobu. “But it’s not me who should be the judge in your little beauty pageant. You know who, and I think you should go and get him.”

“I have a suggestion,” says Naru. “I don’t think he really believed that we would do it. So what if we…” She tells the others her idea and they all agree with her.

Haruka puts on her dress and goes to get him. Five minutes later she come back with him blindfolded. “I found him in the hall. He had packed his things and was ready to leave.”

“Well, I don’t think he will leave when he has seen this,” says Mitsune.

They gather around him and Haruka removes his blindfold. Keitaro can hardly believe what he is seeing; there are naked girls all around him and they show no shame. He can look as much as he wants at their boobs, butts and thighs and they are just smiling to him. “I must have died and come to heaven,” he thinks. “Or is it just a very vivid dream? This can’t be real, I must be hallucinating.”

“Don’t look so puzzled nephew,” says Haruka. “This will be your reality for the next six months, so cheer up and enjoy what you’re seeing.”

Keitaro looks at his aunt, even she is naked. He has never thought of it before but she really is a beautiful woman with a great body.

“From now on this is the Hinata all nude girls dormitory,” says Haruka. “No clothes are allowed inside the gates.”

“But that only counts for girls,” says Naru. “We will not have any naked boys running around showing their birdie, understood?

“Yes no problem,” he says. He was starting he get a little afraid that he had to undress also. Something is happening inside his trousers and it would be very embarrassing to show it off. “Thank you everybody, I don’t what to say about this, I still feel…” He is walking up to Naru, but then he suddenly stumbles and falls towards her. She is also falling and he is landing on right top of her with his face and all his body against hers.

“I’m sorry,” he says and rises up.

“Keitaro, you pervert!” Naru is shouting. “What were you trying to do to me?” She kicks after him but misses, and Keitaro runs away with Naru right behind him.

“Well, Naru is herself and I guess nothing can change that,” says Haruka.

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