Show Me Love

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Show Me Love


“Ren, are you ok?” asked Misty, after Ren ignored her almost all day, “You know you can tell me anything, right?”. No answer. “Ren do you hear me? If you got a problem please tell me!”. Ren said nothing but kissed her. This kiss was rough, like he didn’t loved her. Misty stopped it and one tear fell from her eye. “If you don’t love me you can tell me! Please don’t pretend you care, ok?” And with this she left.

Ren’s POV

I looked at her when she was leaving. When she was out of sight I gave a big and deep sigh...how can I show her how I feel? I do love her, more than anything in this world but...how?.......... Maybe if I…


Normal POV


Misty went to her house and laid on her bed. Alone. This was how she was feeling since her parents died. But one day she met him. Her love. Her everything. But if he told her he loved her why didn’t he show it? Why?

Outside her house there was Ren. If she wanted him to show her he loves her, he will. He will show her why he choosed her to be his girlfriend. Ren, slowly, ringed the doorbell. After a few seconds he heard Misty’s footsteps. Then the door opened. She had a surprised look on her face. Ren entered and kissed her. But this kiss was different. It was full of passion…and lust. That’s it. Ren wanted to be one with her, wanted to be with her forever.

Misty’s POV

I opened the door and there was him. I was surprised because when we had our little discussion, Ren never went after me. It was me the one that apologized, not him. And then he kissed me. But, wow!...this kiss was amazing!!

Normal POV

Ren stopped the kiss and looked at her. She was breathing hard. He managed to left her breathless only with a kiss. “Misty I want to show you how much I love you.”. She looked confused for a few seconds but then realised what he meant. She blushed very hard, but nodded. They went to her bedroom and he gently laid her on the bed. What do I do?! What do I do?! I never did this!! I’m the great Ren Tao, I know how to fight but girls…well I’ll do everything I can to satisfy her.
Ren stripped himself and Misty did the same. He, then, kissed her. A kiss full of passion. Misty felt Ren’s tongue licking her lips, begging for entrance. She, gladly, opened them. Ren’s tongue explored every corner of her mouth and the found her tongue and started to play with it. The two tongues began a dance full of passion. Misty ended the kiss, breathless. Then, she and Ren changed their position.
They were sat down (sp?) on the bed. She then started to give him little kisses on the check until she reached his ear. She licked his earlobe and Ren gave a gasp. Then she went to his neck and tried to find his weak spot. She licked everywhere and when she reached a little spot Ren moaned.

Taking this as a sign, she began to nuzzling, breathing and licking his weak spot and he started to moan louder. Driving her tongue down his body, she found his nipples and began to tease him by giving light kisses on it. Ren groaned. She knew this was irritating him, but then she moved her tongue down, until she was in front of his manhood. She kissed the tip of it and then licked it all down. Knowing what Ren wanted, she put it in her mouth.

Ren gave a loud moan. Misty started to suck faster and Ren cummed in her mouth. She, then, started to swallow it, but Ren took her face in his hand kissed deeply, even if he was swallowing his own cum. She blushed hard.

“My turn, now.” Ren said. He did the same but when he reached her breasts he licked it and sucked and then gently bit the nipple. She gave a shy moan. Ren did the same to the other and then moved down until he was in front of her womanhood. He inserted his tongue inside of her. She moaned in pleasure. Then he inserted two fingers while he licked her clitoris. “Ren STOP!!” she screamed. She was breathing hard and Ren licked the juices that were coming out of her.

“Are you sure you want to go ahead with this? We can stop if you want.” Ren asked her. “No, please. I want to do this with you. Only with you.”.
Ren gave her a real smile and then kissed her. When he ended it, he entered in her. She gave a cry of pain. He looked at her with concern. “Please continue.” Ren started to go slowly, for her to get used to the feeling. When she gave a loud moan he went faster. Misty never felt like this. It was amazing! She never felt so much pleasure in her whole life. They reached their climax at the same time. His seed on her body, deep inside of her. He left her body and laid next to her.

“Misty, I love you. I gave you everything I had. Please believe me when I say it.” “I do, Ren. I do…and I love you too.” Ren pulled the covers for both of them and embraced her. This is forever Misty…and I never make an empty promise…I love you…

The End


Kattycat: This is my very first fanfiction!! Please review!! Don’t forget to tell if it’s good or not and what needs to get better!! BYE!!