AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

Demoness Of Desire

By: Bishonen
folder +G to L › Love Hina
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 9
Views: 18,142
Reviews: 25
Recommended: 1
Currently Reading: 3
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Next arrow_forward

Demoness Of Desire

Demoness Of Desire

Chapter 1


Seta found a mysterious box deep inside of the ruins he was exploring.

“Keitaro, come over here. This is a very interesting find.”

Keitaro walked over. “What is it, Seta?” he asked. The box was covered in strange symbols

“I’m not sure,” Seta said, carefully lifting the box. Suddenly, there was a bright flash of light.

In Japan, a package had arrived at the Hina House, and all the girls were gathered around, curious as to what Keitaro had sent from his latest expedition. Naru opened it up.

“What’s that?” Mutsumi asked, looking at the box.

“I have no idea,” Naru said, picking it up.

Motoko looked at it. She knew right away that there was something wrong with it. “It has a dark aura. I don’t think anyone should touch it,” she said, eyeing it suspiciously.

Naru sat it down on the table. “Considering some of the things that have happened in the past, that might not be too bad of an idea.”

After talking about it for a while, everyone decided it would be best to call Motoko's sister, Tsuruko. Motoko explained it over the phone.

“Motoko, whatever you do, don’t let anyone open it, and try to avoided letting it be touched at all. I’ll be there as soon as I can.”

Motoko was unnerved by the urgent tone in Tsuruko’s voice. (What could make her worry so much?) After telling the others about how her sister had acted, they agreed that Motoko should watch over it.

“Well, it should be a few days until Tsuruko gets here, so I’ll keep it in my room,” Motoko said, picking up the box.

(I wonder what this thing is?) Motoko wondered after sitting it down on a table.

(Oh well, I have more important things to do), Motoko thought, walking over to her closet. She pulled out the novel that she had been working on.

After a few hours of staring at the blank sheet, Motoko still couldn’t think of anything to write. “Why am I stuck so badly on this?” Motoko asked out loud.

A low, seductive voice answered, (Maybe because you're not truly interested in something as romantic as what that story’s about).

Motoko turned around. “Who’s there?” she asked, reaching for her sword.

(Well, I have many names, but the one I’m most found of is Lilith). Motoko realized the voice was coming from the box.

(Why don’t you let me out? I’m sure that could help you...) Lilith said in an enticing voice.

For a few brief seconds, Motoko considered it, but then her sister's warning came back into her mind. “You can't trick me, demon! I’m a student of the Shinmei-ryû School!”

Lilith chuckled. (HA! You think that impresses me? I fought against the one who created that style! It was he who sealed me in here. I can easily tell that you're nowhere near his level).

(So that’s why sister knew about this box...I wonder why I was never told of this?) Motoko wondered.

(That’s because no one in your family takes your skills seriously. But if you let me out, I could help you get the strength you want, and even more), Lilith’s voice said, her tone becoming more haunting for a few seconds.

Motoko thought about what Lilith had said, but quickly dismissed those thoughts.

(I know what you want most of all. No one thinks much of you...not your friends, not your family, not even yourself. I promise you that if you let me out, I can make all of your dreams come true...even the ones you don’t know about).

Motoko thought about how everyone treated her. Without thinking, she walked over to the table and sat down in front of the box. She put her hand on the lid.

(No, I mustn’t).

(Why not?) Lilith asked.

“Wait...I just realized...you’ve been reading my mind!” Motoko said, backing away. (I can't believe I almost fell for it!)

Lilith’s voice entered Motoko’s mind again. (How about I make you a promise? Release me for just a few minutes, and I’ll give you a small taste of what you want most. And if you don’t like it, I’ll return to my prison).

Motoko thought about it for a few seconds. “How do I know I can trust you? After all, you’re a demon.”

(Please, I prefer to be called a Demoness), Lilith’s voice seemed to seep through Motoko’s entire body.

“Sorry Demoness, but there is no way I can trust you,” Motoko said in an apologetic tone of voice.

(It’s alright. You didn’t know any better. And I may be evil, but I’m honest. The only demons that lie are the weak ones who want to gain something), Lilith’s voice went through Motoko again. She could see a small amount of logic in it.

“But you have something to gain: your freedom. Why would you willingly go back?” Motoko asked.

(That’s a very good point), Lilith said. For some reason, hearing the praise made Mokoto happy. (It’s true that if I were released, that there would be no real reason to keep my word...but I find lying to be…distasteful. So you have my word).

Motoko found it hard not to believe the beautiful voice that she heard. “Okay, I’ll let you out...but only for a few minutes,” Motoko said, and with that she very carefully undid the seals that held the box closed.

There was a brief flash of light, and as soon as Motoko’s eyes cleared, she saw the most perfect woman she'd ever conceived standing in front of her. Lilith’s skin was pale and perfectly smooth. Her hair hung down to her waist. It was as black as a moonless night. Her hands were small and dainty, but clearly those of a demon, for each of her slender fingers had a long, sharp claw that was painted blood red. Mokoto looked over the outfit that she was wearing. It was a thin night gown that showed off her figure, which was impressive. Her chest was large. Not quite as big as Mutsumi’s, but considering how slim her figure was, it wouldn’t be right if they were that size. Motoko’s eyes went lower. Lilith’s legs were perfect, long and toned. Her feet were completely bare, and her toenails were just like her fingernails. Motoko’s eyes then went to her face. Her lips were a deeper red, almost black. She smiled slightly, revealing a pair of sharp fangs. It was then that Motoko noticed something unsettling--Lilith’s eyes were completely black, devoid of any other color.

Lilith stretched, her outfit falling open slightly. “Ahhh…it feels so good to be free. Now then, it’s time that I kept my word,” the demoness said, walking toward Motoko, who found the sway of Lilith’s hips almost hypnotic.

“I said I’d show you what you really want,” Lilith said, reaching out. Motoko tensed up slightly.

“Don’t worry. I won't hurt you,” Lilith said, gently brushing Motoko’s cheek. Lilith then leaned in and kissed Motoko, while at the same time grabbing hold of Motoko’s breasts. Motoko pushed her away.

“What do you think you're doing?” Motoko said, her voice full of anger.

“I’m simply giving you what you want,” Lilith said, moving closer and this time pinning Motoko’s hands.

“W-What are you talking about?” Motoko asked defensively.

“There’s no point in lying,” Lilith said. Her voice seemed to go right into Motoko’s soul.

“No, why not give in?” Lilith asked. Motoko thought about it for a few seconds, but quickly pushed away all of those thoughts. She pulled her hands free and pushed the demoness away again.

“There’s no way I’d ever submit to anyone, least of all another woman!” Motoko said, wiping her mouth.

“I can't stand it when people lie...especially to themselves,” Lilith said. “So then tell me, if you would never submit to anyone, then why is it that whenever your sister so much as suggests something, you do it without hesitation?” Motoko had no answer. “I’ll tell you why. Some part of you likes it. Some part of you, a part that you know you contain, is a weak little girl who has to cling to those stronger than herself in any way. Your obsession with pleasing your sister, who is stronger than you in both power and feminine beauty and charm...that quick little crush on Keitaro, when you thought of him as stronger than you in empathy and emotional connections, which made you almost docile toward him...your act of barely being able to put on a strong face to fool others when you're scared, relying on their confidence in you, because their faith in you is strong while your own self-confidence is weak...that weak part of you exists, and cries out to be dominated, to submit to those stronger. But most of you is different...it's not strong, but it despises your weakness, and those around you who don't know what it is to be weak. That part of you, it wants to make others know what it is to be weak, what it is to desire submission as much as your own weak side desires it...that part of you wishes to make others into your slaves, to make your friends and family submit to you in every way, as the other part of you has always been ready to do so to each of them for whatever greater strengths they have. And that’s what I’m going to give you...your wish to make them your slaves.

"But first, you must give into me,” Lilith said, looking her in the eyes. Motoko was entranced by their utter lack of color, and simply stood there.

“Now then, what do you say?” Lilith asked. Motoko nodded in silent consent.

“Good. Now, strip!” Lilith ordered softly.

Motoko immediately began to remove her clothes. As soon as her clothing was on the ground, Lilith shed away what little she had been wearing. Lilith walked over to Motoko and kissed her again. This time, she met no resistance at all. Her tongue lightly brushed against Motoko’s lips, and was granted access. Lilith then slid one of her hands inbetween Motoko’s legs. She very lightly ran her finger along the outer lips of Motoko’s pussy. She broke the kiss and brought up her finger. There was a small amount of moisture clinging to it.

“Lick it clean,” Lilith ordered, placing her finger against Motoko’s lips. At first she seemed like she didn’t want to, but then she looked into Lilith’s empty black eyes and saw only her own dark reflection.

“You know you want to,” Lilith said in a whisper. Without further hesitation, Motoko licked away her own juice, and savored the taste, taking Lilith’s finger and sucking on it.

“This is much easier than I thought it would be. I guess that whole strong will of yours was nothing but an act,” Lilith said, pulling her hand away from Motoko’s mouth and dipping it down between the samurai girl's legs again. Lilith jammed a few fingers in, pushing them in deep, but stopping short of Motoko’s hymen.

“Okay, now then, let's get into a more comfortable position,” Lilith suggested. Without wasting any time, Motoko got on the floor.

(I don’t know why, but I just can't seem to stop my body), Motoko thought, half-heartedly trying to regain control over herself.

“The reason is because, unlike your mind, it knows what you truly want,” Lilith said, looking Motoko in the face again. The second Motoko’s eye met Lilith’s, all thoughts of anything other than pleasure disappeared.

“Now then, I’m going to show you a very good time, but first I want you promise me that if I give the power to get what you truly want, then you must agree to be mine,” Lilith said, slowly tracing her finger along Motoko’s body.

For a few brief seconds, Motoko thought about saying no. Then Lilith’s long fingernails pinched her clit hard. As the mixture of pleasure and pain shot through her, Motoko thought, (No, I can't give in! I must stop this right now! I’m supposed to destroy demons like this!) But even she didn't believe it any more.

“Now that’s not very nice,” Lilith said, looking Motoko in the eyes. Motoko’s will melted away. “Now then, I’m going to give you a small sample of what I can give you, if you agree.”

And with that, Lilith lowered herself between Motoko’s legs.

“Your pussy’s pretty wet. Your mind may be telling you that you don’t want this, but your body certainly doesn’t want to stop,” Lilith commented, before she put her mouth over Motoko’s mound. She ran her tongue along the length of her slit, drawing a long low moan from Motoko. After licking the outside for a short while, Lilith plunged her tongue in as deep as it could go. Motoko began to grind her hips, trying to get a bit more pleasure. Lilith continued to eat out Motoko until she came hard, but Lilith didn’t stop. Rather, she added a finger, and began to pump it alongside of her tongue. She also began to alternate her speed, going fast one second and practically stopping the next second, until Motoko came again, harder than the first time.

“Now then, what do you say?” Lilith asked, licking her lips.

Motoko nodded weakly.

“Very well then. You’ll become mine, now and forever,” Lilith asked, confirming Motoko’s answer. “Now, I’ll reward you.”

She walked over to Motoko’s closet.

“I know everything there is to know about you,” she said, opening the door. She took out a long, double-ended dildo.

“I don’t know why you have this, though. I mean, your hymen's still intact, and in addition, you’ve only ever fantasized about other girls, never done more.”

Lilith then walked back to Motoko, who was laying on the ground, covered in sweat. Lilith shoved the toy into her own cunt before lowering herself so that she was between Motoko’s legs.

“Now this is going to hurt,” she said, thrusting forward, piercing the thin inner wall. Motoko winced slightly, but soon any trace of pain was gone as Lilith began to pump her hips back and forth. After a little while, Lilith lifted Motoko up and grabbed hold of both of her ass cheeks, and began to lift her up slightly, before dropping her, letting the toy go in even deeper than before. When Motoko was right on the verge of an orgasm, Lilith opened her mouth. Her fangs glistened slightly. She leaned forward and bit Motoko’s neck, her sharp teeth breaking through the skin of Motoko’s neck. As her fangs went in, Motoko was hit by the most powerful orgasm she had ever felt, and everything around her went black.

Motoko sat up. A sharp pain went through her neck. She put her hand over the spot that felt like it was on fire. She felt two trails of dried blood.

“Well, it looks like the transformation is taking hold,” Lilith said, holding up a mirror.

Motoko looked at her reflection. Her hair had grown considerably longer, and her eyes seemed to have a seductive gleam to them. She looked down at the rest of her body, wondering if she had changed more, and was somewhat disappointed that the rest of her body was unchanged.

“What happened to me?” Motoko asked.

“It’s very simple. You’ve become a semi-demoness. Let me explain. I did not force you to do anything. Rather, I made you realize what you really wanted. Now that I’m free, I intend to finish what I started a long time ago.” Lilith brushed some hair away from her face. “I want to take over the world, of course. But I can't make humans do anything, only lead them into doing something they want to do. I can only actually control other demons. Right now, you're still mostly human, so you have free will, and even after you change completely, I think you’d be more fun with it. So I need you to help make all those other pretty girls into slaves. OUR slaves.”

Motoko nodded. “Sound like fun,” she said, smiling and revealing a set of fangs.


Ok I don’t know how good this was so if you want to see more leave a review please oh and one last thing for those who didn’t figure it out Seta and Keitaro are dead.
Next arrow_forward

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?