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A Really Good Day

By: moontatoo
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Rating: Adult ++
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A Really Good Day

Hi Friends !

Back to Drake and JJ . Some sweet , some sap ,some sex.
Follows the timeline that started with 'Kiss' .

The boys are an established couple here .

Please find something else to read if you are a child .

Moon






Two little angels sat up in heaven , watching the earth below .

“ My human has been having a rough go of it of late , “ the first said to the second .” I think he deserves a break . “

“ Well ? “ the second replied , “ Are you his guardian or not ? If it’s a break you think he deserves, then give it to him .”

“ You know, friend , “ the first smiled , “ I think I’ll take your advice…”


Drake Parker awoke that Monday morning in his favorite way , spooned snuggly up to JJ’s soft , round ass.
His lover was sleeping peacefully, breathing measured as Drake allowed his large hands to slowly drift across his slender body . There was ample territory to explore ,too ; it was late spring ,when both men wore boxers to bed ,sometimes not even that . This was a ‘not even ‘ night for JJ , he was sweetly bare , warm and smooth under the covers .

His nipples peaked under Drake’s wandering hands , a dreamy sigh escaping his lips as Drake nuzzled into the back of his neck . Ummm , Drake thought , I could stay like this forever. A glance at the clock , however , proved him wrong . Time to get up, and get ready for work .

The shower was nice and hot , and a full bottle of his favorite shampoo awaited him .( Hmmm…had JJ gone grocery shopping yesterday ?) He gave his morning hard-on a few token strokes , but decided to wait for the real thing later that night .

Whistling , he shaved , happy to find his razor worn in just right , marveling at the smooth skin of his face , nick-free for once . Back in the bedroom , he dressed quietly so as not to wake JJ . He smiled fondly at his lover . In his absence he’d curled on his side and was using Drake’s pillow like a giant teddy bear .

Apparently JJ had gone shopping . There was fresh Folgers in the cupboard, sandwich fixings and ice cold Aqua Fina in the fridge . Drake listened to the news on the kitchen radio as he made his lunch . The forecast called for close to seventy degrees ,and sunny skies . That’s funny , he could have sworn yesterday it had predicted rain. Well, maybe he’d walk part way today , and chance the trains .

The patio door slid open twenty minutes later while he was finishing his coffee.

“Good morning , sleepy head ,” Drake grinned up at JJ , who shuffled outside , hair tousled and bathrobe wrapped around his body . JJ yawned and smiled back . Drake set his cup aside as JJ made himself at home on Drake’s lap . “ What are you doing up so early on your day off ?”

“ Had to pee , “ JJ yawned again . Drake could smell he’d already brushed his teeth . “ And I had the best dream ,too “

“ Oh really ?” Drake purred , leaning back as JJ snuggled closer , and the results of his dream poked Drake in the side . He slid a hand down JJ’s terry cloth side to fondle his hip . “ Remember any of it ? “

“ Mmmm,” JJ murmured , leaning in for a kiss . He wound his arms around Drake’s neck , parting his lips . Several glorious minutes of tongue wrestling ensued , in which Drake felt his body heat deliciously , starting at his groin and spreading all points North and South .

They broke apart , breathing heavily . “ Why don’t you call in today , sweetie , “ JJ whispered , tongue caressing the shell of Drake’s ear . “ And I’ll hand cuff you to the bed and spend the day doing wicked things to you . ”

Drake groaned , feeling his dress slacks grow impossibly tight . “ Oh God ,babe …” JJ had latched on to his neck and was sucking lightly . Drake pulled back and gazed at him , slightly cross-eyed .” Save the hickeys until after work , okay ?”

JJ pouted , but mercifully loosened his grip . “ I know , I know , you have court today . But it was worth a try .” He sighed , and climbed off Drake’s lap .

Drake stood and wrapped his arms around JJ ‘s waist , pulling him in again . JJ was barefoot , and raised up on his toes , looping his arms around Drake’s neck as the taller man bent to kiss him . Drake let his tongue wander deeply , loving the point where JJ sagged in his embrace , boneless and moaning against him .

They broke apart when oxygen need became an annoying issue . JJ’s mouth was pink and swollen , and Drake wanted to shove him to his knees and get a blow-job then and there , work be damned . With a strength he didn’t know he possessed he stepped away , shuddering .

“ Better go , darling ,” JJ murmured , “ before my husband comes home and catches us . “

“ If he does , “ Drake grinned cheekily , “ we’ll just make him watch ! “

JJ giggled , following Drake back inside . He handed him his lunch and briefcase , walking him to the door.

“Be safe out there, " JJ urged , “and have a good day .”

Drake smiled . ”I already have .”

It was a beautiful walk to the train station . The sky was blue behind the towers , the crowds thin and not yet surly . The air held the warm promise of summer . Drake managed to find a seat on the first car he entered , only to give it up to a pregnant woman five minutes later . She kissed his cheek when she exited , leaving him blushing and pleased .

“Hey , Drake ! “

Drake turned at the sound of Dee’s voice . His dark haired friend waved to him as he got off the elevator at the Criminal Investigations floor .

“Did you hear ? “ Dee said happily. “ No court today ! Baker gave a full confession last night . “

“ No kidding ?” Drake grinned in relief . He dreaded court days ; they were long and terminally boring , interspersed with periods of migraine inducing testimony . “ Wow ,I didn’t think he’d ever sing . “

He eyed Dee suspiciously . “ Say , you were on late last night , weren’t you ? You didn’t , ah , happen to ‘help’ that confession along , did you ?”

Dee put his hand to his chest , the picture of innocence . “ Who , me ? “ He cocked his head to peer at Drake closely . “ Um , is JJ wearing lipstick these days ? ‘Cos you’ve got some on your face there .” He pointed to Drake’s cheek.

Drake flushed and wiped it away , explaining about the subway and the mother-to-be.

Dee chuckled .” Better not let JJ find out ! “

“That was nothing ,” Drake smiled knowingly , “compared to what I got before I left the house .”

Dee laughed ,and the two engaged in a friendly game of compare the wives . “Sounds like the two of you are doing pretty well , huh ? “ Dee smiled .” Good for you .”

“Yeah ,” Drake sighed contentedly. “ JJ is pretty damn good for me .”

Drake spent a productive morning, engaged in a records search that led to several solid clues in one of the more frustrating cases he and JJ had been working on. On a hunch ,he pulled up vehicle descriptions for the car witnesses had seen leaving the scene of a drive by shooting earlier that week. It seemed a long shot ; how many silver 1998 Ford Taurus two-doors were registered to white males in New York City ?

A surprising few , it turned out . He narrowed the list down to twenty potentials by age of owner alone , then five by description. Matched names to driver’s license records , and bingo . The face of their suspect stared back at him .

After lunch , ( man ,that sliced roast beef JJ had bought was top of the line ! ) , the witness to the drive by not only answered Drake’s call , but agreed to come back to the station without a fuss . A positive ID soon followed . When Ryo arrived for his afternoon shift at 2:45 , he happily agreed to accompany Drake to suspect Reginald Carson’s place of employ . An easy arrest , without a weapon drawn . By three-thirty they were back at the station, and by four o’clock Drake had Carson in interview three , with Ryo watching intently in the video room next door .

All it took was a cup of coffee and some quiet conversation, and Drake had his confession, along with motive and location of the murder weapon.

“ Nice work , Drake ,” the chief smiled as he turned in his paperwork .” Why don’t you take off early ? I’d say you’d earned it . ”

Drake stumbled out of chief Smith’s office , to stare at Ryo’s laughing face . “ Who was that ? ! “ he asked , jerking a thumb over his shoulder towards the door , “ And what has he done with the chief ?! “

Drake decided on walking home as far as possible before taking the trains again . It was still a gorgeous day , only 4:45 and so far he was beating the crowds . Luck was with him , as it strangely had been all day , but he didn’t question his fate .

Theresa called on the subway ride home . Dad’s seventieth birthday was in two weeks , and the party was at her house. Happily, he and JJ were both off that Saturday . He volunteered them to cover the cost of the beer ; Theresa was delighted and told him she’d call later that week with more details .

Han’s fruit market was open as he passed , and had a fresh selection of watermelons on display . Drake eyed the plump green orbs speculatively ; he loved a good melon but stunk at chosing them .

“ You have to thunk it, like this ,” a woman’s voice said . Drake looked up in surprise , it was the same pregnant woman he’d seen on the subway that morning. Odd , with all the strangers you passed every day on the streets of New York ,to see the same person twice in one day was exceedingly rare .

“ I was never any good at this , ” Drake admitted , snapping the side of the fruit with his index finger .

“ But listen , “ the woman smiled enigmatically. “ That’s hollow . You want this -” she thunked another melon , it gave a deep , dense sound . “That’s what you want to hear . Thick . Very tasty .”

He smiled and thanked her , and carried the melon home .

The shower was running when he got in at five o’clock . He set the melon in the sink and washed it off . (Soap and water for all fruits , his mother always said . You don’t know what’s been crawling over it or handling it before it gets to you .) Selecting a knife from the block , he cut deeply into the thick green rind .

The fruit gave way with a crack, red juices running into the sink . The heady scent filled his nostrils . Drake cut a choice piece of dark red fruit and popped it in his mouth .

Ah , orgasmic , he shut his eyes in bliss, savoring the delicious taste . Spitting seeds into the sink, he dug in for another chunk as the shower turned off .

Minutes later , a bemused JJ was staring at him from the kitchen doorway , a towel around his slim hips and water droplets on his bare shoulders .

“ Hi , “ Drake grinned around a mouthful of fruit . His eyes slid slowly up and down his lover’s nearly naked form .

JJ laughed , shaking his head . “ You’re home early .”

Drake nodded . “ Are all your lovers gone by now ? “

JJ waved dismissively .” Oh , I chased them out hours ago . ” He walked over to the sink and peered in . “ What did you bring me ?”

Drake stopped his hand as it went for the knife . “ Ah-ah-ah ,” he shook his head .” This , “ he pointed to the fruit , “ is all mine . “

JJ pouted , and Drake recalled their morning on the patio . His dick , which had begun to firm when JJ walked in wearing only a towel , was now fully erect . “ But if you’re very good ,” he went on huskily , “ I just might share .”

JJ looked up at him through his wet bangs with huge blue eyes , pupils dilated with lust . “ I’ll be good , “ he promised , licking his lips .

Drake cut a piece of fruit and held it out between two fingers . JJ made to take it , but Drake pulled back . JJ frowned , then held Drake’s gaze as fingers , and fruit were slowly pressed against his lips . He opened his mouth and Drake popped the sweet morsel inside . Lips and tongue caressed the digits wetly ; juice ran down JJ’s chin as Drake pulled his fingers free while JJ chewed , and swallowed .

“ What did you do today ? “ Drake asked .

JJ gave him a you-can’t-be-serious look . Here he was , being seduced with fruit , and Drake wanted to make small talk ?

“ I mean , “ Drake amended , “ after I left for work . Did you go back to bed ,and play with yourself ? "

JJ’s blush reddened him from forehead to chest . He licked Drake’s fingers , reaching up to catch his wrist and hold his hand in place .

“ Of course I did ,” he whispered , blushing deeply . “ I got my favorite dildo , and pretended it was you .”

Now it was Drake’s turn to flush . “ C’mere , “ he groaned .

JJ stepped closer , leaning up to kiss him , but was stopped by a hand on his chest . Drake took a smaller piece of melon in his other hand , and with it teased one of JJ's pink nipples to a hard , achy point . JJ gasped and shuddered , screwing his face up as Drake tormented him wetly .

“ Bed , “ he begged , hands gripping Drake’s shirt and trying to haul him backwards toward the hallway . “Bed , bed ,bed …”

“In a minute ,” Drake panted ,almost past the point of no return himself. He pressed the fruit into JJ’s mouth , feeling it in his groin as JJ moaned and sucked his fingers again . He bent to lap the nipple covered with juice , knelt ; let his mouth follow the red trail that ran over JJ’s ribs and flat , trembling belly .

“Please ! “ JJ cried out , grabbing Drake’s hair painfully .

Drake relented . They disengaged , dragging each other to the bedroom. Drake yanked the towel away before pushing JJ onto the mattress and covering his body with his own .

They kissed , deeply ; Drake groaning as he settled between JJ’s wide spread thighs . He knew his lover really got off on being naked underneath him while he was fully dressed . Today , he’d up the ante on this little fetish and see where it took them both .

His sidearm he’d locked in the gun safe as soon as he’d gotten home , but his handcuffs were still on his belt . One handed now he pulled them free , breaking the embrace with JJ long enough to pull his hands upwards, and cuff him to the head board by the wrists .

Drake held his gaze , as one fingertip teased a bare arm . JJ squirmed , his blush deepening . Drake stroked both armpits gently with his thumbs , pressing JJ’s legs wider with his thighs .

“ Now , who was going to hand cuff who ,and spend the day doing wicked things to them , hmm ?” he asked . ” Do you have any idea how horny you made me all day ? " He punctuated his speech with kisses and neck biting, JJ crying out beneath him and writhing between attacks .” I am going to do everything I thought about all day , “ Drake went on , mercilessly rubbing his crotch between JJ’s legs .” I’m going to stick my dick in that sweet mouth of yours ,and then I’m going to stick it up your tight little ass . What do you say to that , Babe ?”

“ I s-say ,” JJ gasped , humping back against Drake , neck stretched taut and arms straining, “ you’d better hurry the hell up ! “

And Drake did . With shaking hands he unzipped his pants and positioned his rigid shaft against those pouty lips . Bent that slim body almost in half to loosen and lube . Braced himself on his hands as he slid home.

“ This what you wanted this morning , Babe ?” he panted ,thrusting .

“ Yes ! “ JJ cried .

“ Tell me . Tell me you love it , baby .”

“ I love it ! AH ! Yes , Drake ; please don't stop ! I love you ! I love you ! “

JJ wailed , and cried , and came , and Drake rode him hard , holding off the sweet release as long as he could , until the tension was too much . “ Love you too , “ he gasped , tensing and flexing as he emptied himself deep in that tight heat . “ Love you, love you , love you… ” He collapsed , spent , in a sated heap.

They lay like that for several minutes until JJ said , in a muffled voice , “ You’re squishing me .”

Drake raised up again and grinned at him , swooping down for another kiss . JJ giggled in his mouth .

“ Hey ! “ Drake protested , “ Guy trying to be romantic here , if you don’t mind .”

JJ giggled again . “ Your hair is tickling my legs . ” He shrieked as Drake rubbed his head against his calf , trying to squirm away . “ Get off ! Get off ! “

“ Already did , “ Drake laughed , and disengaged . He reared back on his haunches and gazed at his lover .“ Now there’s a shot for Beaver Hunt . Where’s our camera ?”

“ Don’t you dare ! “ JJ warned . He pulled at the cuffs as he lowered and crossed his legs clumsily. “ I mean it , Drake Matthew Parker ,” he yelled , as Drake crawled off the bed . “ Let me out of these things ! PUT THAT CAMERA DOWN ! Don’t you dare --DRAKE !! --”

JJ ended up needing another shower , and as Drake did too it was only practical that they took one together . Which led to more activity illegal in nearly all the lower forty-eight , but quite enjoyable by two consenting adults .

The watermelon became dinner , shared naked in bed ( with ample towels to catch the juice ) .

JJ sighed sweetly as Drake fed him the last bite .

“So , what did you do today ?” Drake asked again .

“ Well , “ JJ said , “ I was going to clean , but then Angie called , and said she had to take Katie to the doctor . I guess she fell off the monkey bars at school and banged her head pretty good . ”

“ Geez ,” Drake said , worried . Katie was his eight year old niece . “ Is she okay ?”

“ Oh ,yes ,” JJ smiled up at him . “ Just a goose egg . But Angie needed someone to watch the boys while she took her in for xrays .”

“ Toby and little Petey ?”

“ And Matt and Michael too .”

“ You didn’t ? “ Drake said incredulously . Angie had five kids , and the boys were all under six . One or two were a handful, but --” All four ?! “

JJ laughed softly . “ I am a trained SWAT detective . I think I can manage four preschoolers .”

“ Not those four . Nobody can . Why do you think Pete’s already grey ? Besides , nothing's broken here . What did you do , give them all benadryl and put them down for naps ? “

JJ giggled , smacking him on the shoulder playfully . “ Oh , come on! What do you think I did ? I took them to the park. We built sandcastles and played tag and I pushed them on the swings for two hours . It was better than going to the gym .”

Drake chuckled and kissed the top of his lover’s head . ” Better you than me , Babe . I’d say Angie owes you one now . “

“ Oh pooh . I loved it . “ He was quiet , and Drake knew what he was thinking . He hugged JJ tightly , and JJ sighed and simply clung back , a long, long time .

“ I’ve been thinking , “ JJ said at last , his voice soft . “ If this whole adoption thing isn’t going to work out , maybe … Maybe it won’t be so bad . I mean , we have so many nieces and nephews already . Maybe … we were meant to be Uncles , not parents .”

Drake was quiet too , digesting JJ’s words . They’d had a baby , nearly , but at birth the teenage mother had had a change of heart , and decided to keep the little girl . The long wait through the pregnancy , and then the crushing disappointment had nearly destroyed JJ . Drake had been devastated too , but had recovered faster than his sensitive lover .

Maybe because I do come from such a big family already , he thought , and JJ’s is so small . And he has this need to make up for his own , emotionless childhood too .

“We can still try , JJ , “ Drake went on . “ The agency still has our names . It could happen for us again .”

“ I don’t think I could go through all that again , sweetie ,” JJ admitted sadly. “ Unless it’s important for you that we have a child of our own ?”

“What’s important to me , ” Drake said , pulling back to look JJ in the eye , “ is that we’re both happy . That we have a lot more days like this . And if playing in the park with the rug rats can make you feel that way , I’ll be happy too .”

JJ kissed him , smiling bittersweetly . “ I’m glad , sweetie . I needed them today ,as much as Angie needed me . I think she knew that , too .” He brightened a bit . “ You know what ? This was a really good day . The best I’ve had in a long ,long time .” I think … I know, I can live with that .”

“ Me too , Babe ,” Drake hugged him .” Me too…”

Far above in heaven , the two little angels smiled down at the earth below .

" We do good work , " sighed the first contentedly .

" Oh yes ," said the second ." I must say , giving them both a good day was a stroke of genius . "

" I'm glad I thought of it , " agreed the first .

" Hmm , " said the second , arching an eyebrow . " Got any more miracles under your halo ? Solve the middle east peace crisis ? End world hunger ? Make Dee and Berkeley best friends ? "

" Well , " grinned the first , " there's always tomorrow....! "


Thank you to all of you who read this after I very hastily typed and submitted it before work today . I have since gone through and fixed the typos and added the ending . One day I will learn to type and not have all this grief ...


It took me a long time to think of a proper scenario for the cause of JJ's depression . I know families where adoptions did not work out , and though there have been some beautiful stories where Drake and JJ become parents , in my storyline they do not experience this joy. Life doesn't always have happy endings , even after a really good day .

Of course , Drake and JJ aren't mine either . Sanami Matoh is their real parent !


Blessed be you ,

Moon

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