Third Night

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Third Night

“Damn it…”

Gojyo rolled over, flipped, turned, and changed position, but he just wasn’t able to fall asleep on the cold, hard forest floor. He growled and got up to have a smoke. So as to make sure that he didn’t wake his friends, he walked away from their “camp” and out to the sparkling, freshwater stream that was nearby. He leaned back against an unusually large tree and he took out his cigarette’s and he put on in his mouth. As he reached into his other pocket for his lighter he noted his own frustration with the situation he and his friends happened to be in.

“Three straight nights camping out in the damn forest,” he thought to himself, “can’t believe that bastard went and got us all lost in the middle of freakin’ nowhere…”

He flicked his lighter only to find that it didn’t work. He tried it again. It didn’t work. He tried it two, three, four or more times again and it still didn’t’ work. “This is such bullshit…” he mumbled as he tossed the useless lighter into the stream. He sighed heavily and then raised his eyebrow at the light chuckle that he heard coming from behind him.

“Need a light, friend?” Hakkai spoke softly.

“Yea, sure seems that way doesn’t it.”

Hakkai flicked his lighter and held it up to Gojyo’s cigarette to light it. Gojyo cupped his hand around Hakkai’s to make sure the cool breeze didn’t catch the flame.

“Did you have trouble sleeping Gojyo?”

“Thanks to you and your uncanny sense of direction, I haven’t been able to sleep for three damn days now. I’ll never be able to sleep on that cold ground.”

“Heh, heh, yea, sorry about that.”

“Yea, well sorry isn’t gonna get me laid tonight”

“Ooh, is that why you’ve been so crabby the last few days”

“Of course it is! You’re the closest thing I’ve seen to a woman in four days, now.”

“Easy there Gojyo,” Hakkai chuckled lightly again, “I don’t want you going and getting any strange ideas there.”

“You’re the one getting strange ideas,” Gojyo growled, “Besides, you’re not my type of guy anyway.”

Both men laughed at the weird turn that their short conversation had taken so quickly. Gojyo slid down to sit on the ground while still leaning against that large tree. Hakkai walked around the tree and sat on the other side of Gojyo. He took in a long, deep breath of the cool night air. He closed his eyes and rested his head against the cold bark on the tree. He could feel the cold breeze brushing against his skin. He slowly opened his eyes and looked at the night sky. The moon seemed unnaturally bright. Not bigger or a different color, just really, really bright.

“It’s beautiful tonight.”

When he heard the words, Hakkai had to look at Gojyo to make sure that he hadn’t spoken them himself. Gojyo had spoken the same exact words Hakkai was thinking and at the same exact moment he had been thinking them. Those words were the only thing that filled his mouth, now that the cigarette was gone. Hakkai just smiled and looked back up at the night sky.

“Yes. It is beautiful.”

For a long time they both just sat there in the quiet of the night, hearing nothing other than the trickling of the freshwater stream that ran beside them. They breathed in the crisp air and felt the cold night breeze and looked up at the sky. They sat there quietly until Hakkai broke the silence.

“Hey, Gojyo.”

“Hm?”

Hakkai didn’t say anything in response so Gojyo turned to look at him. He wasn’t startled, but he wasn’t expecting Hakkai to be looking at him as if waiting for something. It wasn’t that strange, but Gojyo thought he should still try to find out what was up.

“Um…Do you want something, Hakkai.”

Hakkai locked his eyes with Gojyo’s and kept the gaze for a few moments. Gojyo didn’t react. Before either of them really acknowledged it Hakkai had moved his face closer to Gojyo’s until they were only about six inches apart; not that they were that far apart in the first place. They stayed in that for only a few moments before Gojyo leaned in even closer to Hakkai. When neither of them saw any sense of objection from the other, they both leaned into each other, eyes still locked, and they met each others lips in a soft, gentle kiss. The kiss was brief and pretty much uneventful and they slowly pulled away from each other. Still, they had not broken the gaze between them.

Neither of them seemed to have any confusion about what had just occurred, even though it had never happened between them before. With still no objection from the other person they both decided that they would finish what they had started. They came together again in a still gentle, but much more strong and passionate kiss. Their eyes were closed, their gaze was broken and they were becoming lost in passion and heat. Gojyo pressed Hakkai back against the tree and leaned over him as they deepened their kiss. Hakkai let out a soft moan and parted his lips. Gojyo took that as his cue and he dove his tongue into Hakkai’s mouth causing Hakkai to let out another soft moan. Gojyo reached his hand behind Hakkai and pulled their bodies closer together. As their tongues intertwined, Hakkai pressed his own body closer to Gojyo. Gojyo pulled on the strings that held Hakkai’s shirt closed, and he pushed the garment back off of Hakkai’s body until it left his chest, back, shoulders, arms, and stomach completely unveiled. Hakkai then pushed Gojyo’s shirt off, leaving his skin bare as well. Gojyo reach up and gently dragged his nails across Hakkai’s chest. At this sensation, Hakkai pulled away from the kiss and allowed a deep moan to escape from his throat. The sound sent a surge through Gojyo’s groin and he dropped his head down and began nipping at Hakkai’s neck. Hakkai let out small quiet whimpers as Gojyo left a trail of feather light kissed down his neck and across his chest.

Both of their breaths began to quicken and both of their groins began to tighten. Hakkai lifted up Gojyo’s chin from his own chest and he leaned down and started to suckle one of Gojyo’s nipples. Gojyo leaned back again and rested back against the tree. Hakkai continued to suckle Gojyo’s left nipple while using his fingers to play with the right. Gojyo was moaning from deep in his chest with the pleasure of Hakkai’s actions on his body. Hakkai trailed down Gojyo’s stomach with kisses and ran his tongue around his navel while undoing his belt. He unzipped Gojyo’s pants and pulled them down just enough completely expose his throbbing member. Gojyo gasped when he felt the cold air hit his flesh and the he deeply moaned when his length was engulfed with heat. Hakkai held Gojyo’s organ in his mouth for a few moments, swirling his tongue around the head and nipping at the base, before he pulled up all the way to the end and pushed back down until the head hit the back of his throat.

“Ooh….Mmm….yea…..that’s it, Hakkai.”

Gojyo, continued speaking in broken sentences and the sexiness of his voice elicited a deep growl from Hakkai’s throat, which vibrated around Gojyo’s cock and caused him to growl deeply in return. Hakkai quickened his pace as he moved his head up and down and Gojyo’s moans began to grow louder.

Gojyo felt himself growing closer and closer to release so the grabbed Hakkai by his hair and lifted his head up and pushed into a kiss, much more forceful than the previous two. While engaged in the kiss Gojyo simultaneously pushed Hakkai to the ground and pulled his pants completely off. He reached down and gripped Hakkai’s cock causing the man below him to moan deeply and dig his nails into Gojyo’s arms.

Gojyo then pulled away from the kiss and let go of Hakkai’s starving flesh. Hakkai half opened his eyes and looked up at Gojyo.

“Damn,” Gojyo thought, “I never realized how freakin’ sexy Hakkai was…”

He reached his hand up and put three of his fingers into Hakkai’s mouth. Hakkai held onto Gojyo’s wrist as he willingly licked the fingers until they were well lubricated. Once the fingers were “ready to use” he pulled them away from Hakkai’s mouth and reach them under Hakkai’s ass and prodded at his entrance. Hakkai slightly lifted his hips to welcome Gojyo’s fingers. Gojyo pushed two fingers into Hakkai, all the way all the way up to the knuckle.

“Nnng….aah….”

Gojyo could see slight discomfort on Hakkai’s face.

“Hakkai, are you alright?”

“Yes, Gojyo, I’m fine. Continue.”

Even in this situation Hakkai still spoke softly and articulately.

Gojyo sissored his fingers inside of Hakkai and he could see Hakkai’s expression soften. He inserted the third finger and Hakkai moaned. He could tell though that it was a moan of pleasure, not discomfort. He moved his fingers up and down, in and out, and in circles, all the while pulling moans and whimpers from Hakkai’s throat. He pulled his fingers out and leaned in closer to Hakkai. Hakkai spread his legs open to let Gojyo enter easier. Gojyo pressed his length up to Hakkai’s entrance and leaned down to kiss him.

“Hakkai, are you ready.”

“Yes….Gojyo, do it….quickly….”

“Wow,” Gojyo was surprised to hear Hakkai’s language so broken.

Gojyo complied with Hakkai’s wishes and he slowly pushed his entire shaft into Hakkai’s ass. He stayed there to give time for Hakkai to get used to the feeling. Both of their breathing became eratic and they seemed to be losing their senses.

“Hakkai….you’re much tighter than any woman.”

“Oh….really….I…..” His voice trailed off. He was engulfed by the pleasure.

“Are you alright? Hakkai?”

Hakkai’s only response was bucking his hips up to let Gojyo know that he needed to move. Gojyo chuckled and he slowly pulled all the way out of Hakkai before slowly pushing back all the way in. The at the same pace he pulled out and pushed back in again. He continued at this rhythm for a while. For Hakkai it was like torture, but he got a sort of sick pleasure from it so he let Gojyo go on. Soon Gojyo quickened his pace and his thrusts moved without pulling all the way out. He then thrusted in hard, all the way and he hit Hakkai’s prostate, causing him to scream.

“Ooh….Gojyo! Again! Hit it again!”

“Nnn….Uhh…..oh…Mmm….aah”

Gojyo grunted and moaned as he thrust in and out of Hakkai.
He started to hit that spot over and over again eliciting repetitive screams from his partners throat. Their breaths had become shallow and they became unable to speak. Gojyo felt himself coming closer to the edge and he started pumping Hakkai’s cock in time with his thrusts.

“Aaah…..oooohh……yea…..Nng…..Mmm……” Hakkai was losing his mind and he felt himself coming closer and closer to a climax.

Gojyo began thrusting and pumping faster and faster. He came up to such a pace that Hakkai could no longer handle it.

“Oooh! Gojyo! OOOHHHH!”

Hakkai screamed and howled as he came hard; he felt the orgasm through his entire body and he saw white. Gojyo could feel Hakkai’s inner walls tightly clenching his flesh and it sent him over the edge as his climax ran all through him. He growled as he came and he fell on top of Hakkai’s chest, both of them breathing heavily as if they had been running for hours. Gojyo waited until he softened a bit before pulling out of Hakkai, bringing a low moan from both of them. Gojyo, lacking the strength to even roll himself over stayed there lying on top of Hakkai.

“That was pretty good,” Gojyo said, exhausted.

“Yes, it was,” Hakkai smiled, “but, don’t fall asleep here. We wouldn’t want Sanzo or Goku to find us lying here like this.”

“Right. That’s the last thing we need.”

“Heh, heh….Well, are you still mad at me?” Hakkai chuckled. “Gojyo?”

His response was a quiet rumble coming from Gojyo, also known as a snore.

“Well, would you look at that.”

Hakkai laughed quietly and closed his eyes, but didn’t go to sleep; he had to make sure to wake up Gojyo before the sunrise woke Sanzo or Goku.


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