Moxibustion Revenge | By : Origami Category: +M to R > Ranma ½ Views: 13465 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Moxibustion Revenge
What would happen if Moxibustion Violation had an ending, where Ranma had a chance to solve their problems.
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When i first read "Moxibustion Violation" i really, really felt sick. I always liked rape-fics..... the one with the girl that becomes a total slut in the end and starts to love what happens to her. I guess it comes with my personality, i am not a domineering person with girls, nor i like to have other people suffer because of me. Now, the 1st episode of MB just felt terrible: Akane was raped in the real sense of the word. No pleasure, no happy ending, only suffering. I really felt like shit after reading that, so much so that at the time i jumped immeditaley to the last episode back then (i seem to remember it was n.24) and while seeing her on the path of the happy slut was somehow reassuring i still felt bad. The overall theme of the fic is not in Ranma and Akane being happy about being abused, but in them becoming forced sex toys for a group of psychos.
So, there came the idea for this story.... almost 2 hours of hard work (english is not my mother language, even though i am usually reassured that it is hard to tell only by reading what i write. Hope it is true, i always hate fics badly written and with too many grammar errors.
Anyway, i was saying.... this fic. A typical comeuppance arc, where good triumphs, evil suffer, everyone ends up happy. I tried to make it as realistic as i could, but it was hard, especially the part with Akane.... in hindsight she really is too much self-loathing which strides with the more active role she has in the original story, but i still i wanted to portray her like this. After all, the real tragedy of MB - for me - is the desperate situation in which Akane is falling, a hole without exit; Ranma has always been more tough, so he was not a concern for me: the second he saw how to "defeat his enemies" i knew he would just roll over. Akane, fiery once and a total slut in the fic, was the real problem to write. Anyway, enjoy. If you want to review, please do so - i am more than interested in other people's opinion on both my work and my point of view on the fics (mine and original) overall themes.
PS: now edited for a more comfortable reading :) after a hint from Anon; by the way, thanks for the tip: i deleted your review only because your example messed up the review page too. You are more than welcome to leave another one.
Edited again on 23/8/18, because i can and because reading it now all the grammar mistakes appears obvious. Ouch.
PPS: one review asked what happened of the doctor. Well, he is dead too: i did wrote a one word reference to some medic Akane spoke about to Ranma, to show he is aware of them. As there would be no way for Hikaru would know about them, i could not add them to the ending; yet they are obviously dead. Maybe i could add a small post-chapter showing exactly HOW Ranma dealt with them.... but i probably wont, i like the fic as it is. Just know he did, and in a gruesome way^^
PPPS: some reviewers complains about the fact that i am using another guy fic, ecc ecc so here is a little disclaimer: of course i warned hsaotome of this story (by email, he never answered so i guess he does not mind) and no, i don't feel guilty in exploiting his story or creating my own ending for it. I am not a serious writer, this was my very 1st and probably last fic and its overall goal was to give an happier ending to what i find is a exceptionally depressing (although well written) story. No ill intents on my side, guys.
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Post ep.29
Ranma laid back in his bed.... *his* bed? Not anymore, not after that last stunt of Ryoga. Without the dragon whisker he was now a full-time girl, and Ranma knew very well what that would soon mean. "Things are just gonna get worst. The rapes, the humiliations, everything. Damn it, damn it, damn it! I swear they will all pay, i swear it! Once that bastard Ryoga give me the moxibustion chart i will.... will he?" This was not the first time his ranting stopped at that point: would Ryoga really give the chart back? He said so, he seemed even honest, somehow.... so what? Did he not look sane before all this madness started? Could Ranma really take the risk? "It is not like i have any other option. What else could i do? Fight him? Call the police? Without my strenght i can not defeat him, and calling anyone else would destroy both mine's and Akane's life. All we endured until now would become useless! I can not do that. I really have no choice...."
Again, this was a typical night for Ranma, lately... depression and humiliation. The worst part was how normal it was all becoming, how having he and Akane being raped was common to the point they barely payed notice of it anymore; they were even starting to enjoy it, on a physical level at least. What would be of them, after all this ordeal? Would they ever be normal again, just a happy couple? Ranma seriously doubted that, as their relationship with the other sex and sex in general was now totally messed up. He knew he had to stop this madness as soon as possible, but he could not: he felt totally powerless. "I can't believe people could do something so horrible. Ryoga, Happosai, Michio and Raiden, all those Furinkan bastards; how can they? How, damn it?!" He hated all this, he hated how powerless he was and felt: before all this the closest he ever came to this feeling was when being near cats, or when he was blackmailed by Nabiki. "Nabiki... no, no use there". Like all other options she, too, has been considered by the pigtailed boy, to no use. Calling her would not give him much of an edge, with her being overseas and all, and would still expose his and Akane's shame to their family, even if she managed not to make it public. "Beside, what could she tell me? To cut my losses and call the police? Or to force Ryoga in giving me the chart? Yeah, big chances of that happening". That was another option Ranma already considered: blackmailing Ryoga wold be a dream came true for him, but he had literally nothing left to bargain with. Even the secret for reducing the curse to a nuisance triggered only by ice cold water had been useless, Ryoga did not fell for that, and he had nothing else of value. No, blackmailing was not an option. Forcing him? Without strenght it was impossible: he had already thought of several ways he could defeat Ryoga, but in none of them he figured himself obtaining the chart. "Defeating Ryoga in itself would even be easy... fuck martial art's honor, see where it brought me. My shiatsu attacks, poison or chloroform.... if i could strike first i would win, and attacking him while we are having sex would be easy. But then? The instant he gains concsciousness he would destroy me, and probably the chart and the whisker as well. I can't risk that". The idea of just turning him into a pig and feeding him to a dog was pleasant, but it would be useless in the long run... was it? "Would it really be that useless? Even under pig form i could understand what he would be saying, be it with pieces of paper with kanji on them, or just saying syllables and having him to grunt until coherent phrases are said. No, no, it would never work.... that bastard is too tough and crazy, even as a pig. He would easily suffer through whatever i could do to him with my strenght, and everything else i did would just kill him. I have no way to really harm him to the point he would give up".
That was true: Ranma has never been an expert in harming other people. Beating them up, yes: he was a master at that. Taunting them, sure: even too easy. Making them suffer? He had no idea. The closest he ever experienced about torture was the cat fu traning but, let aside the pratical problems of digging an hole and recovering dozens of cats in his weakened condition, throwing a piglet in a hole full of starving cat would just kill Ryoga. Again, pleasant but useless. "Damn it, damn it! If only those cursed amazons were still here, Cologne would have helped me. Maybe even without telling her what's going on, just promising something to her in exchange for a truth serum or something similar. We already had deals, and she keeps them, like with the phoenix.... YES!"
The phoenix pill! The cat's tongue! That had been horrible, painfull over any measure, and he knew how to apply the effect! He knew the location of the point, and with his shiatsu training he could administer it. Freezing Ryoga with a shiatsu attack, giving him the cat's tougue, turning him into P-chan and splashing him with hot water until he relented out of pain. "It could work.... damn, it would work! There is no training that allow you to endure that kind of pain for.... well, for how much i would have to! And it would not harm his body, it would not kill him, it is a mind pain! Ryoga...."
Coudl it work? Would it work? Thinking about it was easy, but actually doing it? A mistake would be the end of everything, his whole lifetime spent as everyone else's bitch. Akane, too. No, Akane had to be saved NOW. She was becoming borderline crazy, a perfect example of Stockolm's syndrome. He had the plan, maybe not perfect but a plan that could work.... he could get his revenge, get back his strenght. The other bastards? Those Furinkan students, and Hikaru? Those accursed teachers and medics Akane spoke him of? "They will all get what they deserve..... i am not yet defeated. I have to do it. I can not just let this end like this, even if Ryoga DID keep his promise or even if i had to find him later, i would always remember how in the end i gave up, and Akane would always remember what she did with no closure. I have to end this on our terms.... Ryoga, next time we see i will really turn your life to hell. This time, this time, there will be no mercy from me. You will pay...! Everyone will".
Oh, it was a happy day if you were Ryoga... or his evil alter-ego, at least. His life long dream of revenge reached, Akane and Ranma at his feets - no, make it at his cock, but that was even better. Ryoga planned on enjoying it as long as it lasted. It would have been nice to just screw them both senseless for however he liked and eventually disappear, but Ryoga knew better: if the really did that Ranma would have no choice but to follow him to the end of the earth, trying to kill him. With the chart back in his hands instead.... oh, he would surely try to find him and get revenge but sooner or later he would give up and just go back to that whore Akane. "That's the difference between us, Ranma: i am smart and you are an idiot. And now, my bitch. You will keep entertaining me because i want you to, giving me thanks for the privilege. In girl's clothes from now on... eh, it really suits you". The door of the Tendo household in front of him, Ryoga felt his usual surge of excitement while knocking: this would be another great day for him. Nor that he could truly show it to anyone else but his pets, unfortunately.
"Hello Kasumi.... Good morning to you. Is Ranma awake? I would like to speak to him."
"Hello Ryoga; good morning. Yes, Ranma is in his room, please come inside."
"Thanks, Kasumi. I promise i will. See you later"
Walking onward, Ryoga felt himself getting aroused. While he already fucked both Ranma and Akane several times, the idea of seeing his enemy dressed like a girl excited him. Ranma truly really in his power now, could not even turn back man if he wanted to.... he was his toy, his sex doll. His...
"Oh, i see someone here does not respect deals, Ranma. What are you doing dressed like that?"
"What do you want, Ryoga? I have not forgotten our deal, but i still have to dress myself for the day. Go bother someone else".
"Mmmh, i could go bother Akane if you really want me to. But this is not the time... it's not HER special day, right? Even if her talents too are enhanced by girlish clothes... or lack of".
"I will wear one of Nabiki old uniform today, happy? I am respecting the deal, so fuck off".
"I really don't like your tone, Ranma. Have you not learned your position yet? You are my toy now, and never forget it. If i say jump, you start jumping. Now go take the uniform, i came all the way this soon just to be the first to see you in your new attire. Move, and keep your mouth shut if you dont want me to fill it"
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"Welcome back, slut. Now wear it, and make it sexy".
It was just another day for Ryoga. Ranma started undressing from his standard set of shirt and shorts, with pitiful attempts to look enticing while doing so. The scowl on her face really told the truth of his feelings: that idiot had never been able to fake emotions well. Was he really so pissed off just for an uniform? Maybe he needed a little remainder of who was in charge. Beside, seeing her half naked certainly awakened his "attention".
"Not bad, Ranma, not bad.... you should really consider a lifetime as a girl, and as a stripper... you are full of experience already, aren't you?"
"Why don't you just shut up, Ryoga? I have to dress like this, not to enjoy this".
"If i say so, you will enjoy it, Ranma. You WILL do whatever i order you. I don't care if you are already so much into being a girl full time that you think you can bitch me around, but let me make it clear: you can't. You are only my sex doll".
"Fuck you, you bastard.... i aint nobody's toy".
"Aren't you, now? I dont care if you are pissed off about your situation, 'cause its not my problem. Well, beside when i have to decide which "situation" i want you. That, right now, is on your knees: you really need to be reminded who is in charge. And shutting you up will be a bonus".
"Now? What if anyone enter? Are you crazy?"
"Who, Kasumi or Mr Tendo? They would knock before entering, anyway, and if it is Akane she can just join in the fun. Now start!"
For a second Ranma looked as furious as the first time he had raped him.... yeah, it was totally pissed by the whisker. But finally his face relaxed and with a frozen expression he started to lower his pants. Yep, it suited the bitch to remember her place.
"Slower, Ranma.... blow me slower. I want you to enjoy the taste".
She did.... and with her now considerable talent. This was her life, and if she did not like it, too bad. Grasping her hair with his hands, Ryoga started pumping his cock inside her throat.
"Nice, nice.... you are really talented when you apply yourself. Almost like you slutty little fiancee: you are a great couple, in the end. I admit it. Happy i am finally giving you my blessing?"
More pumping, more pumping..... until he came. First inside Ranma's throath, with some final spurts on her face and her bra-covered tits. Yes, life was good for Ryoga. A couple knocks behind him startled him for a second, but recognizing Akane's voice a grin spread on his face while he turned toward the door. Was it time to double the fun?
"Ranma, are you awake? I'm stepping in.... oh. Ryoga".
"Good morning Akane, And it is a good morning indeed, believe me"
Yes, life was good for him. It was....
It was horrible. So soon in the morning, and already Ryoga was forcing Ranma to suck him off! Why, what did they do to him to justify a behaviour like that? It was inhumane. But, it is not like she was without fault... Akane was more and more bothered but what she had become. She was a slut, all those boys and men were right about her. She did not deny it any longer: even if she had been forced at the start, now she truly enjoy it, more and more every time they used her. She was the lowliest of tramps, good only to be screwed, willing to be used as nothing more than a set of holes. So much that she enjoyed her new understanding with Ranma mostly because it was a dream, so different from her new reality. But, even if she was already lost she still held hope to save Ranma, at least. Give him back his strenght, help him recover, and finally breaking up with him - not that he was aware of that. She considered herself damaged goods now, unworthy to be anyone's fiancee, let alone becoming a wife or a mother. Weird that while she has always been unsure of her femininity while praticising martial arts, she felt so at ease with her female body now and yet totally horrified of it at the same time. She did not waste any more time wondering if she could be a tomboy: she had orgasmed atop cocks too many time to doubt her sexuality any longer Bu,t at the same time, she judged herself unworthy. No, no, this was not the moment for self-commiseration: Ryoga had to be pleased, if Ranma was to be saved. So, on with another day of misery.... and a fake smile on her face.
"I'm stepping in..... oh. Ryoga".
"Good morning Akane, And it is a good morning indeed, believe me".
It was unbelievable..... Ryoga was falling down, face first, on the floor and Ranma behind him had the most vicious expression i have ever saw on her.... his face. Had he gone crazy?
"Ranma, are you mad? Ryoga will be furious for this, he will destroy the chart! Or, at best, he will make us do something even more.... shamefull... than usual. Why, what were you thinking?"
"Why, Akane? Isn't the way you plead for him, like he owns us or something, a good enough answer? This had to be stopped, and i'm planning to do starting now".
"No, no, no... Ranma, this is not the right way! A revenge of one moment will not help us! You need your strenght back, this won't help! It's.... terrible, i know, but you have to wake him up so we can plead forgiveness. Please, Ranma, listen to me....."
"No, Akane. This was not a spur of the moment thing, i was planning all night. It is a gamble, true, but i think we have a chance - don't make that face! I'm willing to try, i'm willing to stop this story at our terms, whithout feeling ourselves helpless when we will think back on these days. The point is, if you want to help me or not...."
"....i think you are making a big mistake, Ranma. I really do. But, but... i will do whatever you want me to".
"Good. I need ice cold water now, please go fetch it to me. And bring me that cage Kasumi used with that cat.... you remember, the one of the neighbours".
"Yes, Ranma.... one second".
Madness... it was madness. All we endured, destroyed in one second. Oh, she loved Ranma but she knew he was not the smartest apple in the box. Cunning, sure, she already saw him getting out on top of many enemies, but devious enough to force Ryoga to give up? What could he do to achieve that, especially without his strenght to back him up? Still, Akane had no chance.... and almost no willpower left to oppose Ranma. She was nothing, she was trash, while he was obviously still trying to win.... she would just endure what fate gave her once he failed. She was an expert at that, unfortunately.
"Here's the water, Ranma... what are you doing now?"
"Turning him into his cursed form: this is the beginning of my plan. And now, listen: you are not going to like this, but it has to be done".
.....P-chan. Ryoga was P-chan. Ryoga was P-chan!!! How.... how.... what the hell?
"He.... he is P-chan? What... how.... Ranma, what...."
"Sorry, but we really have no time for this.... i swear i'll beg for your forgiveness eventually, but now we are in a hurry. The cage?"
Forgiveness for what?.... he knew!! Of course Ranma knew, he asked for the water, he turned Ryoga into a pig because he knew of his curse! Since when did he know about that? Was that the reason why Ranma always hated P-ch... Ryoga in pig form? Tears started to form in her eyes: she could not believe it was possible for her to feel even more self-pity but now even Ranma, the boy he loved, betrayed her. Even when she was still... pure.... even when she still was a virgin Ranma let Ryoga sleep with her! Did he not care? She showed herself naked to Ryoga, she told him all her secrets, she..... she had told him all about their situation. Akane remembere well when "P-chan" had finally come back, a little happy spot in the misery her latest months had become. She remembered what she said, her hate for Ryoga and her desire to deceive him. It was her fault... it was always her fault.... she truly was an useless whore.
"Akane, please, don't cry.... i'm sorry i didn't tell you before, and i swear i'll make it up somehow. But now, now we have to act"
"Don't worry Ranma.... i am not mad at you. I am not mad at anyone.... but myself. Just tell me what to do".
Yes, she would just help him.... maybe she would not mess it all up this time. Maybe. Ranma already had a strange expression on her... no, his face. No need to bother him further. They would go through this last part together.
"Thank you, Akane. Now, we have to calm ourself down, take the bastard to your room and go down to eat breakfast. With this... pig... in the cage and knocked out we are safe. Our only risk is that someone else of the house could free him, especially our fathers: they both know about Ryoga and his curse".
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It had been a strange breakfast. Ranma, though, really behaved like he was into something, like he really believed he could pull this off. Was he really that sure of himself? It was like the old times, but Akane was still not as confident as him. Ryoga was a really tough bastard, he would not give up only because he had beem turned into a pig. He surely understood how, eventually, he would be free; and how we could not really hurt him. Ranma was hopeless... was him? Then why his eyes shined so much, why his voice was so full of confidence? Why she..... no, again! Why did he look just like in the past?
"Welcome back to life, pig boy.... for now. And to your living hell, not the imaginary one that has always been in your head".
"Gweeeeeeeeeeee! Gweeee! Gweeeee!"
"Shut up, pig boy... here, let me just cut this short and show you what his happening. Enjoy this bath".
"GWEEEEEEEH! GWAAAAAAAAAAAR! GWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!"
"What..... Ranma, what is happening to him?"
"Simple, Akane... and you better listen too, pig-boy. Cat's tongue spot, as you know, makes even lukewarm water absolutely unsufferable. And, as you can both see, i have a quite a big thermos in my hands today".
"GWEEEEEEE! GWEEEEEEEE!"
"If i could speak pig language, i would assume it's something along the line of how i will regret this, or some bullshit like that. Well, i'm not gonna regret this, pig-boy... but you will soon regret you were even born. I am all out of mercy today".
"Ranma, please stop this.... this is torture! I.... i won't say he does not deserve it, but actually doing it.... there has to be another way".
"Really? Like what? Sorry Akane, but there is no turning back now. Either he gives us the chart, and my whisker which he stole yesterday, or we are screwed forever. Quite literally. There is NO turning back. He will break".
No, no.... this was terrible. I mean, it felt good on a certain level to see Ryoga suffer, again and again, with Ranma that kept pouring warm water on him.... but it was crazy. This was.... was.... i could not stand that any longer, so i fled the room.
...
"Hello Akane... Akane what's up? You are as pale as a ghost! Do you fell sick?"
"Kasumi.... no, everything is ok, Kasumi, thanks. It is just.... i...."
"Is P-chan ok, Akane? I can hear him scream from here, it's quite strange for such a small piglet".
"P-chan is... P-chan is with Ranma, he is taking care of him. Don't worry Kasumi, i'm sure P-chan will be alright. And i'm ok"
"If you are sure, little sister..."
"I am. I.... i think i'll go out for a while now. Please don't disturb Ranma, ok Kasumi? He really was... nervous today".
"Sure, sister, no problem. Just come back in time for lunch ok? Bye Akane".
And so, i left the house. I started running the second i was out, without pause. I did not know where i was going, i did not know exactly from what i was running from, but i did. It just seemed everything was going worst... was it? I did not know....
I stopped by the bridge, Ranma's favourite spot. Was he still... hurting... Ryoga right now? Was he still angry? Was this worth it?
Worth it? Where did that question came from? I would have never thought that before.... never thought that a chance to finally be free again, together with Ranma and only Ranma, would have given me pause. Was i really so changed, so tainted that i could desire this new life i had to continue? Was i so wretched?
I started thinking on the first day of my nightmare, when they took my virginity away. How much i was crying back then.... it was not the sex, in a way it had been meaningless. Painless too, considering what i endured during training or fights..... what i endured when i was still a martial artist and not a slut, i guess. But, what i can not forget is how i wished for Ranma to save me.... for him to reach me, even at the last second, and protect me, save me. I always thought that my first time would have been special.... not particulary pleasant, i knew better than that, but still wonderfull. Me offering what everyone said is precious to the boy of my choice, so that we could be happy forever. How naive.... i can not believe i was once like that, while now i let all kind of perversion to be done to me, while i..... came Again and again. I should be ashamed....
I should, but i am not. I am a slut, i know that. But Ranma... Ranma still had hope. He still wanted to fight, to save me, even if he is too late. I love him, but he is the naive one now.... is he? I am so.... dirty. But i promised him i will help. And.....
"Hello there, Akane-chan. So nice of you to be here."
Michio, Raiden... and two of the others. Right now... it had to be a sign. But of what?
"Hello guys. I was just going away, so....."
"Not so fast, Akane-chan.... don't forget you are still our toy, even if the boss has changed. Why don't we go in a more private place....?"
That was it.... they were starting to touch me, and i already felt excited. I was so disgusting.... but for once i had a choice. I could stay.... and a big part of me wanted to... or i could go to Ranma. Help him.... change my life around.
"I said i am going away. Ryoga told me to reach him in 5 minutes, and i don't want to be late. Nor would you, should he learn who made me arrive late".
"Fine, fine.... you can go, little slut. But don't forget, your ass is ours to play with. Soon we will meet again".
They let me go, and i went straight home. So, this was it.... it did not have to go like they wanted to. Even if i was a slut, it did not mean i had to give myself to them. Maybe Ranma was right.... maybe we had a chance. And, when i thought about it, when i really imagined it all, i really felt like eating pork ribs today.
And so we were, all gathered in front of a small grave. Akane was crying, but with a strange expression.... actually, no expression at all. Hard to say what she was thinking. Ranma tried to be expressionless too, but he was failing... he never was good at keeping a straight face. Weird enough, he had almost a smirk, like he was.... not happy, but deeply satisfied. I really should scold him later for this, even if he never liked the poor P-chan he should be more considerate of my poor sister's feelings. Oh well, this was not the moment to raise the point. It had been quite a hellish week: P-chan had obviously fallen sick, as he screamed all day and night, keeping everyone wake... not that anyone dared to complain about it. Father and Mr Saotome fled as usual, for a "training trip" they said... well, as long as they do not create problems i guess it is ok, beside i heard Father still attended his sittings at the Nerima council so it is not that big of a deal if he spent some time out of the house. It's strange though how they had quite a long, serious talk with Ranma before leaving, one i could overhear only in part: it was something about Ryoga gone, the sickness of poor P-chan and trusting Ranma with taking care of it all. Maybe Ryoga went outside to look for a cure for P-chan.... altough Akane told me they already asked to a veterinarian about the problem, but nothing came up. What worries me are Akane and Ranma.... they literally spent all time with poor P-chan, sometimes together and sometimes alone, alternating themselves. That nice little pig has never been left by himself, but i guess he could not notice it with how in pain he was.... it had been almost a liberation when he finally died, the poor thing. Ranma tried one last trick to help him just before he died, leaving the house in search for a cure, and when he came back he had such an happy expression on his face that i thought he found something but in the end it was to no avail: poor P-chan died soon after his return.
Well, i guess it is over..... time to get back to my chores. At least i am happy that Akane can be supported by Ranma: they look much more in harmony lately and i guess that, even if it is really selfish to say, P-chan's death should take away an point of friction between them. Only one thing bother me tough, even if it is a bit pointless.... Akane dug the hole but Ranma filled it.... is he really strong enough to do that? Maybe the moxibustion effect on him is weakening, maybe he will soon heal! That would be really wonderfull, and i am sure Akane too would be esthatic. But i will not raise the point for now, i do not want to raise expectations. If it has to be, it will be, kami willing.
"Yes, i understand perfectly, madame.... don't worry, in light of such a tragedy we will do our best to support your son in his transfer".
"Thanks so much, Headmaster. Hikaru was so insistent in his request, i guess he really feel guilty about that.... not that he had any reason, of course."
"Of course, madame.... the police was very clear in their reconstruction of the tragedy: only an unfortunate accident fueled by alcohol. No one blames Hikaru, as it should, and the school never doubted of his innocence. Now, if you would excuse me.... and please send my regards to your son and to your Husband. Farewell".
"I will. Good day, headmaster".
It was another sunny day in Nerima.... and people already started to forget the "horrible tragedy" that happened 6 months ago. They certainly did, but not me. I guess i should not complain since i am still alive unlike those other idiots. Not that i was any better: really, how long did we think this story could go on, especially with someone as dangerous as Ranma involved? Were we even thinking in the first place, or were we blinded by lust?
I can easily remember that night of 6 months ago.... a normal night for me, in the beginning. The previous week had been unusual in that i did not have sex with Akane once, nor did anyone else. A couple of the boldest one among us even called the Tendo household, to order Akane to reach us, but she was always unavailable. "Caring for her sick pet", apparently, according to Akane's older sister. Quite weird, but not enough to raise alarm among us...... had we know what was coming we would have fled the country, of course, but we did not know. We slept.... only to find ourselves in what looked like an abandoned house. The place looked weird though: bottles were everywhere, even a stereo on one side. We were all gagged and tied up, with 2 peoples in front of us Two faces we all instantly recognized, with a bit of trepidation.
"So, everyone's here.... how nice of you to be present. Not that i am surprised: this is gonna be the most important day of your life. The celebration of the comeback of our strenght!"
"It certainly will be a memorable night..... it certainly will be. It took some time, i even lost hope at one point.... but time's up. Payback is a bitch and all that... the point is, tonight you will die. We don't need to drag the situation, i only want this to be over. With you, dead."
"Well said, Akane, well said.... but first, i guess we have to entertain our guest of honour.... Raiden, Michio, could you... please, don't make that face. In fact, you will soon find yourself in a familiar, comfortable situation".
"Indeed. Here, let me help".
And, at that point, Akane started unzipping Raiden pants, and to move his underwear out of the way to his dick. Some crazy idea started to jump around in my mind, taken straight from porn games: maybe Ranma and Akane liked what we did to them so much they now wanted it to continue. Or maybe they wanted to switch the situation, with them as masters and us all as their slaves, their little sick harem. For a second, i thought i could live with that. I was probably not the only one to think so.... Raiden even got hard, and Akane grabbed his dick with a creepy smile. Then Ranma started talking, and the truth crashed hard on us.
"How nice of you Raiden to help us... yes, you got it right. I'm happy to see your dick so big and large in Akane's hand. It will give her a better grip" and while he was saying that, Akane took from his hand a small saw, and started to..... she started to cut Raiden penis. It was.... brutal. And bloody.
"MMMMMHHHHHHHRRRGRGRGRHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Please don't speak with your mouth full, Raiden-kun, it's not polite".
"Eheh.... nice one, dear".
It took quite a long time... Akane seemed to enjoy it, while Michio next to them was as pale as a sheet; and with a suspicious stain on his pants. Ranma looked at him, with a definitely unpleased expression.
"Well, i certainly did not expect that.... i wanted to be the one to cut yours, but i'm not gonna touch it now. Guess i'll have to find something else to do...."
Saying that, Ranma took Raiden's severed dick; with his free hand he punched Michio in the belly after raising his gag: immediately then pushing Raiden's dick inside Michio's open mouth. Michio tried to resist but Ranma gave him another punch, and while he was gasping for air he just repositioned his gag.
"Well, that's it.... as i already said, we don't want to drag our revenge. You are all monsters, so i don't feel particulary bad in doing this to you, but i don't want to enjoy it either. I already saw what happen when you let yourself go with bad actions - they change you".
"I agree.... let's speed this up" and with that they started opening the bottles: hard to read their names from the distance, but they were oibviously alcoholic beverages. They both started spilling it all over the guys.... all of them but me. Over them, over the wooden walls of the house, everywhere. After that, Ranma took me under his arm and drag me out of the house, Akane right after him. And, suddenly, my gag was taken off. I was completely terrorized: these were not the sluts i screwed time and time again, these were the Akane and Ranma of old: stronger than me.
"What... are you gonna do to me?"
"The honest answer? I would like to bring you back in the house and kill you with the others".
"I won't, though. Hikaru.... i had time to think this over. You are scum, almost like the others. You have been forced to join them, you never truly abused your position.... but you still raped me. Don't even try to deny it: you could have refused. You could and you didn't, and for this i accuse you. Still i recognize the difference.... and i want to have mercy at least of someone, to start anew with my life".
With that, Akane left. No more words, and no stares lost on me, but she kissed Ranma on the cheek before leaving. It was the two of us now.
"I really, really want to kill you, even more than the other. Not for what you did to our bodies, Akane is right in judging you slightly better than them. Not that it's hard to be. The reason is, you remember me of Akane's madness. She was this close to just accept herself as a toy for your little group of sickos, and most of the fault is yours. Not them, who treated her like shit, but you who tried to rationalize what was happening to her, telling her it was normal, encouraging her to get more and more lost in this madness".
"I..."
"Shut up! You don't get to speak now. You'll live...... i'm gonna make you suffer, a lot, enough to make sure your face will not be around when me and Akane are back to school. And, by the way, you WILL ask to switch institute once you recovered. But you'll live.... the others will burn alive, and i hope they suffer as long as possible. When the police and the firemen will arrive you will tell there was a party here, everyone got drunk, you barely get out of there in time. Or whatever you think they'll believe in, i don't care. Just remember this, for are the last things i'll say to you: never cross our road again. Never even dare to look at Akane again. And if any part of this story ever gets out, you better suicide before i put my hands on you. Got it?"
".....yes".
"Fine. Now drink this whole bottle, put your gag back on and prepare".
And after that, he started. He did not really punch or kick me..... i guess he did not want to leave traces for the police. He must have used some weird chi attack, i guess, his hands were glowing. And he was pressing some points on my body. Bottom line, i was suffering - hard. Rolling on the floor, screaming in my gag, i even tried to stop him - eh, he knocked my attempts away without trouble. I don't know how long it went on.... not a short time i'm sure, because i can at least remember how sore my throat was from all the muffled screams. In the end he gave me a strike on the back of the head and everything went black.
When i woke up, i was inside an hospital. According to my parents the police found me on the edge of a burning house, with a half-carbonized log near me. They all thought it was the cause of some of my scratches, and of the crack on my skull. Still, i was alive: policemen questioned me a couple times, and i played it safe saying the less i could. That i just heard of the party from Takeo, that yes, i knew and occasionally met with the others but we were not friends, that everyone drank a lot me included, that i run when i woken up and saw flames on the walls and that i did not know how the fire started. So, the day passed.... some classmates come to visit me, and to tell me the news: how everyone was shocked by the disaster, how Ranma and Akane seemed to go along splendidly now, how a professor in Furinkan crashed with his car while going back home.... yes, that professor. I guess Ranma was serious in dealing with his and Akane's unfinished businesses. I decided to stay as far away from them as possible, and not only for fear.
It took barely 1 month for me to heal, and 5 more to deal with my conscience: the second Michio's dick got severed was the second i realized what we all had done. It was not a game, not a fantasy: Akane, the girl i once loved, had been almost destroyed by us. We were.... monsters. And she got her revenge on us. Ranma i did not really care, but Akane.... i really felt horrible for what i did to her. When i first came back home, and saw the pendrive with the last set of the photographs on my desk, i started puking... but the worst part is, a part of me wanted to keep them. In the end i erased them anyway, mostly because if they were found everything would go to hell. Me included, and i mean literally. I asked my mom to petition for a switch in schools, i started to deal with my conscience.... and i think i will need a long time before i will fell good with myself, enough to look in a mirror. If it ever happen again. But i live. This was a crazy ride, but i live. Hope i will not regret it.
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