What could\'ve been | By : Will Category: -Misc Anime > Het - Male/Female Views: 11652 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: This is a re-write to the Hentai Otomedori. I do not own any rights to this Hentai. And I do not make money or profit out of this. |
What could've been
An Otomedori re-write.
My name is Kazuki. Back when I was a kid, my sister Rinka and I came across a girl crying on the park fountain. I asked her why she was crying. She said that because she moved here, she can't be with her friends anymore. So I offered to be friends with her. Her name is Otome. As the years went by, we went to the beach, played in the snow, and we made a video on Otome's graduation. We were sitting at the front yard at school. I was still unsure about my future. Then Rinka reminded me of years ago when I decided to marry Otome. Bashful, Otome offered that we go to the same school. Rinka was playing around about it. But I made it clear at that time. As I was explaining things, my words stopped there.
As we were walking to school (we were running late by the way), the 2 of us can't help but think about what would happen if we did become a couple. Yet my idiot sister won't shut up about it. School ended a while later, the girls left without me. As I was walking there scalking, I saw Otome with some dirty old man. They were walking away with his hand on her boob. I was about to confront Otome, but Rinka tackled me from out of no where. It would've been my imagination, but then there's a DVD mailed to me. I popped it in my Computer, and it's a high school girl with some naked old men. They are stripping her. And the girl was talking about a promise.
But after the few minutes when the camera zoomed out, I almost had a heart attack when I saw who the girl was. It was Otome. They were tongue-kissing her, tearing her clothes off, and they pulled out the sex-toys. Otome begged to leave her virginity alone, but the old men were Very unreasonable. It was too much for her at first. The old men took turns fucking Otome. She begged them not to cum inside her, but they did it anyway. It felt unreal for Otome. She believed that she was in some sort of nightmare. Despite the way I felt, I couldn't help but masturbate at the scene.
The next morning, I was already awake. Otome came by like always. But I couldn't see her the way I used to anymore. I broke into tears. And Otome looks like she's scene better days. It looked like she didn't get any sleep. Another DVD was mailed to me the very next week. There's Otome wearing Gym clothes with those same old guys from before. They were going on about how cute she looked. They're playing "Family Time" with one guy acting as the Father, and another guy as the Older Brother and so on with Otome being the Younger Sister. The old men went ahead with the orgy, blowjobs and fucking, and all that. And slowly but surely, Otome is giving in to the insanity. All 3 of them fucked Otome hard and came inside her. Then finally, all 3 of them went for all of Otome's holes and they're not giving her a chance to rest. As the orgy ended with even more ejaculations inside Otome, her mind went blank as it finally ended.
The next day, I came back home. Otome welcomes me home. It no longer feels good when I hear her voice. She says that Rinka asked Otome for a favor later so she offered me something to eat. But I just walked passed her while feeling miserable. Otome probably noticed how I felt when she dropped the chap-sticks in shock. Later that day, Otome is masturbating from all the sex she's been getting. She's worried about her life. Another DVD is mailed to me, it's Volume 10 of the series. As the DVD's went by, Otome was no longer the same Otome that I fell in love with. There she was again with those same guys. And she finally gave in to the insanity. I bit my lip with blood coming out as I got off on that nightmare. Then it turns out that they knew that Otome and I were together at the time. So they asked her if I'm still important to her. She said, with a crazy look, that she doesn't care about me anymore. I couldn't take it anymore. So I threw a Nintendo GameCube at the Computer monitor. Out of tearful desperation, I ran out of the house asking why. I took care of her when she had nobody in the world. It was all messed up. At the same time, Rinka is at a diner with one of those guys from the DVD. Then to my surprise, I spotted Rinka walk into the men's room with that same old guy that walked off with Otome. It turns out that she's giving herself to that guy. More headaches hit my head. As they were fucking each other, I was even more shocked when I found out that it was Rinka that plotted the whole thing.
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I can't take it anymore! Something must be done! As I frantically ran out of the park, I just remembered that I still got those DVD's. But even with those, there's no way to fix things. So I went to see Hideki, an old acquaintance. I explained everything to him.
Hideki: You mean to say that your Sister caused all this insanity?
Kazuki: Yeah. Which is why I'm asking for that Bomb Vest.
The Bomb Vest has 20 blocks of round mini-bombs wired to it. And the trigger can only be set off by the wearer of the vest.
Kazuki: I tried to explain things to Mom. But Rinka barged in and convinced her that nothing stupid is happening.
Hideki: So now there's no fixing this? Okay but I still need to ask, What will I get in return for the vest?
Kazuki: You can have Rinka. Though you might have to lobotomize her. She'll most likely be with one of those old geezers now. Their at the Men's room at the park down the street.
Hideki: Okay then. I'll guess I'll see you on the other side.
So we went off to put an end to everything. Hideki was able to tell me which Hotel the Orgy's are taking place and which room they are in. Then he went ahead to the park. Hideki sneaks around the restroom to hear a little girl moaning. It's Rinka with some old guy. Hideki dashed inside, pulled out a pistol, opened the door and BANG! Hideki fired his gun straight at the guy's head. Before Rinka got the chance to scream, Hideki clubbed her on the head knocking her out.
So here I am right in front of the Hotel room. I say to myself "Mother, forgive me. But this has to be done". I open the door surprising Otome and the old guys.
Kazuki: Room for one more?
Otome: Kazuki?
The old guys were asking how I knew they'd be here. It's not important. So I explain.
Kazuki: I already know all about it. I overheard Rinka talking about it to some clown who's probably dead by now. All I can tell you is: If this is going to be the same in the next life, then let's just stay in hell together!
Little did I knew, there was a mini-camera installed on that vest. Watching this is Hideki who has Rinka bound & gagged next to him. Hideki is forcing Rinka to watch this.
Hideki: Watch Rinka! THIS is the futility of the hell that YOU caused!
Rinka (Gagged): MMMMM!! MMMMMM!!~ (No! Nooo!!~ It wasn't supposed to be like this!!)
I'm getting ready to push the trigger. The old men are getting an idea what's going on. Their trying to stop me, but their too late.
Kazuki: I hope your hell is worse than mine! *CLICK!*
KA-BOOM! The vest releases the mini-bombs that goes off in seconds destroying the entire hotel room with myself and everyone in it. Rinka just witnessed the whole thing and it put her in heavy shock.
Rinka: (Oni-chan...)
Hideki: This was your fault Rinka. If you'd just left them alone, things would never have come to this. And in return for that vest, Kaz gave me You.
Rinka: !!!
Hideki tears the clothes off of Rinka. She's still bound & gagged only she has nothing on. She's laying on Hideki's bed with her small breasts & hairless pussy exposed.
Hideki: This is perfect! It's like I'm about to have sex with that little girl from Cardcaptor Sakura. Too bad it's not actually her.
Hideki grabs Rinka's ankles to keep her legs open. Rinka tries to resist, but Hideki is too strong. Hideki is eating Rinka's baby-like pussy. It's actually too much for Rinka.
Rinka (Gagged): MMM!! MMMMMM!!~ (No! NO! It's too intense!!)
Hideki (Licking): This is nice! You're even moaning like a little girl. It's hard to believe that you're a high-school student.
Hideki kept eating Rinka's pussy for a while longer until finally, she squirts cum from her pussy. Rinka is spent, but Hideki is not through yet.
Hideki: No way! It's not over yet!
Rinka (Gagged): MM! MMMMMMMMM!!!~ (What? NNOOOOO!!!~)
Hideki pulls out his cock. It's so big, it puts the old men to shame. Rinka is still trying to resist. But it's no use. Hideki slowly inserts his cock in Rinka's pussy. Rinka can't handle it at first.
Rinka (Gagged): !!! UUMMMM!!!~~ (It hurts!!! It's too big!!!)
Hideki: This is nothing compared to the pain you caused Kazuki to endure! No man alive could ever put up with that!
Hideki is thrusting his cock deeper into Rinka's pussy. It almost feels like she's a virgin, but it's just that she's not used to Hideki's size. Hideki sits Rinka up on his lap with his cock still inside her. It got in deeper inside Rinka. She's moaning in pain.
Hideki: Is it me, or is your pussy getting even tighter?!
Rinka can't answer seeing as she's still gagged and moaning in pain. Hideki is grinding his crotch against her to get her wetter. It's working. Rinka is not feeling much pain.
Hideki: Perfect, it's not so tight anymore.
Rinka (Gagged): Mmm! Mmm! Uummmm!!~
For hours, Hideki is fucking Rinka hard in every position imaginable. Then finally, Hideki has had it.
Hideki: Shit! I'm gonna cum! *sprut!*
Rinka (Gagged): UUUUUMMMMM!!!!~~~~ *splash!*
Rinka raised her head in orgasm. They let out fierce ejaculations and got exhausted in the end. Then Hideki speaks out.
Hideki: Your Mom & Dad thinks that you died in that explosion. If you'd show up now, they think your some ghost or whatever. You belong to me from now on. Is that clear?!
Rinka: .......... *nods*
With everything finally resolved, I can finally rest in peace. I hope that in my next life, there won't be more of the same.
THE END
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