Dominic\'s Motorbike | By : Dawn_223 Category: +. to F > Eureka Seven Views: 1271 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Authors notes: This was originally on my fanfiction.net page. It is a first person narrative from Renton's perspective. It was originally published in 2011, updated 2015 - so it gave me a chance to go through it. :-)
"Renton," Dominic began, the gaze in my eyes deep, "If you're serious about saving Eureka you've got to be more ardent about helping me. I know it's tough, but as Pilot of the Nirvash Type 0, I expect better."
"I’m trying, Dominic-san," I had trouble taking it all in, thinking of Eureka, "But I still don't understand what I’m supposed to do."
"Ride my motorbike for the next twenty minutes," Dominic requested, heaving his leg over the seat and pacing to the compartment where I was. "We've got to get rid of this or we're going to lose speed. I need you to follow my directions. I've never been to this city before and I need all my focus on the map."
"Uh, sure – it’s just, I haven’t ridden a motorbike in years."
Dominic knelt down and screwed the compartment seat off. "Sit down in front. I'll teach you controls."
"This isn’t much different to a scooter, right?"
"The basic concepts are the same," Dominic agreed, still concentrating hard, "but it's a little different, let me show you."
I didn't know what to think, so I just followed orders. I sat in front of the motorbike and placed a hand over the steering. It was almost exciting, like being the Pilot of the Nirvash again. I jumped as Dominic put his gloved hands over mine, even if he meant nothing by it. The man knew how to make me nervous.
"Okay, this is the clutch, these are your breaks. Make sure you don't go over the speed limit."
“Yes, Dominic-san.”
This was all basic driving instruction. I zoned out for a while, not thinking of much at all, not even Eureka. As Dominic said, there were only a few details that differed from a scooter, at least in this model of motorbike.
There was something comforting about having someone's hands on me. It reminded me of your hands, Sis, being protected by someone bigger and stronger. It was as though no matter what was going on around me, everything would be safe. Abruptly, I was brought back to earth by a searing pain in my face. Dominic had hit me.
"Hey! What was that for?" I grumbled, rubbing my face. "I didn't do anything!"
Dominic shook his head. “That is exactly the problem, Renton.”
Awkwardly, he pat me on the head. I wasn’t sure what to think of that, but I was still mad. "If you stay alert you won't die. Now come on, let's go"
We tried starting and stopping the bike for a minute before Dominic sat directly behind me. It reminded me of movies where the girl hugs the male character from behind. It was kind of sweet out of context. Maybe Eureka would do that to me on a bike someday.
No, concentrate! Even though the wilderness was empty, it was still important to keep my eyes on the path in front.
"Take a sharp left in one, two… three!"
I turned, and was surprised to see more wildernesses.
"Well done, Thurston. Maybe you're not bad after all."
"Um, Dominic… how do you know where you're going? It all looks the same."
"Never question the map, Renton."
It was when I glanced over on an uninhabited stretch of land that I saw Dominic was staring at the compact drive, not the map.
"Renton, watch out! Take a right!"
"Oh, sorry!"
When the impact of the sudden movement had disappeared, I took a deep breath. Why was the compact drive suddenly more important?
"Dominic, you're the one who knows about desperation disease. Why do you have to stare at the compact drive like that? It's not like it’s a good thing. You’ll get sick."
Dominic peered away. "This compact drive has already stolen the soul of my younger sister. I doubt it has the will to destroy anyone else. You've got to remember it's a living thing. The scubs anyway."
He said it rashly, as though he didn't have the patience to talk about such things.
"Yeah."
I felt sad; remembering how I felt in the Zone, but Dominic tapped my shoulder.
"Keep your eyes on the road, Renton."
"I…"
I wanted to keep talking, but it made concentrating all the more difficult. I realized I had to stop, not just for my safety, but Dominic’s too. Dominic's lack of emotion was unnerving, especially considering he had been kind to me. He was just worried about Anemone.
"The next town is in a quarter of an hour. Please save all your questions until then."
Mildly unwilling, I did.
The next town was incredibly small. After taking a quick but glorious toilet stop, Dominic and I sat down outside a bakery. I ended up getting an apple almond scroll, while Dominic treated himself to a large espresso coffee and a wheat biscuit. I didn't feel like drinking anything from distressed. While we ate, Dominic scanned the map over and over, crossing out areas with a red pen and drawing new lines. Deep in his work, I felt awkward cutting him out of his concentration.
"Dominic?" I began nervously.
Dominic started shaking his pen. "Yes, Renton?"
"What happened to your sister? I don't mean to be rude or anything, but I don't exactly know anything about you, and I'd like to know as much as I can about the scubs, especially how Eureka seems to be connected to them somehow."
Dominic gave me a hard, cold stare I didn't understand. I was also a little scared, sis, but I hoped he understood my reasoning.
"You have an odd sense of humour. My sister said that too. 'The scubs are important, somehow'," Dominic paused, but after seeing my interested face decided to continue. "She wanted to communicate with them through a compact drive. She was interested if they were truly happy being part of it. Instead, they ate away at her mind. At the time, the compact drive was the closest thing she could get to communicating with the scub coral."
"I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be insensitive." Renton frowned, unable to take a bite of his food, "so is she still at your house?"
"Oh no," Dominic gave a shrewd nostalgic smile, "My house burnt down during the war. My parents died too, but she…. She had already died a long time ago."
"Why… if… if you don't mind me asking, of course!"
Dominic observed me very cautiously. He didn't know whether he could trust me. In fact, he looked remorseful, and so incredibly, sad. Sis, it made me ache inside. It reminded me of Eureka, of wanting to make her happy, but not being able to. Is this what Dominic had felt with his younger sister?
"Leah was as good as dead anyway." Dominic pushed his sadness away as he did the map. He took a long sip of his coffee, "I tried seeing professionals to help me manage my feelings, but it was useless. All I could think was the most beautiful sister anyone could ever have was gone. Our parents were not supportive to say the least, and we both wanted to run away, but since we couldn't, we confided in each other. We told each other everything. If she hadn't been there I probably would have met her same fate." He sighed, deep in thought.
"I think that's why she wanted to communicate with the scubs. She was lonely. Only having a brother for company must have been isolating, especially when the public was so hostile. Our parents taught us school at home, but they didn't like animals. It was a shame, because there was nothing Leah liked more than meeting new people and making new friends, no matter what their origin. So when she got her new bike, she gave it a name and personalized it."
"Does that mean the bike you have now is…"
Dominic nodded. "Yes. I managed to remodel it when I joined the SOF. I wouldn't let them give me an entirely new one. No one understood why, except Anemone of course. I told her about Leah one morning, when I first met her. She was curious as to how deep my mind was capable of sinking."
He sighed, and chewed the corner of his biscuit, as though he wanted to say more but not knowing what words to use.
"No, it's very interesting!” Renton protested, “I never thought about compact drives that way."
"Hmm," Dominic smiled, "well it seemed a little childish at first, but sometimes I wonder if losing her soul to the compact drive means she had finally become friends with it. Either way, it was a lifeless existence.
There is one memory that sticks out. It was late afternoon and I'd gone out counselling. When I got back, it was quiet, so I wondered if anyone was home. Mum and Dad sometimes went out sightseeing. Wanting to find a book from my Dad's study, I entered without knocking and… my Dad was there, with Leah, using her body for his own selfish sexual purposes. It was disgusting. We didn't even speak. He just jumped away and I took Leah back to her room. I'd never felt so useless and alone in my life."
Renton blushed, and Dominic had tears in his eyes. "She was nothing better than a stupid toy to him. He couldn't take her eyes off her as soon as she lost her mind. So I… I killed her."
"What?"
"You wouldn't understand, you've don't know what it’s like to see these things, to think it could have been going on for months. When it comes down to it, good or bad, I'm sure that's what Leah would have wanted, so one night while helping Leah wash herself up, I took the compact drive and threw it into the bathtub. Initially it was very hard to get it off her. After fighting her to make her let go, completely obsessed, she slowly climbed into the tub after it, and as she bent down to get it… I pushed her head underneath."
Dominic gave me a pained look. "She was barely breathing to begin with it’s as though she had finally given in to what her body wanted to do all this time. It was relieving, but in the most horrible way. I only had to hold it under for half a minute."
"Is that why you joined the SOF?" I asked. Dominic breathed deeply to calm down. "Because you realized then you were capable of killing someone, even if it was somebody very close to you that you never wanted to harm?"
"Yes, and I had nowhere else to go," Dominic covered his face, "Right now I just want to forget about it, but at the same time, it wouldn't be right to forget someone so beautiful as Leah."
"What happened to her body?" Renton demanded, "Did your parents find out what you did?"
"No", Dominic wiped his eyes on his sleeve, "They never found out, because they didn't care. I just told them I brought Leah to the hospital, and they believed me. They never tried to confirm if it was true. But I did bring her body underground to a mine. Now the compact drive was free from Leah's hands, I used her motorcycle. I let the scubs take her body back into the earth and put it to good use. I figured she'd like that. She loved nature."
"That's nice of you." I smiled, not sure what else to say. His story was so unbelievable, so much more intense than anything I'd ever been through with my family.
"Well, that's it. I'm sorry for losing my professionalism. I need to concentrate on this map now."
He sipped up the rest of his coffee, swallowed his cookie and peered over to some change rooms.
"If you'll excuse me, I need to cool off."
As I watched him walk away, I saw him in a brand new light, as brilliant as the rays shining on his uniform. Dominic was so amazing, Sis. He was able to end the life of someone close to him with his bare hands. I can hardly kill people I hardly know in an LFO. He has a lot of courage, Sis, and still he is completely selfless. He wasn't thinking about anyone except what his younger sister had wanted. I hope I can be that sort of brother for you too, Sis, someday.
Dominic and I took showers in cubicles next door to each other, and it was relaxing to get all the sweat and grime off of us. I suspected it would be a silent meeting until the soldier spoke.
"So Renton, you am romantically involved with Eureka, am I correct?"
"Um !"
Of course! Now Dominic had said all he wanted about one important girl in his life, it’s only natural he wanted to know about me. Rather stumped, I looked at the ground.
"Er, I thought it was obvious." Renton blushed.
"I thought it was best not to jump to conclusions. Pass the soap?"
I did underneath the door, trying not to slip. Taking showers was a calming experience, but it only amplified the feeling of intimacy when you were speaking with another person. I almost felt like a younger brother to Dominic watching Dominic's hand disappear from underneath the cubicle.
I realized I wanted to make him as safe around me as I felt around him, even if he was the enemy and I should want nothing to do with him. That’s silly, isn’t it Sis?
"So Renton, have you thought about all the things you'd want to do to Eureka?" he chuckled, "Oh, silly me, you probably are too young to be thinking about that."
"Hey, I’m not too young!” I protested. It was an automatic reaction whenever that sort of comments surfaced, “I’m fourteen. To answer your question, I have been wanting to kiss her for a while. That would be enough for me."
Surprisingly, it didn’t bother me that there were others people in the showers at the end of the room that could have heard. The noise of gushing water drowned it out.
"Yes, I suppose that would be enough for me too, at least initially." Dominic responded.
"HUH? Whom are YOU talking about?" I blurted out.
"Anemone, of course."
"Oh. Right."
I realized I was being silly and heartless for assuming he was talking about Eureka. I don't know why, but it bothered me somehow, the fact we were jumping a spectrum of so many emotions. Maybe people just liked picking on me. Dominic started humming to himself.
"Dominic, what did you mean 'for starters'?" I mumbled, keeping as close to the side of the cubical as possible so I didn’t have to raise my voice.
Dominic went silent for a second before laughing. He laughed so hard I almost thought he had started crying.
"You don't need to worry about that, Renton. It's far beyond your scope of practice and imagination."
"I have a great imagination!" I protested, determined to prove myself, although I wasn’t sure what he was talking about, "What exactly did you mean?"
"Oh, nothing."
He ignored me, humming to himself again.
"Dominic! Tell me, please."
Dominic sighed, "I'm not sure your adolescent brain can take it. Or your body for that matter."
"Try me. I can take it, I'll prove it to you. I won't chicken out!"
I couldn't see him, but I'm sure at that moment Dominic would have been smiling.
"Are you sure?"
I had to think for a second.
"Yes, absolutely."
There was a tense break in conversation as the only thing audible was the shower water crashing down, humming, and then Dominic spoke. "Then would you like to come over here?"
"Er, what?” I muttered, confused, “What does that have to do with anything?"
"I want to train your imagination. It shouldn't be too hard, but I'm hoping it won't break you."
"Huh?"
It made me wonder why I wanted to do this in the first place. What was Dominic going to do? I had no idea. What if it was something horrible? But I wanted to prove that I wasn't a child. I could take anything I wanted to. Maybe if I did this I could understand in greater detail what Talho and Holland talked about, what every other member of the Gekkostate and adult understood- and they'd no longer make fun of me. If anything, I could start making fun of them, Sis. This was going to change it all. I uttered the words quietly, trembling a little.
"Just a sec."
It was Dominic- how bad could it be, right? Right, Sis?
I turned off my water, walked out of my cubicle, used my small, wet towel to cover myself, and tapped on Dominic's door.
"Open if you want." I mentioned cautiously, half wishing this was all a dream. Sis, I had been in bath houses many times, it’s not like this would be any different, and if anything got too much I could say so, right?
Dominic opened it, looking casual as ever even though he was naked. He had covered his privates with the small towel as well.
"Why hello, Renton. Fancy seeing you here." he smiled.
I blushed, smiling nervously. "Hello Dominic," I glanced around, "so what did you want me to do?"
Dominic looked thoughtful. He brought a finger to his chin. "Of course this is merely an experiment, and like with any procedure of this kind you’re welcome to stop it whenever you like."
“Um, that’s good to know.” I couldn’t help wondering if showing me was really necessary. Perhaps it was so we wouldn’t be overheard.
I gulped, feeling incredibly nervous and paranoid all of a sudden. Dominic was so musclely, pale and toned. It was quite amazing, Sis. I'm sure you would have liked looking at him.
Dominic laughed at me."Haha, it’s okay, Renton." he blushed, "so I'm wondering what do you think happens when parents try and have children?"
"Erm," I went beet red, "Of course. I mean, I learnt it in school. I may not remember parts of it but I know enough!”
"It's like the next level of evolution and consciousness" Dominic explained, stars in his eyes, "People say you're never the same once you've experienced it."
'Um, they do? I just thought it was gross."
"Yes. But that's not all. You can experience an entirely new world with another person. It's separate to any other kind of experience, its own special set."
I nodded. It sounded like something I would want to experience with Eureka someday.
"But I figure I ought to train your imagination, teach you the boundaries of this new world, Renton. I promise I will not force you to do anything, but I would like to show you something men love to get done to them by the ladies."
"Erm, 'done to them'?"
"I promise if you follow my instructions you will not know any better, and if you want me to stop, just give me a tap on the shoulder."
"But Dominic," I began, sounding nervous, "You're too tall for me. I can't tap your shoulder from here."
Dominic had to cover his mouth with his hand to calm down, "You really are naïve."
He knelt down in front of me, and tugged at the towel around my waist. "Would I be able to uncover this?" he asked politely.
I thought hard. We were just friends. It made no difference to him what I looked like. I was just uneasy because I wasn't used to it. "Sure, if you do as well."
As agreed, we both removed our towels and I felt suddenly intimidated by how more impressive Dominic’s …assets were.
Dominic raised a finger and brought it close to the tip of me. “Remember, Renton – tap me on the shoulder. I’m going to use this, alright?”
“Yep.” I nodded. Who cares, we were just experimenting.
I shuddered from nerves as Dominic ran a bare finger smoothly down the tip of me. It was only a finger, but so incredibly enjoyable despite that.
The soldier smiled at my insane blushing. "Just close your eyes and think of Eureka. Imagine I'm her. It might make it easier."
"Erm…" I thought back to all Dominic had ever done to me, for other people. He had only been kind. He hadn't asked anyone for anything in return. He just wanted to see a smile on everyone's face, on my face. I shut my eyes. Maybe I could trust him. This would certainly be an indicator of that. "Okay. But tell me when it's over, alright?"
Dominic laughed. "Don't worry, you won't need me to tell you."
"But what do you mean by…"
I couldn't finish my sentence. Something warm, wet and completely immortalising had moulded itself to me, shifting up and down, creating a spark of pleasure down my spine. It was so addictive, so good. I never knew something this amazing had existed before now. I felt a flush go up into my face.
"Oh my god…" I murmured, awed.
Yet no one could hear us, water was still gushing all over me, all over Dominic. This sort of setting was perfect. I felt my hips move of their own accord, only Dominic knew what I wanted and brought his head further down over me. But no, Dominic told me to think about Eureka, so despite how skilled Dominic was, I had to imagine her!
Eureka, Eureka, Eureka…
The feeling only grew as this happened, a growing paralysing thing like a disease. My breathing became heavy, like I was running a marathon. I lost track of what I was doing, my focus was only on how good this felt, how much I wanted more. I restrained a moan, and then another one. Dominic could tell I was enjoying myself. He went faster, sucked harder, and channelled more focus into what he was doing. Yet the more I thought about Eureka in his place, the more I trembled all over. Something monstrous was building up inside of me.
"How did you learn this?" I blurted out, putting a hand through Dominic's wet hair and tugging at it out of the intensity. Dominic put up a finger to silence me, but I swear I heard him giggle.
Sweat was washing off my face with the shower water, and I felt Dominic's hand comforting me, running it along my knee, as though to say the most selfless thing. I couldn't describe it. All I knew in that moment was everything was perfect just the way it was. I let go of all my worries, of all my expectations. Suddenly my back arched, and I restrained more strange noises coming from my mouth.
Dominic seemed to know what was happening. Just before something exploded inside me, he grabbed my saliva covered dick with one hand, and covered my mouth with the other. There was some incredibly fast rubbing and I spurted something all over his naked body. He felt it, satisfied, tasting some in his mouth.
"Salty." he pointed out, "You must not know how to masturbate, Renton?"
"I don't even know what that word means." Renton admitted shamelessly.
Dominic smiled. "Don't worry. I can show you some more, if you like."
"Um, Dominic," I began, trying to catch my breath. "Why are you so interested in helping me with this? Why can't you just explain it?"
Dominic grimaced in a way that was mischievous and his eyes gleamed with interest. "Well. That would be no fun, wouldn't it?"
I stared flabbergasted. He was serious.
"I could use with the practice, and you're a good looking guy. Not saying my heart belongs to you, not in the slightest. I guess I was curious as to how you would react. I'm strange like that. Besides, what's wrong with some first-hand experience?"
"You are a bit of a whackjob." I admitted.
Dominic squeezed my shoulder, only this time it wasn't meant to be offensive. He turned me around.
"May I please relieve myself? I'm not asking you to comply, just open your mind to new experience. You can learn a lot about yourself, and that is important in this special set of experiences. Very important indeed."
It was almost as though he was wearing a uniform again, he sounded so serious. We were lucky the water was pounding down so hard, or someone would over hear us.
If I was honest, Sis, I didn't feel scared anymore. I knew nothing bad could possibly happen with Dominic. He was taking good care of me, and he had no intention of making fun of me.
"This is how men make love to each other. Now call me crude, but I'd like you to relax and let me show you what it’s like."
"I will on the condition, it’s not uncomfortable." I said, blankly.
Dominic paused, choosing his words carefully. "Two girls make love to each other similar with what I just did to you, but I can into that later."
Dominic placed my hands against the walls of the shower, holding my hips steady.
"We will go slowly, but let me know if it hurts."
What was he going to do? I had no idea, but sweat was creeping down my face. I was a little frightened. Nervously, I heard Dominic's breathing get closer to mine, closer and closer until I felt Dominic’s arousal up against my butt. More than that, he played with the entrance with a wet finger. Even with such a simple gesture, we breathed heavily in anticipation. I think I understood where this may go, but Dominic was very careful. Slowly, the finger slithered into my backside.
"It does hurt," I admitted, rocking back and forth to get comfortable "But I think it could feel really good if you…"
"Yeah. I've got it."
"Owww…" I moaned, pushing back against Dominic. It hurt but the pleasure was so much more intense. Dominic's breath was shuddering. He was having a worse job than me keeping quiet.
"Please relax, Renton," Dominic whispered, and he put his hands very softly on my shoulders, "this isn't supposed to be stressful."
I felt him kiss me on the neck, Sis, and I was seriously starting to question whose heart Dominic's belonged too, but then I thought, he was kind of like me, open and caring. He was just trying to make me happy. It was then that I fully trust him.
"Please continue" I begged, unable to contain my excitement. Dominic ran a hand softly through my hair.
"As you wish, Thurston."
That made me laugh, which I think was the point, because I relaxed a great deal, pushed himself inside me. It was rhythmic but gentle. The friction was driving me insane. I felt my eyes roll into my head of their own accord. Dominic groaned. Unable to stop myself, I put my hand over myself and tried to copy what Dominic had been doing a while ago. Never before had I touched myself, at least not with this intent. I went faster, and harder, and Dominic did too. The breathing was incredible. We were trying to be silent, and it seemed like the water was blocking the sound out.
"Oh god that feels good," Dominic muttered, stuck in his own fantasy, "its madness, Anemone."
I understood now. Dominic was imagining someone else.
"Stop thinking about Anemone." I blurted out, and Dominic kissed me on the neck again before continuing.
"I'm sorry. I just wanted to see what it felt like."
"I understand."
"Ohh damn it. Forks and knives and spoons." Dominic swore to himself, pulling me closer "please don’t judge me, Renton.”
"What does that mean?" I asked, but too late. Dominic had gained momentum. I was getting pounded against the wall, so hard I think I was going to get bruises. It wasn't long before Dominic realized what I was doing.
"Now if you could just give me a sec, if I can get this right I can time it perfectly. Just hold on."
Hold on to what?
"God damn it, Renton." Dominic gasped.
Things got faster and more electrifying, until the world was a blur, and moans were all I could hear. I ejaculated all over the wall, and I'm sure Dominic did so inside me. His breathing was intense. It almost overtook the sound of moans and water.
"Ah shit," he murmured, and I felt his pain. I felt it to the point I could hardly speak.
With a slippery noise, Dominic fell out of me and stumbled onto the floor, letting the water wash all of it away. He opened his mouth and let the water droplets fall in, breathing heavily, red and flushed. I did the same, grinning at Dominic.
"Are you alright, Dominic?" I asked, feeling both elated and worried.
Dominic gave the thumbs up.
It was true, Sis, we were both crazy, but we both really cared for one another.
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