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Reviews for *gasps* hetero

By : WhiteRaven
  • From kurijiko on May 19, 2007
    seriously. congrats for trying a hetero fic, but this is just as bad as 90% of the homosexual ones.

    *gasp* a hetero fic indeed.

    *gasp* another horrible fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    Most yaoi on this site sucks.

    At least 70% of this site contains Yaoi.

    I'd say 20% of yaoi on this site is decent.
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  • From ANON - Haku on August 01, 2006
    I swear i read this some where else but I doubt it!
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  • From ANON - Megaman Freak on July 24, 2006
    Wow, this story was awesome. I really liked Lan being a vampire. I also loved the sex scene. I think Lan looks cute without his headband on. Does he have it on?
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  • From ANON - sibs on June 26, 2006
    I may have asked you this before. But update the story. It' GREAT!!!!
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  • From ANON - pheonix on February 07, 2006
    I enjoyed reading an actual hetro fic of MegaM.

    Seriously I wouldn't hate yaoi if there wasn't so damn much of it. it makes me sick.

    I don't care if it was rushed it was good.

    Someone that doesn't like Yaoi that much other than me? Hell just froze over. Thank you very much now I know some people don't like that crap.
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  • From ANON - WhiteRaven on January 19, 2006
    WOW!!! that is an amazing work of spam Mr. janvfz.rtpsnxm,nvkj

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  • From ANON - janvfz.rtpsnxm,nvkj on January 19, 2006
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  • From ANON - WhiteRaven on January 19, 2006
    "Pretty good, but I personally think it was way too rushed- there was a lot of potential in it.

    As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that."


    I would be able to tell, WhiteRaven always knows.




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    What. The. Fuck. Was. That." I believe it was a lemon fic.


    "Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
    Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine." ... are you prejudiced against vampires?


    "Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.* bulshit? eh?! I looked over the first draft and tried to suss out any bulshitesque qualities, but failed miserably, frankly, I have no Idea what you are talking about


    "It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!"

    You have weird taste in stories.

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  • From ANON - WhiteRaven on January 19, 2006
    wow, Thank you so much for totally fucking up the god damn review thing, I really appreciated it especially as I am being flamed by someone with the screen name, "Penis Joy" if you didn't like it, fine, but here's an Idea, why don't you GROW FUCKING UP??!! JESUS CHRIST YOU ARE BEING SUCH AN INFANT!!!
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  • From ANON - comp on January 19, 2006
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  • From ANON - Penis Joy on January 19, 2006
    Comp fuqed hes momo's eye!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Penis Joy on January 19, 2006
    AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMGOMG!!!
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  • From ANON - Penis Joy on January 19, 2006

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  • From ANON - Penis Joy on January 19, 2006

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