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Reviews for Dreamscape

By : sakurazukamori6
  • From ANON - Silaeralin on September 18, 2006
    Really enjoying the story so far. I like the interactions between Naoe and Takaya. They actually seem rather in character. At least from what I've seen of the anime. Good work and please keep the chapters coming.
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  • From ANON - cat on September 18, 2006
    I agree with you about your theories concering MOB and Takaya and Naoe esp. regarding who resides in Takaya's body. I am so glad I find your story on this website. I just can't wait every week for an update. Do you change some of the chapters for fanfiction.net? Yours is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on September 18, 2006
    wow good story so far and i love have be checking to see if you have up date and was happy tosee tht you did and i love the story so far i have see the anime and i love it , i love you story too. keep up the good work see on the next chapter of the story . the love your writting.
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  • From ANON - The Skitty on September 18, 2006
    !!! I love it! I'm sorry to say that I've only seen the first episode and I imagine after this story, it will leave me wanting. Not even my fics can compare. But yeah. I got a MoB sample in Newtype, and it was the first thing to make me realize I liked yaoi. Descendants of Darkness set it in stone. lol. But I eagerly await your update. *reads again*
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on September 15, 2006
    wow this story is very good and i think it real good and i can not wait for next chapter of the story and i hope that you up date so .
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  • From ANON - haruna on September 08, 2006
    SAKUEAZAKUMORI6-SAN!!! HONTO NI ARIGATO FOR REVIEWING MY FIC!!! IT'S AN HONOUR TO BE REVIEWED BY A *THE* AUTHOR OF DREAMSCAPE! i felt a little guilty for not reviewing your fic all this time but not long ago *you* not only read my lame booreeng fic but also REVIEW them! i'm so sorry! i really like reading your fic! everyday i check the website if you updated any new chapters (not only your fic but also my other favourite author's fics so please don't worry and think im your next stalker)

    it's true that there are not many great MoB fanfics out there. it's a real disapointment that the series and OVA's are poorly done if you ask my opinion. they should have more NaoeXTakaya moments! more %*&^$&$^ and more %$^%&^ and a +little+ $Ex that goes all the way!

    thanks for liking my character, the innkeeper ^0^, oh! enough of my rambling already! let me unleash my thoughts about your wonderful succesful fic. I'm so jealous that you can write as in character of the cast as if you're the mangaka's sister! you know and understands very well of the cast and the plot of the anime very very well! unlike me whose still couldn't grasp the cast strongest point. when i read your fic, i felt like im reading the novel of the manga, written by one of the crewmembers and makers of MOB. for me i'm still not sure on how to potray nagahide and haruhie. i know nagahide doesn't like to be involve with the main cast and then what?

    my MoB anime has really crappy translation so maybe most of their dialogues are misleading to me. i only watch parts of the OVA through youtube.com. yaoi comics and animes are rare gems, espcially the comics! God, how i longed to go to Kinokuniya of singapore or K.L.

    you never missed to amaze me by how fluent and creative you portay Naoe and Takaya. everytime i read your chapters i pray/hope they'll make up and be happy-loving-couples like any other yaoi couples out there. but MoB, i mean your version of Takaya and Naoe is really hard huh? Takaya isn't the typical submissive uke and Naoe is too agressive and possesive and... i don't know! sometimes it frustrates me that Takaya acts too mean towards Naoe! why can't he see Nape is trying his best?

    and i hope you don't hurt Naoe too much in the next chapter... in the latest chapter we only get to know Takaya's battle with the origami enemy. hopefully you update the next chapter! you know another reson why i like your fic? you always write long, detailed and descriptive chapters! unlike mine which is short and sudden.
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  • From ANON - Ri on September 02, 2006
    Bum bum bum! Okay the begining was entertaining with takaya and his attitude, well childish attitude but still very entertaining. Anyways great chapter it got intense later on and i am dying to read what else will happen. Please update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Masque on August 26, 2006
    Wow, it seems we get shapeshifters on the loose. the plot is thickening by the second. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 22, 2006
    Gah the tension grows thicker! I mean thicker the pea soup but that is what makes it a good MoB fiction! I love it! Anyways great chapter, i was sniffling between the conversation between Naoe and takaya, gah what a stressful and so painful realtionship between them. *Blows nose* Always. Anyways I was shocked when I thouht that 'Takaya' said i love you to naoe but then finding out it was a phoony. Am i making any sense? My reviews never make any sense. i just want to say keep it up! But for some odd reason i always want to make it longer. =P Anyways update when you can, i can wait. ^_^ Yes yes i can wait cause this story is good enough to be waited on. *nods head*
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  • From ANON - Masque on August 11, 2006
    I notice a few mistakes in the latest chapter.

    1. Kousaka's name. Mirage English fans usually spell his name as "Kousaka" or "Kosaka". "Khosaka" is a little weird to me. Most people just call him "Kousaka".

    2. "...someone with the ability to exorcise Possessors...". Actually, any Possessors have the abilty to exorcise other Possessors and that means Naoe/Takaya/Haruie/Chiaki can exorcise one another as well. I found that phrase particularly odd because by being a Possessor, you're actually a vengeful ghost that steals a living human body. The Uesugi Possessors are also ghosts/spirits. The big difference between the Uesugi and other Possesors is that they are given a divine order to purify the souls of other Possessors since they believe dead souls should be reincarnated and not disturb the order of the living. After that, they would also leave the living world to be reincarnated.

    Just a note: Do You know that Nobunaga's host body in the Mirage world is a rockstar? ^_^. Just in case that you're interested in bringing him to life in your fanfic. I hope it's not somekind of a demon/ugly person/terrifying monster you have in your mind of him. He's super evil and super cool with a twisted sense of humour.
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  • From ANON - SohmaNina_san on August 11, 2006
    Beautiful....without the smut.......so sweet.....yes i think you got their relationship....well plan out.......i love it.....update soon.....i'm really looking forward to it....

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  • From ANON - Katherine on August 10, 2006
    “And don’t think for a second I won’t kick a tame dog if it bites me.” Takaya can be so cruel (love it). Another terrific chapter! *applauds* I would love to see some of these scenes animated, then I could die happy. Please update soon! I check as often as I can for updates, update soon! *Waits on edge of seat*
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 10, 2006
    The tension the tension! Yes i agree with you about Naoe and Takaya's relationship being like a dance, a painful dance!! BUt anyways the suspense! I enjoyed it and you had me at the edge of my chair until bam you cut it off! Boo but it is fine i can wait. Yes yes yes. *begins to dance around* Update when you can, your story always has me dancing for me! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Enzeru on August 09, 2006
    hi, me again! lol. I love the way you write the two of them. It's extremely canon, but it doesnt keep me from hoping that one of them will change and they can finally be happy, but considering how they both are, a drastic change like that seems near impossible.
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on August 09, 2006
    All I have to say is that if they make another OVA, I hope they use the making love scene you writed, because is the perfect one. So please continue with your writing, because is one of the greates I ever read.
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