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Reviews for Reflections

By : vampkitten27
  • From Atlantis on January 12, 2006
    Finally, a Twelve Kingdoms fic I can enjoy reading! All I ever seem to find are Rakushuun/Yoko pairings and it makes me want to bang a few heads together. My dear, you have some serious talent and the way you are weaving this story is beautifully mastered. While I have not yet seen/bought the second season of this beloved show, I have read a bit on it and have the first season to fall back on, and as far as I'm concerned, you have the characters down to the tee.

    Your descriptions are unique and lovely and the steam teases the senses and draws the reader in for an enjoyable and worthwhile wait as the story progresses. The story about Horai was also a good inclusion but I hope you don't focus on it so much that it draws away from what the fans of this story want to see: Keiki and Yoko coming together. Your fic is polished and has a good length to each chapter, though I'm a sucker for epic-length, I'll admit. I do hope that you will continue this fic, despite the lack of reviews, as I have seen happen often. This is too good a story to let go of and I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Until then!
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  • From ANON - Nic on January 10, 2006
    The inclusion of the book of hourai was really interesting. I'm not sure if it was part fact or all fiction that u created, but it was really good in the sense that there's a link to hourai. Most of the anime only relates to hourai abt Taiki, or the Kirins and their Kings, but not much about hourai's happening itself. This chapter itself on the dwelling of Keiki is interesting, although it would be nice if you delved deeper and more indepth into his character and his findings, and create more of a conversation between these two would be nice.Maybe that could be used for the later chapters. In anyway, i'm happy to see the new developments.

    Please keep it up.
    Nic
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  • From ANON - Nic on January 04, 2006
    I love this story! Couldn't have been able to imagine the look on Keiki's face when he was telling Enho abt those "intimate" stuff that Youko wanted to do with En-ou.hahaha. I thought Youko was gonna wake up from the dream in the hot spring with Keiki running in to her rescue after she called his name! But the whole tiredness thing was good too, since it helped give the Kirin a chance to stay with her until she woke up.
    Although i felt that the part abt Youko touching his hair ..and then suddenly nudging him awake was too jarring and too abrubt. It would have been good if u placed in more scenes of her exploring him up close since he's asleep..or giving thoughts to her feelings, or making her speak her thoughts while he's sleeping(but he was too deep in sleep to hear her)..maybe except a few of her last words abt him before he suddenly woke? That would create more "umhp" to the flirtations going on between them.
    Well, two reviews by now, so i guess its picking up. Keep continuing and i'm sure its gonna take off. I'll be waiting for ur next chapter.
    Nic
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  • From ANON - Oloore on January 03, 2006
    Great!Great!Great!
    Can't wait to read another chapters!!!



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  • From ANON - nic on January 01, 2006
    Finally 12K fanfics have appeared here after so many years. I'm glad that you wrote one on this pair since its one of the more popular ones that needs to be written about! I love youko/keiki pairings, although youko/shoryuu pairings are also very perfect. I love your story and the fact that things are progressing well between them, especially the possibility of them ending up together as a couple in the end. Keep up the good work and I'm sure more 12K fans are gonna start reviewing and pouring in their own share of ideas abt ur story.
    By the way, the idea of suiguu showing the possible future for Youko is a refreshing surprise..and a nice one at that! I love the story.

    Nic
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