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Reviews for Desu Nöto

By : mech
  • From ANON - Bo on November 27, 2007
    well, I sure as heck didn't. XD Please update soon!!! I can't wait for next chapter! Really good fic!

    I'm sad though that Watari had to die. He was always a cool old guy to me. heehee. OH well.

    If you want to contact I'm at regular FanFiction.net sharing a account with my sister Ski. It's PirateCaptainBo
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  • From KrystalChronicals on May 26, 2007
    cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on April 17, 2007
    The story is coming along great and I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Artemis on April 12, 2007
    YAY L got a Death Note...update soon its got my attention
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  • From ANON - oztan on April 10, 2007
    It abit slow but it very interesting.
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  • From Nahaujaret on April 01, 2007
    Iloved your idea for the fic, and so far it's awesome! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - moo on March 25, 2007
    L becoming Kira? I can't say I really like this idea; it's completely out of character for him. Still, I'm kind of interested to see how you're going to do this. The chapter ended rather shortly though, felt like it stopped prematurely.

    Also, I don't think those notes are needed. If a reader doesn't get subtle jokes, then they don't get them, highlighting these things is just a bit annoying. Same for the place, we don't really need a note telling us if it's the same place L is in when he meets with the team. He's in a hotel, that's all we really need to know.

    I also think you've put too many things in about the Shinigami, stuff that L wouldn't know about or really consider this early on without prior evidence. And frankly I think the whole shinigami theory should have been left, in the manga he's shocked at the concept of shinigami being real, so I think he'd consider other possibilities more thoroughly before beginning to think that something like a shinigami exists and could be involved. I think it should have just been a passing thought, something that he'd maybe continue to have considered as he ponders the book. That would seem more realistic to me.

    Anyways, those are just a few of my thoughts on your story so far; don’t take offence or anything if you don’t agree with them. ^^;


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  • From ANON - Macvanaly on March 23, 2007
    Hey,

    Love that you updated so fast. I don't really understand your question, but I'll go with type 1 because I'm not happy with the ending. I don't want it to just stop!

    I wish L had used it! ::tear::

    But yeah, cooly!

    Love ya -Aly
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  • From ANON - Macvanaly on March 22, 2007
    Okay, hi, I'm back. ^_^

    For one, I really love this idea. I wish I'd thought of it first, but alas, ou are faster than I. Your grammar is great, as is your spelling and I like how you characterize L, thoughtful, like he's supposed to be. I was actually a bit weary of clicking on this story, since I didn't know what it was about, but I'm glad I did. It's EXTREMELY interesting and hopefully you'll continue it and it'll be a well thought out and hopefully long story. ^_^

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Love ya -Aly
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  • From ANON - macvanaly on March 22, 2007
    This is very interesting, I hat that I didn't think of it first! lol, keep up the good work, I'd write more but I'm got a sleeping baby in my arms. bleh, anyway, this is great. I hope you continue!

    Love ya =Aly
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