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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    Kick ass.

    On a side note, I allow anonymous reviews because I want to get as much feedback as possible. If someone doesn't like this, they can go ahead and say it, and I won't delete their review or anything. Honest feedback is what I crave, and so far, I'm happy that the feedback has been overwhelmingly positive. ^_^

    Spending so much time on Newgrounds and dealing with a hostile public made me a bit paranoid I suppose, but heh, the AFF community seems to be much more accepting. Awesomeness.
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  • From UnholyJustice on April 06, 2007
    now have an account on here
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    Glad you like it. The religious intolerance in Hoenn is going to play a major part later on, and make this story have some rather dark moments. I wish I didn't have to write something that parallels the real world like this, but...it's the world we live in, sadly.

    Pfft.
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  • From ANON - Daemon on April 06, 2007
    (me again)

    Very good take on the religions of today and in the pokemon world. I am also atheist for those exact reasons. It causes more pain an intolerance than good. So following your own path your own way appeals very much to me.

    Had examples of religion in pokemon which I have never really thought about. The topic of pokemon/human sex was brought into the open and tied into the same topic, that was very clever.

    Anyway keep up the good work.

    Feel free to e-mail me if you need ideas or just want to bounce anything off me.
    unholydaemon@aim.com

    Looking forward to more.
    -Arthur
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    Glad you're continuing to enjoy. Hopefully I'll have another chapter up before the weekend is over, if all goes well. ^_^
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    Heh, glad you enjoyed. I'll probably update in a few days. I really WANT to update my Zelda story, but I'm just not in Zelda mode right now, so I'll probably be focusing on this story until that changes.
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  • From Bishonen on April 06, 2007
    Your story is great i cant wait for the next update because your bad guys are actually good at being evil unlike mine oh on a side not Pink Version was update and a new chapter should be up and it had the frist use of Ditto power

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    That's the one good thing about being an International-Baccalaureate-graduate turned unemployed 21-year old college dropout who lives with his mom and spends his days writing Pokemon lemon fanfiction...I can spell it well! XD

    I'm glad you enjoy it so much! I should have chapter 5 up within an hour or so of leaving this review. ^_^
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 06, 2007
    Thank you for this plot. The plot, the good spelling, grammar, and punctuation, the cute pokemon, the interesting main character, the believable bad guys, and everything else. In short, thank you for this fic! It is GOOD. In all capitals. I've never said that about a Pokemon fic before, and granted I've not read too many of them, but still.

    It's great! Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 05, 2007
    Yeah, I was always ticked at how stupid the enemies were in the games/anime. You don't become a feared organized crime syndicate by being bumbling idiots. So, I assure you, in this story, there will be a much darker group of antagonists.

    The bond between Slash and Kirlia is only going to get stronger, and...well, we know what it'll culminate in, heh. But it won't be some mindless smut fic...in fact, there's a whole separate plot that'll deal with what happens then.

    Glad you enjoyed, I'll update as soon as I can!
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  • From ANON - Daemon on April 05, 2007
    me again, nice job man this is way better than the regular pokemon episodes. Its very realistic makes you think about pokemon as more real than little icons with a health bar. And also gives more insight into the evils pokemon can be used for. I never understood why team rocket was a hassel because they never really did anything bad.

    But these team aqua guys man...

    I like the bond that is developing between the 2 and how she can talk to him now. So far its progressing nicely. 2 thumbs up!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 04, 2007
    Now that this story reached four chapters (like my Zelda story), I'm going back to "Ballad of the Wind Fish" and adding a fifth chapter before I update this one again. But don't worry, it shouldn't take long...if all goes well, both stories will be updated before the weekend.

    Glad you liked it! I'll continue reading your story as well. ^_^
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  • From Bishonen on April 04, 2007
    Wow this tory is dark but good it will be the kind of story that I love it's well written and even though updates may ake a few days I'm willing to wait and speaking of updates my story Pink Version's been updated with more Yuri goodness

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 04, 2007
    I'll keep an eye out for it, heh.

    I think I'll be able to update my story today, too...I spent all last night writing. ^_^
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  • From Bishonen on April 04, 2007
    Thanks for the review oh and by the way the next chapter of Pink version should be up later today and tommorw there should be another chapter up where she uses her powers for the frist time.

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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