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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 04, 2007
    Thanks a lot! It should be out in a couple days if all goes well.
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  • From RAW19 on April 03, 2007
    most excellent. i eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 03, 2007
    Thanks! Yeah, the sex won't happen for a while, but when it does, it'll be good, heh.

    I'm glad you're enjoying this...I'll try to keep updating at a fairly good pace. ^_^


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  • From ANON - Daemon on April 03, 2007
    Very very good man. Reads as good as any book I have ever read. I like how you didn't go straight into the sex after a chapter or two. You actually have a storyline going that has me hooked. I personally love the sex/pokemon type theme and if someone comes here what should they expect?

    Keep it up man your doing great so far.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 03, 2007
    Right now, Slash is paying the price for getting involved in a plot he knows nothing about...but he won't always be the same greenhorn trainer forever, heh.

    Next update should be in a couple days or so. I already know where the next chapter is going, so it shouldn't be too hard.
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  • From ANON - SSjDiizoid on April 03, 2007
    Another excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to your next update.
    And I wonder what negative side effects this will cause for Slash..
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  • From Bishonen on April 03, 2007
    Kind of like in my story of coruse any one who read this review will know that Pink is half ditto oh and the second chapter will be up on it soon so please a review for it

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 03, 2007
    Yep, although the specifics of what he is, and what he is after, won't be known for a while, heh.
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  • From Bishonen on April 03, 2007
    Well hat was a good update Kiako is really scary I cant wait to find out what his group is after and I see that you did go with the ditto arm which is realy cool looking foreward to more of this

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 02, 2007
    Oh, I getcha.

    However, that sort of thing isn't really in Gardevoir's personality (or Slash's, for that matter). They won't have time for much kinky stuff either once their relationship gets found out, either...
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  • From ANON - Tia on April 02, 2007
    Actually adult baby means treating someone whos an adult like a child it's a dom/sub thing the dom makes the sub wear diapers and dress them up and stuff like that I'm mostly a sub but there are a few girls that like to call me mommy the youngest one of them is 19 but when we're togather she does nothing but crawl around for me

    Tia the sexy slave
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 02, 2007
    Well, Slash isn't going to be banging Ralts (I mean, even from a logistical viewpoint, that's pretty much impossible). Now, when she evolves...heh.

    I don't personally write underage stuff (well, unless both parties are similar, like 16/17 or something, but I don't consider that to really deserve a tag for it). There will be lots of dark stuff in this story, particularly once Slash and Gardevoir's relationship begins, but nothing like that...sorry.
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  • From ANON - Tia on April 02, 2007
    If you'd be willing could you mabye fit in som Adult baby stuff some time I love it but there's like one person who writes it I would be foever thankfull if you did

    Tia the Sexy Slave
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 01, 2007
    I will, heh...everyone loves yuri! ^_^
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  • From Bishonen on April 01, 2007
    It would have been interesting for him to have the ditto arm but from what little of him I've seen i have to asy that he really doesnt need to be any scarier an I'm going to post my story with the half ditto girl soon so please look for it it's gonna be a yuri.

    With Love; Iamsuky Lomae
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