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Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From ANON - Araquiell on January 05, 2008
    Just wanted to say that Im enjoying Sinners quite a lot, It's shaping up to be a unique story, and I enjoy reading about the trainer/pokemon bond that develops into a relationship. It's hard to find a story that isn't pure smut about it, and especially difficult to find one that isn't a oneshot, or hasn't had a chapter posted in it for years. I can't wait to see what happens next in your story, so goodluck writing chapter 19!
    xD this is my first review ever on adultfanfiction.net.
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  • From ANON - Anonymoose on January 04, 2008
    Hiya. I've been enjoying your story so far, in spite of seldom updates (darn suspense). I actually had a big review planned for your story, but it's really late over here and I'm getting tired, so maybe later. However, I do want to ask this:

    Are Gardevoir and Slash going to try other "different" things later on in their, uh, activities? Like when Slash took Gardevoir from behind a chapter ago. Because if so, would you mind if I make a suggestion myself for some other different thing they could do? How about... Slash be in Gardevoir's place this time. No, no, I don't mean switching genders or anything, no. I mean, Slash is the one that "gets taken" this time. Their reasonings for this experiment being that Gardevoir wants Slash to know how she feels when she's being taken. Slash could be hesitant if he's never thought of that, but Gardevoir could convince him. As for how she does is... well, there's always... toys. You know, the stuff girls use on themselves... Or you could get creative. *shrugs*

    If you do decide to do this, or you're thinking of doing this, I'd love to see you write it someday. I'm curious as to how you would do it, since you tend to focus on romantic/love and passion, rather than pottymouth filled PWP fests (not that there's anything wrong with that if you want a "quickie").
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  • From HieioftheDarkness on January 04, 2008
    I love the story. It fits most of my interests and everything which surprised me when I found this story so many months ago. I've read from the begginning actually since chapter 6 or 7 I think but just recently created a profile. I procrastinate things too much. But I definetly will put this story under my suggested reads. Love the story, keep up the good work if yuo can.
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  • From ANON - GenoLiger on January 02, 2008
    Can I be put on the mailing list? My Email is Politwirl@aol.com.
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  • From xain34 on January 02, 2008
    make sure you e-mail that teaser to my new E-Mail address xainrm@yahoo.com (If you havin't done so already.)
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  • From RoboRed on January 01, 2008
    Weird stuff, dude...that teaser in the e-mail really twisted my brain. I like the chapter interlude, just because I find stuff like that cool. Like in the "A Series of Unfortunate Events" movie. I've never read the books though, so I dunno if the narrator pops in like that there.

    Glad you got a new comp there, Slashy. However, I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't put up the Christmas oneshot (unless you still plan to :D), I was REALLY looking forward to it, especially after I showed you that one song and everything...:(
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  • From Review on January 01, 2008
    that Flash attack was awesome. Now, if only that's how it actually worked...

    The vid was pretty awesome too. And we all know that Gardevoir is hot. :D
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  • From Bishonen on December 31, 2007
    I made a Gardevoir vid here it is

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0VeIVR4vLs

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Bishonen on December 31, 2007
    This is to funny.

    http://pyroasta.deviantart.com/art/Psycha-use-Flash-Attack-68893136

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

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  • From Review on December 31, 2007
    You may have gotten 666, but that won't stop me from getting 700...and if you do, all I have to do is erase one of my old reviews so that I can get 700! HA!

    You can't stop me from finishing my time machine, as it will be completed before this hour finishes! Take that! ... you had sex with yourself??? 0.o
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  • From ANON - Splenge on December 31, 2007
    Regarding Gardevoir in Brawl:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gByHqvrq9so

    Now if only Gardevoirs could make the jump to reality.
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  • From reo690 on December 31, 2007
    667 heh. Well, the Pokemon games, IMO are too unreal for my taste, because a pokemon battle is basically statistics
    and has no uncontrolled variables in them. Like, for instance if you were in a battle with a wild pokemon it doesn't take into account any other wild pokemon.
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  • From Bishonen on December 30, 2007
    666 perfect for sinners and it's mine haha i'll still try to take 700 for myself.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - King dumbass on December 30, 2007
    I hope the nex update is soon i'm bored of waiting
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  • From Bishonen on December 30, 2007
    Now that I know your making one I’m going to have go into the future and stop you from finishing so you can’t screw up any of my evil plans like stealing eight tons of Nazi gold or blowing up the earth and if more people start traveling back in time it’s bound to cause some paradoxes and I’ve caused enough by going back and having sex with myself.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

    p.s. i'm getting review 666
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