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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Review on December 30, 2007
    well I learned something new today...never heard of that shock trick, gonna go have to play with that here in a few, heh...

    Imasuky built a time machine?! Damn, that means that mine won't be the first when it gets done.

    And yes Slash, you do abuse 'incidentally' quite often. But I don't think anyone's said anything about it, either...

    And this is review number 663... only 37 more 'till 700... which will be mine, by the way...lol
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on December 30, 2007
    Imasuky Lomae---I'd prefer it to protect you by stripping. Somehow. I don't know, she just needs to take it off.

    Xain---My more recent chapters have all been 10000+ words...which isn't that impressive in terms of the entire site, as I know authors with chapters MUCH longer (of course, they also tend to update only once every three or four months), but it seems like a lot to me. I always compare my writing lengths to my extended essay in IB, 4000 words, which seemed like a lot at the time...but now 4000 words is child's play. Maybe it's because I actually enjoy writing Sinners, as opposed to some boring paper on the political backdropping of the Mexican-American War, bleh.

    GenoLiger---I luff Saturos. Incidentally, when I get some time, I need to work on a few Golden Sun oneshots...

    Reo690---Well, really none of the in-game legendaries are THAT impressive. I mean, Kyogre carved out the fucking oceans, so you'd think its Surf attack would do a little more damage, wouldn't ya? They could have had an in-game explanation for their relatively low power (Rayquaza/the orbs/something sealing away the majority of their strength or something), too. Lazy bums.

    Incidentally, yes, you're mostly right. Not that I'm surprised. To see the trees in a forest is no great feat of vision, heh...but it's what's hiding in the darkness of the woods that you should really be looking out for.

    And incidentally (fuck, I abuse that word), I highly recommend anyone who hasn't signed up to the mailing list already to do so. Some of the near-future plotmails will be very interesting, expanding on certain Sinners points without being spoilers. Nothing in any of the messages will be critical in the sense that you NEED to read them to enjoy Sinners, but...well, you'll likely enjoy it more with them, heh.

    Imasuky Lomae---Yes, when I'm near the end, I'll probably write like a madman...or at least write many chapters and then submit them in quick succession. What I think I'll do in particular is end the main story like that, with rapid updates and such, and then, a month or two later, release a final epilogue to round things out.

    The ending I currently have for the story is a good one. It'll almost certainly change by the time I get to it, sure, but it's still a good one. If it still fits then, and my muse has no objections, it'll be swell.
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  • From Bishonen on December 30, 2007
    I’m a mad genius and I built a time machine and went into the future and found out how the story ends let me just say this Slash write faster no one will believe just how kick ass the last chapter is especially the truth behind Kiako…It’s to cool for words.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From reo690 on December 30, 2007
    Also, I already know what Giovanni's plan is. DON'T READ IF YOU WANT THE PLAN SPOILED! He wants to get the pearls, get a relicanth and a wailord, use them at that undersea ruins that had all the weird writing, to reveal where the three regi's are, catch the regi's (the prince's,) then use them to awaken Regigigas (the king,) which is in some underwater tomb, who probably has some sort of god like power. DON'T READ IF YOU WANT THE PLAN SPOILED! Am I right or am I right? Also, don't ask where I got all this knowledge,as it took me a lot of blood and sweat.
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  • From reo690 on December 30, 2007
    Now, on a more lighter note. Jirachi, a divine pokemon? When I haxed my Emerald to get it, I got no damm wish.
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  • From ANON - GenoLiger on December 29, 2007
    I know. Golden sun is one of Nintendo's best series.They could at least put Garet or Felix or Issac.That reminds me I still have too beat the 2nd game.
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  • From xain34 on December 29, 2007
    You still have to give me credit though slash. My chapter two is still larger then yours! XD
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  • From xain34 on December 29, 2007
    3500+ huh? God damn dude is it REALLY that small compaired to your other chapters? Well fuck. I have alot of work to do anyway. Each chapter probly won't be as long as yours Slash since well, AADHD and all. But at least i'm keeping with the story. My 24 KB file VS your 68 KB story, both with story only. Hell your chapter 17 is larger. By...2X + 20 In file size it was 2X +20 in word size it's about 3.5X larger. Good job slash. And I fucking suck at math. XD
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  • From Bishonen on December 29, 2007
    Holy Crap in the new super smash bro games Gardevoirdoes show up heres what happens.
    It will protect the player that summoned it by conjuring a barrier.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on December 29, 2007
    Imasuky Lomae---Yeah, I know the shock trick, but it's still just Nintendo rated-E stuff, sigh. I wanna see that cute ass on Gardevoir...heh.

    GenoLiger---She'd be fine, heh. Sexy and deadly.

    But I'm still pissed that they're including something as dumb as "POKEMON TRAINER" but not a single Golden Sun character. fdgsdgsdfgs.

    Xain---3578 words in chapter two. So short compared to later chapters.

    And there's something I've been seriously considering...in the future, if I have a lot of time on my hands, I might possibly re-write some of the earlier chapters. The quality of Sinners is continually going up, I think we can all agree...and while that's mostly a swell thing, it does make the early chapters look kinda...dorky in comparison, ya know? Maybe someday I'll spruce up the first ten chapters or something.

    Or maybe not. I dunno.

    And yes, I'll give it a read as soon as I can, heh.
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  • From xain34 on December 29, 2007
    Oh and slash I updated my story for chapter two if you want to read it.
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  • From xain34 on December 29, 2007
    Can someone leave a review of how many words are in chapter two please? Just the story part not the authors notes
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  • From ANON - Genoliger on December 28, 2007
    Well sense we are getting Zero suit samus too this time around it should work better.Oh and Slash I thought you wouldn't want to see Gardevoir too get hurt,but it would be pretty cool too have gardevoir playble. Gardevoir could be like mewtwo if they took mewtwo out. It wouldn't be hard too make moves for Gardevoir.Gardevoir is one of the most humonoid pokemon.
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  • From ANON - GenoLiger on December 28, 2007
    Well sense we are getting Zero Suit samus it might work better now.Oh and Slash I didn't think you would want Gardevoir too get hurt,but yea it would be pretty cool if they ade gardevoir playable.
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  • From Bishonen on December 28, 2007
    I hate the shorts they put under peache's skirt but some of the trophies had regular panties i spent about three hours looking up the skirts of almost every thing in each super smash bro games i am a perv with way to much free time oh did you know that if you use Pikachu to shock Samus just the right way she looks naked.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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