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Reviews for Jade, Ice, and Talon

By : LittleBlackKitten
  • From LordPatamon on December 29, 2007
    Heh interesting way to become a digidestined, why it can't work for real? xD

    So Jade a Digidestined? now that sure is what I call a twist ^^

    Cody must hate you, you abandoned the poor guy to his luck since you didn't picked up the part of his rescue in few chapters lol

    it keeps getting more and more interesting ^^
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  • From LordPatamon on December 27, 2007
    Pretty smart girl Jade is, and yeah I can see where you go on that of getting to know him TOO well xD

    About the Davis asleep it was a funny comment I made, as in he didn't had any lines on the past few chapters due to that he was asleep after his fun with Jade, I'm really wondering how Joe will take it xD
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  • From LordPatamon on December 26, 2007
    At last Davis woke up, he has been asleep... for the last 3 chapters I think xD

    Aww I missed you replying me on your author notes ^^;

    Anyhow, getting really interesting and it sure is obvious Ken has other plans for her, but it is just me or they knew each other from before?
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  • From LordPatamon on December 24, 2007
    lol a bit more and we would have seen Kari hitting Tai with the messager, he was lucky they needed to got to help Cody or else he would be dead xD

    About how to make the GatoPata work you can take a look at my lemons, actually is not that hard, now if what you need is find a situation in which they end say separated from the others on their own, so in that they end comforting each other and one thing leads to another well, you have the Kaizer, he sure will be so smart to come up with something that would split Gatomon and Patamon from the others, like send some enslaved digimon, like a group of Tyrannomon, something that can cause a big mess to make them get separated from the others ^^

    if you need some suggestions just ask me I'll be glad to help you ^^
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  • From LordPatamon on December 20, 2007
    Another interesting chapter and how right Kari was about something being wrong and with Cody, she and TK must be psychics xD

    And about Veemon and Armadillomon no, no, you misunderstood, what I was trying to say is that from the partners of the digidestined the only ones who had a mention or a few dialog lines were Veemon (when Jade heard Davis mentioning Veemon's name) and Armadillomon that was with Cody investigating about the Kaizer but I never meant it as in a VeeArmadillo pairing lol

    The only digimonxdigimon I mentioned was PataGato when I asked you about what you mentioned about beast on your author notes and which I really hope you can add, I love those two as a couple besides the little orange winged guy (Patamon) deserves his fun with the kitty too XD

    And what on this green earth is with Tai? has him been smoking weed or drinking too much? I would say that maybe the goggles are cutting the blood flood to his brain but he gave them to Davis xD

    And because of Tai, Cody will be in deeper problems now o.O
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  • From LordPatamon on December 10, 2007
    Yeah I figured that much that Davis only in his mind thinks that Kari likes him because as I said on my other review Kari seemed too happy to have a go out to the movies with TK lol

    Oh well, at least it won't be that hard for Davis, but if I were Davis I would pry for that Jade won't end pregnant, he finished inside her xD

    Thanks for toss in the Takari.

    just a question in the chapter 1 I saw you put that fic maybe will contain beast, that means you will add digimonxhuman scenes or digimonxdigimon ones? if is digimonxdigimon think you can add some with Patamon and Gatomon having their fun even if it is a small one? which by the way talking about those two wonder where they are? I mean the only digimon I saw mentioned so far were Veemon (just mentioned) and Armadillomon who is with Cody I think in the digiworld but other than that nothing about the other digimon o.O

    Anyhow nice chapter, at least Davis had his fun ^^
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  • From LordPatamon on December 05, 2007
    And why would Kari object about that Davis got a girl for himself? I mean for what I saw Kari and TK seem to be hanging out a lot more, she even said in the chapter 3 that she had a going to the movies with TK so I doubt she will mind that Davis got a girl ^^

    Where I think she and the others for that matter will object would be if Davis gets Jade to the digiworld which I think he will do, she totally seduced him o.O

    Well at least Joe will have with who to share the blame lol

    Also and talking about TK and Kari going to the movies I liked that part, can't help it, is the Takari fan in me, I love that pairing (And PataGato too for that matter even though I treat both pairings individually, in a independient way but that's another story ^^), I like how TK and Kari complement each other really well and I'm not talking about their crests nor their digimon or anything like that, I'm just talking about their interaction, their close friendship, pretty aside of the digiworld and the fights and crests and such things ^^

    Well you got your first review, keep up the good work and don't give up, the fic is getting really interesting ^^
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