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From ANON - Nicolae on July 02, 2015
Does Asuka will be able to get back at Yui, causing shinji what Yui did to her?
Will she try to manipulate the shinji, making it equal to it, to destroy the life of the Baka shinj, thus reaching the Yui?
Shinji will know what they did with Ayanami and will avenge it?
When you know everything about Mana, he will have the courage to break up with her?
Will have any chance of shinji end the Ayanami?

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From ANON - The Sickness Unto Death on May 27, 2015
This fanfiction has good sex scenes, very well written. In the next fafiction
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But it failed to convey the anguish that almost no one has.
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He focused almost exclusively on sexual abuse and physical pain, showing the psychological torture which the characters live. And that hinders the approach of trouble because almost appears only are sex scenes and little room for introspective scenes in which characters appear to be worsening or scenes that show how much suffering inside.
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Asuka is subjected to the successive King and sexual blackmail abuses. Asuka suffered great physical suffering as had sex or when quarreled with Shinji, suffering perhaps suicide to relieve giving him hope of his order, but if the fanficiton had intended to mix sex with psychological, Asuka and would shinji subjected to torture or death would solve or end. It would be an almost eternal suffering.
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Asuka live a personal hell of not being able to free him, not with death, living an endless agony. The suffering it would only grow to the point of death become the hope of salvation Asuka, but it would be denied. If free himself of herself, wanting to be someone else, the "I" of his own invention that would make your delight - although in another sense his case would be no less desperate - but the embarrassment of being this I she did not want to be, this would be his suplicio. Asuka could not free himself of herself, ending sue suffering, being forced to be who she wants to be. In her case be that poor girl who wants to be loved for apena short perverted. It would be an internal conflict.
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We see shinji amazed at the change in Asuka, what it has become, but does not live his personal hell and despair, in the case miss those he loves and be plunged into complete solitude. It has the Mana. In the series shinji increasingly been coming in agony when he lost those he loved. Rebuild when he found himself in a completely hostile world. Each character in the series was decomposing slowly sme to end their suffering, Asuka in denial of herself and shinji not assuming needed from other people and getting only. And with no physical violence, but purely psychological decomposition whose choices have led to complete personal ruin.
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Here we missed see Asuka with the mark of their desperation and denial of herself and her internal conflict. After the sexual abuse she seems at peace in his libertine life except when forced to leave home. She in no time proved conflict between what it is the life Yui want to play it. Not shinji suffering from loneliness and increasingly closing their hearts. Because mana was inserted and it relieves. His presence is unnecessary.
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Missed switch psychological scenes with the sex scenes.
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Good discretion of sex, but not a fanfiicton of despair and anguish.

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From ANON - Zarathustra on May 25, 2015
The Yui threw her out of her home, she had to walk the line there, but still the Yui will not accept her back. And Shinji is so disgusted her, she can get nuazinha he will not want to see her. It will faezr what to fix things? Seduzid will it? He's with Mana.
You will end up in a brothel or selling to school children or to stay with Kensuke.
The end of the Asuka will be melancholy.
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From ANON - Zarathustra on May 25, 2015
Asuka will end up a slave to Kensuke and Touji.
Musashi abandoned, he who should give shelter to Asuka.
I doubt that shinji to accept back, he took her disgust. She will end up prostituting or Kensuke, but Shinji will not accept her back.
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From ANON - Climacus on May 19, 2015
This scene gave feather Asuka, see the guy she loves having sex with another girl.
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http://pururin.com/f/0186c1579b21b7b0de8eb560dcb31a8b573b9a09/a-six-kansaihan-23.jpg
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From ANON - Climacus on May 19, 2015

For those who think the disturbing fanfiction, see these doujinshi.
Worst scene is when shinji is forced to have sex in the face of Hikari and Asuka got to see everything and suffers.

http://pururin.com/view/14090/02/a-seven_3.html
http://pururin.com/gallery/8406/a-six-kansaihan.html
http://pururin.com/gallery/7800/a-five.html
http://pururin.com/gallery/5247/a-four.html
http://pururin.com/view/7799/015/a-two_16.html
http://pururin.com/view/6818/05/a-one_6.html;
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From ANON - Climacus on May 16, 2015

You must place at the end shinji putting Mana, Ritsuko, Yui, Musashi and keita in jail, which Asuka break the Touji's face, kensuke and mari.
This story can not be something hot, but fill me with anguish and shame of Asuka. She deserves to be happy next to the shinji and hope he turn man and defend.
All the more contempt is keita. Love mana, for she prefer shinji, he cashes his rage on Asuka. not to be a man and challenge Ikari or try to drop it his frustration.
Musashi besides raping Asuka, leaves her helpless when she needs someone when it is expelled by Yui. I hope it's abuse victim in jail.
It would be epic at the end shinji disowning her mother and marrying the Asuka. Nothing worse for a mother to be denied or your child. And that Asuka break all the teeth and leave full of ematomas Touji, kensuke and Mari.
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From ANON - climacus on May 16, 2015
It gave me a squeeze in the heart of Asuka so degraded and humiliated.It is reduced to an animal.
I sincerely hope that shinji discover the whole truth and take revenge of everyone there.
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From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2015
Kyoko, let me copy paste the Disclaimer the author has at the start of this fic - This lemon is a collective work of two authors and was inspired by an original Japanese Evangelion lemon called `Innocent Taboo' found in a certain infamous website, but is original in its own regard. It happens in the alternative Evangelion universe but slightly differs from this as it also includes Girlfriend of Steel characters. Needless to say this is for adults only, and some themes and scenes are rather strong, which some may and probably will find to be offensive, so be warned. Any connections with real life events are purely accidental.

He himself has stated this is an alternate universe pic and that this is not for everyone. Clearly it is not for you. However, you seem to have put a lot of thought as to how you would like an Eva adult fan fiction to be. May I suggest you have a go at trying to write your own fan fiction? You might surprise yourself if it turns out you have great talent at creating your own works. Though I do recommend you work with a proofreader. I'm assuming English is not your original language, and I commend you for attempting to make paragraphs of critique in a non-native language, but it is a struggle to read your review of this fic. I say this because your review doesn't seem like it was someone typing in English as a second language and more like you've put your words through a translating program. If that is the case, I'm wondering if you read this fic using Google's translator and have lost some of this fic's nuances because of how poorly a program would have translated this fic into your own language.
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From ANON - Kyoko on May 08, 2015

Here are fanfictions with sexual content. Until liked many fanficitons.
This fanficion would be actually a mixture of the cap universe. 26 Evangelion, more game characters Neon Genesis Evangelion: Girlfriend of Steel and taking the Mari Rebuild. In this world there are evas despite seeing references to scenes of The End of Evangelion. A desperate shinji would kill Asuka there, just as parari on the beach when he demonstrated affection for him.
Yui would never do what he did Asuka without thinking of the greater good for your child and humanity, as in The End of Evangelion to let Asuka die. What she did was only hurt the shinji, had no benefit for him his suffering. She n� hurt you so shinji was more resolute and faced danger and were more determined with Asuka, she ended up doing it with Asuka and wounding at shinji to make a girl on a nymphomaniac. It was not something pragmatic for the son of Yui as she thought of the series. All she did was think about shinji to give you control of the instrumentality. And she acted on the show several times and have not listened to Gendo and protecting sue son, all thinking of him as well.
The Mana game or manga Shinji Ikari Raising Project does have a strong love for shinji but unable for mere jealousy hurt or produce pain to someone else as she did with Asuka. Up 'cause she won the hearts of shinji there.
The Asuka was tough and would never accept being raped and blackmailed and when she suffered a terrible shock co Arael she was and coma shortly after finding that his life had no value. As strong as the sexual abuse was the painful memories of his life that did try to commit suicide. She had complete contempt for Kensuke, Touji (only a discarded scene from The end of Evangelion Asuka appears with Touji) and King (only Rebuild she became friends soon), full Asuka harbored contempt for them. Asuka only shinji accept the surrender as the scene of the train she claims to know of his fantasies with her and she wanted him to be her or would not want to know him. In episode 25, Asuka also criticized the behavior of Misato, judging be dirty.
Shinji was exaggerated their cowardice when he hi able to protect Touji and Kensuke when their paths were threatened, risking his life by jumping into the volcano Asuka attack the NERV to avenge what Touji suffered, returning to defend his fellow Zeruel and wish defend Asuka Arael, only when he lost everything shinji wanted to die. Shinji up feeling hurt was able to devastated humanity with instrumentality, he feels there would be desperate measures. The shinji manga is even worse because it is extremely cynical and violent. Not putting up with shit.
The Yui plan was entirely exaggerated, without worrying about the realism of the series.
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From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2015
I think the characterizations of Asuka and Shinji are close to how the originals act if put in similar situations. And the author/s should be commended for how much they develop the angst instead of just describing sex acts like most adult fics. If anything they give the characters more depth than can be done in a 26 episode movie anime or a 4 movie series. The only characters that seem really OOC are Mana and Yui and thy have to act that way as a ploy device. If you really want characters perfectly close to how they act in the series, may I suggest rewatching that? Fanfics that follow the source material closely are far and few between.
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From ANON - Kyoko on May 05, 2015
What a horrible Fanfiction and without any connection with the series.
The Asuka does not remember that tsudere who was able to die struggled without yielding to SEELLE, shinji is only a degraded boy when he is able to risk his life for his friends, face and suborn the NERV and violence when they feel hurt, He is able to kill. Yui did what he did for a higher reason and not to make a girl a slut. King could be passive and manipulated by Commander Ikari, but would not accept a good being sexually abused. It is another Shinji, Asuka another.
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The plot is too implausible the story of blackmail and drugging.
What was the idea of the series, accept the suffering of existence and that only then would overcome the loneliness and not in instrumentality. The characters have learned and evolved are not without problems, but there is a growth there. Everything is sorrow to grow and overcome.
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Yui would not cause damage and suffering to Asuka and Shinji mainly to without having some greater goal in mind as the evolution and growth of shinji or the evolution of humanity. It would not cause it caused in Asuka and wounding shinji for the pleasure of making Asuka a whore. The suffering that shinji would serve to him to learn something and grow as a person or any end to the good of humanidade.O suffering caused shinji would learn from their mistakes, accumulating wisdom and evolving as a person, as well as becoming tougher difficulties .
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All that Asuka spent only serves to degrade it and to show how a whore who only knows how to relate sexually, no difficulty to do to make a better person that seeks to relate to people overcome their problems, become more open with their feelings. Yui just want to degrade and become a whore.
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What is the intention of the story is just trying to show Asuka being a slut and a degraded shinji weak. Fucking a girl and a boy banana watching passively for masturbation pleasures. But without a consistent plot.
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From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2015
Okay here's what I don't get, is Musashi combination of the three stooges or Shinji's ideal self? He comes off as what Shinji thinks is "cool" or "manly" I understand Mana is Asuka's hate for herself but she also appears to be a combination of Rei and Asuka. Mana also appears to be a jab at fics where Asuka is overly sweet but her real self is particularly cruel.

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From ANON - StarShaper7 on April 27, 2015
the link to see "Innocent taboo":

http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/menu.htm

an image:
http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/eita/data/IMG_000263.jpg
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http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/rh.jpg
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asuka at the end just marrying shinji:
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http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/roma.jpg
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http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/trueend.jpg
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the stories:
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http://www.saiin.net/~evangel/index_novel02.htm
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From ANON - StarShaper7 on April 27, 2015
This fanfiction is based on Innocent Taboo.
Innocent Taboo is in Japanese and Meguro's work is all over the map, ranging from sweet to perverted to hot to disgusting. If these are all it takes to get you raging you need to find another hobby.
Asuka turns out to be a young depraved sex addict.
Innocent Taboo's second chapter. Shinji walked in on his mother having sex with two sixth-grade elementary schoolers and understandably freaked out, spending most of the chapter whining that she betrayed him and Gendo, with a side-order of angsting that both Musashi and Keita have larger equipment than his own despite him being several years their senior. With only a few paragraphs left, he finally went "fuck it, might as well join them" after Yui kept insisting that it's perfectly natural, saying something to the effect of "men and women understand each other through sex much better than through words; it is the single greatest thing that can happen between people".
In the original story, Innocent Taboo, it actual ends with Shinji and Asuka being happily married.

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