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Reviews for Taboo Parallel

By : Strigon2
  • From ANON - David Carvaho on April 27, 2015
    Yui claims that the real reason Kyoko went insane and killed herself was because she was a slut but suppressed it. She sees Asuka's tsundereness as a warning sign of Asuka suffering from denial as well. Yui's response? Use her connections in a pharmaceutical company to create a very potent date rape drug with aphrodisiac properties, then have two guys use it on Asuka and Rei to repeatedly rape them while filming the whole thing as blackmail material to prevent Asuka from not complying (due to the drug, Asuka is behaving like she's a willing and very eager participant). Which presents with two choices: abandon all her human pride and turn into a sex-addicted whore or Yui will throw her out and make sure to permanently ruin her reputation. This ordeal is exactly what triggers her attempted rape of Shinji, making it impossible for him to return her feelings. Apparently, Yui wants to prevent Asuka's self-destruction by forcing her to turn into what Yui claims Asuka is suppressing; Yui also knows about Asuka's crush on Shinji and claims that Asuka's self-destruction would pull Shinji with her as well, hence why she's turning a teenage girl into someone who can only relate to people via sex and is completely incapable of loving anyone.

    She would never do so because she said that even in the worst hell inda yes acontanto he was alive could be happy, it wished to overcoming pain for her son and not her escape and she said goodbye to the child at the end when he went to a world ravaged along with Asuka.

    Even Misato who was sexy and relationships involving sex, getting as many days in bed having sex, was with Kaji and tried to have sex with a maximum shinji. She was no nymphomaniac who slept with the entire NERV.

    Kyoko killed himself because he was the victim of his experience and not because suppress your inner bitch

    Asuka had psychological problems do not over indulge in the wild sex but because she suffered with the abandonment of her mother that she began to avoid lrelacionar more strongly with people afraid to get hurt. Their relationships were superficial, despite to put their hope in baka shinji. Asuka never assumes that need other people and she was extremely lonely. At the end of the series (not The end of evangelion) that is lonely and it's painful.

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  • From Strigon2 on April 27, 2015
    I don't really consider anything that Sadamoto writes to be of note worthy. Manga Evangelion with its horrible character depth and butchering the anime characters is almost as bad as Rebuild so yeah.
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  • From ANON - David Carvaho on April 26, 2015
    In the manga Shinji has a violent temper and even cynical, even protective of the people he likes.
    The shinji manga would be far from passive and hunt fight with Keita and Musashi.
    Including Asuka fgiu d eum confrontation with him when he defended Ayanami abuse funding it.
    He would not ranquilo accepting Asuka suffer all sorts of abuse or be degraded. He manga saved her from being killed by SEELE.
    If you write a fic about sex of the characters of Evangelion, to respect the characters and the context in which they live.
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  • From ANON - David Carvaho on April 26, 2015
    Very poorly written and with no connection to the characters of Hideaki Anno series.
    Asuka maximum would surrender to own Shinji or at most if we are on line manga Sadamoto to Kaji.
    She would never be quiet to be raped, remembering that in the manga it using fighting techniques she hit her attackers And I doubt that she would accept blackmail and leave them to do anything with it.
    Outside the exaggerated plot, looking movie trash.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2015
    That small part you added on to the omake was such a tease. Can't wait for the chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2015
    At first I was annoyed the drama from the piercings and the time with Mari and Sora were skipped over, but the fact you're improving the speed of releases and the omake was separated due to your stated length for the next chapter makes up for it. Hell, maybe the time with those girls can be touched in another omake.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2015
    Nice omake. I hope Rei's in the next chapter.
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  • From Arkblazer on March 23, 2015
    disappointing chapter, little H and angst angst angst angst. Really, still feels like a deconstruction of this type of lemons than a straight up lemon. and even worst YOU SKIPPED THE WHOLE Mari sequence!!!??? REally!? probably the hottest part on the whole lemon and you just skipped it!? So disappointing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2015
    Guess I'm just spoiled by your normally really long omakes, but this feels really short. Can hardly wait for the full chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2015
    I don't understand why Shinji's "Evil" side looks the way he does, I understand Asuka's but not Shinji's. Is it the way Shinji wants to look and act? I think he's just putting on a show to be honest.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2015
    I used to wonder if some of this stuff was ever done consentually in real life. Then I found queensnake, which makes some of this stuff seem tame in comparison. They stuff their pussies with conkers, thumb tacks, hot wax, and rocks, and shoot each other's pussies with BB guns and whip them with nettles, among other things. It's crazy.
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  • From ANON - ks on February 23, 2015
    This is the first time I've ever rage quit a fanfic. Coming from someone who's read a wide variety of rape and torture fics without feeling anything other than "meh", that is quite the achievement. I salute you.
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  • From ANON - Some Guy on January 25, 2015
    Would you be willing to do a Japanese to English Translation comission?

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2015
    Nice change of pace to go back to a relatively more relaxed time to break up the hardcore stuff. Extreme stuff followed by extreme stuff would only lessen the blow when something brutal happens, and it's great you're posting something like this to tide us over until the main story continues. It'll be great to get back onto Asuka adjusting to life pierced and I'm curious to see how you can hurt her nipples harder than that. I do agree with the other guy who suggested focusing on other characters. There's always Rei, and bringing Hikari into slavery would be awesome, especially considering the mental torture to Asuka it would bring.
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  • From ANON - wacha! on January 17, 2015
    The writing and legnth are all epic, but it's too much of the same thing. I find myself skimming through it to see if there's anything different, and then leaving disappointent when it's more of the same thing. I recommend doing something with Yui and Musashi, and perhaps Shinji coming home and hearing noises and then seeing his mother and Musashi screwing each other or something along the lines of the original. I've definitely had enough of reading about asuka in this story. Thanks for posting a new chapter anyway, but you need to do something different in this story.
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