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Reviews for Empathic Adventures

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  • From ANON - Christopher on January 11, 2012
    A good story, but the latest chapter did not properly format itself, so you might want to reupload it.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 10, 2012
    Good chap, nice and long but I think you could have done with out the deerling part and put in something else
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 08, 2012
    Well this chap is certanly darker then the others, if Ash does save Misty I think she should go back to kanto because is would be too akward to have her come with Ash and his group.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 07, 2012
    I think you should have Ash finish Misty off once and for all, have him just compleatly shatter her heart so she knows she'll never be with Ash. And I have to ask whitch costume is May wearing, is it her red one from advanced or her green one from pearl?
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 06, 2012
    Ok good chap plenty of detail, I do have some ideas that you could use in coming chapters:
    Riley meets up with Ash and his pary
    Ash caches a wild riolu, lucario or medicham or one thats running from team rocket, J or N
    Ash and Iris or Ash and Zoey have a battle to see if one of them join the aura sisters
    Ash and Zoey have a battle with their anchors cause lets be honest Zoey could learn alot from a powerful trainer like Ash
    Ash has an aura vision about the day one of his kids starts their pokemon jorney
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  • From ANON - Nanapriss on January 06, 2012
    I would first like to say that I love this story. It is a very unique idea and has continued to surprise me many times. I hope you keep up the good work.
    Having said that, I do have a few things I would like to say. First being that some of the scenes seemed to be rushed or passed over to quickly, and I can understand that going completely into some scenes would make your job harder but it could as some more depth, this problem can of course be solved in the future by going back and slightly redoing the chapters.
    My second comment is like the first in that I could like for the adult scenes to be a little more detailed; that can be fixed in the same manor as the first.
    Third is the traditional criticism, there are minor spelling errors or grammar mistakes. These is only notice when I reread a chapter and they are far and few between.
    I do hope that this minor things I said hope to make the story better and I will continue to read Empathic Adventures until it is finished. Finally I do have a question, after having chased Ash for so long, has Jessie of Team Rocket ever been affected by Ash's Aura that may in the end turn her to his side? It may not make her want to sleep with him but give her a change in personality and fight the other members of Team Rocket (though James and Meowth might side with Jessie). If this is not the case, I do kind of hope that it could happen in the future.

    Thanks for taking the time to read my review and keep up the great work.
    Nanapriss
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 05, 2012
    Ok, good long chapter, good cliffhanger But remember what I said about Zoey and Ash having more then 4 girls.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 02, 2012
    That was a good chap, just for funr I think Ash and May should have a waiger on their match
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  • From Martialartsmaster on December 30, 2011
    good chap, but I think zoe has been strung along quite enough, in the next one or two chapters you should have her catch up to them and spend the whole thing with zoe trying to convince dawn to continue with contests or try to understand aura and the join the group to keep Dawn in shape with her contest skills.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on December 28, 2011
    Good long chap glad Angie's parents won't be a problem anymore. Also didn't Angie catch a Braviary in Acquiring an Anchor?

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  • From Martialartsmaster on December 27, 2011
    Another good chap, glade to see it's longer then most of the others. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Nauran on December 26, 2011
    I'd like to know if you'd ever think of unblocking me... Hmm?
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  • From Martialartsmaster on December 16, 2011
    It was a good chapter, long and had plenty of drama and good cliffhanger
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  • From ANON - Christopher on December 09, 2011
    A good story, but I don't like the 'control the aura' thing that is coming into the story. If Aura was meant to be 'controlled' all the time, to be blunt, people would be BORN with control of it. The natural and normal state of Aura is therefore apparently supposed to be uncontrolled, logically and 'controlling' it is the worst thing that some people could do.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on December 09, 2011
    Nice long chapter and a good cliffhanger. Too bad you can't make them all that long. I'm glad to see you accepted my idea of having Ash's aura taken out of Iris. I also like how warped my original idea.
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