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Reviews for Empathic Adventures

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From Martialartsmaster on December 01, 2011
    Good chapter, I liked the smut scene. I think you should have Ash learn how he can pull his aura out of Iris. I think it's funny that I'm 71% of your reviewership.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on November 30, 2011
    Good chapter but you could have explained how Angie woke Ash up.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on November 17, 2011
    Iris can't become an aura sister it would be too weird. she's a little kid and if she did become one who would Ash argue with for comedic releafe? Also Cilan needs an anchor pokemon, everyone's sending thiers out and he sends out cannon foder in the last battle with J. Also you could be more descriptive with the sex scenes.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on November 11, 2011
    Good story but you miss understand I don't want Dawn to leave but I also don't want Zoey to join the aura sisters. And don't ad Misy the the aura sisters she's to tempermental. Four girls are enough for Ash.
    You could have Dawn and Zoey sleep together and then have Zoey fall for Dawn like kenny.
    And for a lemon you could some oral or 69ing or some anal.

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  • From Martialartsmaster on November 09, 2011
    It's a good story and I think zoey/dawn would make a nice par and ash has enough GFs
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  • From whaywood13 on August 24, 2011
    I Like How you Protray Iris in your story.
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  • From ANON - Mega man on August 09, 2011
    It needs a little more adult contant for this site other than that it is very good
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